for Lost Artworks of the Moonlit Hour12/25/2020 c21 TheJesterCard
I’m usually somewhat skeptical of a crossover-OC main character fanfic, however I think this is really well-done. The mixing of Persona and DN Angel mythos is awesome? I never would have thought of it but it is very interesting.
Also the OC, Nagi, is rather fun. I can’t really explain why in words (I just woke up and read this new chapter, I’m not awake enough for that lol) but he has an enjoyable “inner voice.” I’m very excited to see where you go with this story.
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
I’m usually somewhat skeptical of a crossover-OC main character fanfic, however I think this is really well-done. The mixing of Persona and DN Angel mythos is awesome? I never would have thought of it but it is very interesting.
Also the OC, Nagi, is rather fun. I can’t really explain why in words (I just woke up and read this new chapter, I’m not awake enough for that lol) but he has an enjoyable “inner voice.” I’m very excited to see where you go with this story.
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
12/24/2020 c21 NazgulBelserion
well after reading this and trying it review It's ok the MC is boring and really that's it he's just Boring and Weak atleast for me also idk if this is Slash or Not so also that apart from that it's not. as just very boring
well after reading this and trying it review It's ok the MC is boring and really that's it he's just Boring and Weak atleast for me also idk if this is Slash or Not so also that apart from that it's not. as just very boring
12/22/2020 c20 
57ShadowPillow
I like the lore collection here, and it makes me realize that the Persona and DN Angel verses much more similar than I first thought. I was surprised that Dark took the explanation so much in stride, but I guess with this explanation he was able to internalize it as "one more magic thing to deal with", since you could see the Dark Hour as basically another, but maybe larger, artwork to seal away that someone created. This is pretty cool.
Also. "making sure to control his inner fanboy at seeing Dark again" - Nagi you mean your "totally-not-gay-response" at seeing Dark. I'm still cracking up at how Nagi had to instinctively defend his sexuality as soon as he saw Dark in rl the first time.
57ShadowPillowI like the lore collection here, and it makes me realize that the Persona and DN Angel verses much more similar than I first thought. I was surprised that Dark took the explanation so much in stride, but I guess with this explanation he was able to internalize it as "one more magic thing to deal with", since you could see the Dark Hour as basically another, but maybe larger, artwork to seal away that someone created. This is pretty cool.
Also. "making sure to control his inner fanboy at seeing Dark again" - Nagi you mean your "totally-not-gay-response" at seeing Dark. I'm still cracking up at how Nagi had to instinctively defend his sexuality as soon as he saw Dark in rl the first time.
12/21/2020 c19 ShadowPillow
"After all, if we live in a world where kids can inherit a family curse that activates through magic love genes, then nothing is impossible." Splendiforous.
And aww. They are becoming friends. Daisuke is really so naive and honest – even if he's also a phantom thief? It shows here. And I'm glad Nagi could confide in someone now.
"After all, if we live in a world where kids can inherit a family curse that activates through magic love genes, then nothing is impossible." Splendiforous.
And aww. They are becoming friends. Daisuke is really so naive and honest – even if he's also a phantom thief? It shows here. And I'm glad Nagi could confide in someone now.
11/27/2020 c16 ShadowPillow
Yeahh boy you figured it out! Maybe you can learn some magic feather stuff from Dark too. Maybe.
Yeahh boy you figured it out! Maybe you can learn some magic feather stuff from Dark too. Maybe.
11/26/2020 c15 ShadowPillow
Aaaah.
He could ask Dark to help seal her away. I think that is another kind of death... but at least it is on their own terms, and it feels more gentle.
That's a hard blow.
Anyway. I've really enjoyed reading this, I hope you can tell, and I hope to see many more updates from you! This is a super cool story and I've had a laugh of grins and laughs and some sombre moods already. I like Nagi, and I like his budding friendships. All and all an awesome story, keep up the good work my dude.
Aaaah.
He could ask Dark to help seal her away. I think that is another kind of death... but at least it is on their own terms, and it feels more gentle.
That's a hard blow.
Anyway. I've really enjoyed reading this, I hope you can tell, and I hope to see many more updates from you! This is a super cool story and I've had a laugh of grins and laughs and some sombre moods already. I like Nagi, and I like his budding friendships. All and all an awesome story, keep up the good work my dude.
11/26/2020 c14 ShadowPillow
I... just realized that Krad is Dark spelled backwards. It took me this many years. It completely explains the origins of that prissy name.
Also, this chapter was also awesome, as well as all the previous ones. Krad taking an interest in Nagi worries me... but I'm also heartened that Nagi decided to actively participate in this, since, given his task by Igor and his involvement in the Dark Hour, he really can't stand aside anymore. And friends! Yay, a journey for self-identity through action and personal growth! I feel like him stepping forward and actively helping dark was an active step in that.
Speaking of that, I wonder what Dark thinks about this random kid helping them. Bet Dark also senses something off or different about him.
I... just realized that Krad is Dark spelled backwards. It took me this many years. It completely explains the origins of that prissy name.
Also, this chapter was also awesome, as well as all the previous ones. Krad taking an interest in Nagi worries me... but I'm also heartened that Nagi decided to actively participate in this, since, given his task by Igor and his involvement in the Dark Hour, he really can't stand aside anymore. And friends! Yay, a journey for self-identity through action and personal growth! I feel like him stepping forward and actively helping dark was an active step in that.
Speaking of that, I wonder what Dark thinks about this random kid helping them. Bet Dark also senses something off or different about him.
11/26/2020 c4 ShadowPillow
Okay, that moment of revelation was so beautiful too. I have a wide grin on my face. Thank you for writing this. The nostalgia truck is hitting me too. And I'm glad Nagi doesn't know all the details; it makes his involvement... more normal? I think. I already liked seeing him talk with Daisuke and Satoshi without knowing, it gives a genuine outside perspective. I hope he's able to keep his normal school life – mostly! – and also get involved with some more crazy shenanigans. He stumbled into this strange corner of life now, after all, already.
Okay, that moment of revelation was so beautiful too. I have a wide grin on my face. Thank you for writing this. The nostalgia truck is hitting me too. And I'm glad Nagi doesn't know all the details; it makes his involvement... more normal? I think. I already liked seeing him talk with Daisuke and Satoshi without knowing, it gives a genuine outside perspective. I hope he's able to keep his normal school life – mostly! – and also get involved with some more crazy shenanigans. He stumbled into this strange corner of life now, after all, already.
11/26/2020 c3 ShadowPillow
This is beautiful. This is so beautiful. And no, I really didn't notice either when I was a kid. Were those the actual dialogue lines? because holy crap. I need to rewatch this show.
Nagi's reaction was hilarious and honestly completely understandable.
This is beautiful. This is so beautiful. And no, I really didn't notice either when I was a kid. Were those the actual dialogue lines? because holy crap. I need to rewatch this show.
Nagi's reaction was hilarious and honestly completely understandable.
11/17/2020 c14 Phantom0408
I love this. I need MOARRRRRRRR! Anyway, keep up the good work. I can't wait for more of this.
I love this. I need MOARRRRRRRR! Anyway, keep up the good work. I can't wait for more of this.