for Helluva Wizard5/11 c18 Kitten Arina
While I have been enjoying this, in my opinion you are taking to long to get to his Hogwart years.
While I have been enjoying this, in my opinion you are taking to long to get to his Hogwart years.
5/4 c82 Sword Of The Incorruptible
Gotta genuine question, if it is not very spoilery. Since you have shown the basilisk to be fully sentient, as it should have been portrayed in the movie, and given that harry is a dragon demon, will you have him, more or less, reach an agreement with her rather than kill her? Cause honestly, I feel like him somehow sparing her could lead to some very interesting stuff. But, you are the writer, so it is your choice. Awesome story btw.
Gotta genuine question, if it is not very spoilery. Since you have shown the basilisk to be fully sentient, as it should have been portrayed in the movie, and given that harry is a dragon demon, will you have him, more or less, reach an agreement with her rather than kill her? Cause honestly, I feel like him somehow sparing her could lead to some very interesting stuff. But, you are the writer, so it is your choice. Awesome story btw.
4/24 c82 
30kazikamikaze24
Hermione in heaven would be interesting. Maybe a mini Exterminator? But it'd be hilarious to see her in Hell adjusting/tormenting Harry when he goes home.
30kazikamikaze24Hermione in heaven would be interesting. Maybe a mini Exterminator? But it'd be hilarious to see her in Hell adjusting/tormenting Harry when he goes home.
4/21 c81 8Digitize27
The Parseltongue reveal came off a bit forced. Understandable that you'd want to do the scene altered to reflect this Harry's personality, but him telling a snake to fuck off just... makes no sense. Harry in canon had talked to snakes before, so him telling one to stay away from the other kids makes sense. This Harry, as far as the reader knows, has never had any conversations with snakes before, so why would he address it in the first place? It would be much more in character for this Harry to swiftly dispatch a summoned snake the moment it appeared, considering he has both the ability and disposition to do so (A cutting curse and the reflexes/accuracy to hit a Cornish pixie out of the air means it wouldn't even be difficult).
8Digitize27The Parseltongue reveal came off a bit forced. Understandable that you'd want to do the scene altered to reflect this Harry's personality, but him telling a snake to fuck off just... makes no sense. Harry in canon had talked to snakes before, so him telling one to stay away from the other kids makes sense. This Harry, as far as the reader knows, has never had any conversations with snakes before, so why would he address it in the first place? It would be much more in character for this Harry to swiftly dispatch a summoned snake the moment it appeared, considering he has both the ability and disposition to do so (A cutting curse and the reflexes/accuracy to hit a Cornish pixie out of the air means it wouldn't even be difficult).
4/20 c27 Digitize27
£1,000 is quite a meagre amount to put aside for childcare, even in 1980. That's about the equivilant of £5,000 today, which while not nothing is barely enough to cover the expenses of a child for around half a year.
£1,000 is quite a meagre amount to put aside for childcare, even in 1980. That's about the equivilant of £5,000 today, which while not nothing is barely enough to cover the expenses of a child for around half a year.
4/19 c82 fallendemon248
Rip Hermione granger, and I'm sure some will blame Harry because he wasn't in bed and out of the school
Rip Hermione granger, and I'm sure some will blame Harry because he wasn't in bed and out of the school
4/16 c80 5JediJaras
Re: Chapter 82, I didn’t say anything about Hermione in my last review because I wasn’t sure if she was actually dying or just being petrified. If she does die, I don’t know what the writer intends, but I see two scenarios:
1. She becomes a Sinner and likely ends up at the Hazbin Hotel to try and get into Heaven, meeting Sirius and likely even I.M.P at some point.
2. She becomes a Winner and meets James and Lily Potter (and in a worst case scenario, joins the Exorcists like they did.)
Either way, she might also meet Lilith in person for the first time, and might get a bit more perspective on Harry’s life up to this point.
5JediJarasRe: Chapter 82, I didn’t say anything about Hermione in my last review because I wasn’t sure if she was actually dying or just being petrified. If she does die, I don’t know what the writer intends, but I see two scenarios:
1. She becomes a Sinner and likely ends up at the Hazbin Hotel to try and get into Heaven, meeting Sirius and likely even I.M.P at some point.
2. She becomes a Winner and meets James and Lily Potter (and in a worst case scenario, joins the Exorcists like they did.)
Either way, she might also meet Lilith in person for the first time, and might get a bit more perspective on Harry’s life up to this point.
4/16 c82 iamshinydragonmist
still waiting for Hermione's misunderstandings of harry to be cleared to her
still waiting for Hermione's misunderstandings of harry to be cleared to her
4/16 c82 random reader768
Oh crap, did Hermione just die for real?! Well, this might see the school get shut down, at least for a while, Also, death isn't something to be feared as much in this universe, since Harry has a direct line to the afterlife, maybe we'll see Hermione again somehow. Not sure if she would get into Heaven though...
Oh crap, did Hermione just die for real?! Well, this might see the school get shut down, at least for a while, Also, death isn't something to be feared as much in this universe, since Harry has a direct line to the afterlife, maybe we'll see Hermione again somehow. Not sure if she would get into Heaven though...