for Void Given Form - ABANDONED, explanation chapter 27 Bonus, 288/10/2022 c28 Dayside
One of the most interesting crossover fics I've seen regarding DxD. Wish you'd rewrite it or something.
One of the most interesting crossover fics I've seen regarding DxD. Wish you'd rewrite it or something.
8/10/2022 c12 Dayside
This felt really fucking strange. He was very good at keeping himself hidden but now all of a sudden how just shows shit like he's a stupid shounen protagonist.
This felt really fucking strange. He was very good at keeping himself hidden but now all of a sudden how just shows shit like he's a stupid shounen protagonist.
6/21/2022 c3 Guest
the knight is a true giga-chad
top scores
student council
not interested in sex
does the right thing
doesnt fail
11/10
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the knight is a true giga-chad
top scores
student council
not interested in sex
does the right thing
doesnt fail
11/10
-ඞ
4/4/2022 c18 Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R
Nice. Wish there were more stories in this … fanfiction/section like this: less focus on tits/leering at tits, more time spent on story and plot.
Like such: lemons> smut> eroticawith each step and greater attention paid here, usually at the expense of the other elements of a story).
Nice. Wish there were more stories in this … fanfiction/section like this: less focus on tits/leering at tits, more time spent on story and plot.
Like such: lemons> smut> eroticawith each step and greater attention paid here, usually at the expense of the other elements of a story).
3/15/2022 c28 pleasereadme
The object toy thing the women he's treating that way are monsters that are slightly tame demons that enjoy the negative side of things way more easily than humans do basically someone who likes to get paddled with like to be hooked up to a execution electric shock chair after they become a devil devil's media is literally porn with a plot sailor Moon magical girl b******* where she gets raped every third episode type of thing in the underworld where the reincarnated devils live that's what they watch and they consider that tame children's programming... Wouldn't that make the devils when they start becoming teenagers and hormones and stuff make them develop a lot of kinks like at least 12 for each female and wouldn't they also mistaken lust ownership control type of feelings for love you got to remember these are human beings that got their soul pretty much replaced with the instincts of a devil their consciously aware and able to control themselves but deep down some part of them wants to be the Gimp made cat girl submissive to the big strong male demon master cuz that's just the way demons naturally behave females are always looking for the strongest male and the ACT submissive and obedient and willing to fulfill the males every kink and Morton desire in exchange for being under the powerful males agus and/or control God goddesses well something similar could occur think of Zeus and his papillon literally they're f***** up psychopaths they torture they manipulate they trick the main they put people in dangerous mazes the laugh at the puny stupid mortals and they have sex on the bleeding blood covered ground from the corpses of a thousand mortals and they get off of that s*** gods and goddesses have been around so long they picked up so many kinks that it bent and twisted their perception of reality plus Naruto comes from a world that 99% of all the so-called immortals were literally agents of the evil of all the world ochimaru mad scientist Ninja sociopath psychopath obsessive compulsive with a Napoleon complex he literally a scientist trying to discover a immortality and he's a sick twisted bastard then there's pan of the rineagun hell god statue multiple bodies has a God complex suffers from PTSD has extremely unhealthy coping mechanism and he tries to become God then there's keguru whatever her name is the moon goddess of the show she literally becomes a demigod and then she goes that s*** crazy and tries to murder enslave and some versions of her rape at the same time the whole Shinobi world she wants to become one again or something by eating everyone which is really f***** up I'm just saying Naruto has been conditioned from a very long time to respond and behave and Pacific ways and if Naruto didn't stay the positive Sunshine version of himself and he failed somehow or he wasn't able to keep pushing himself to go further and he actually became a joinin or whatever then he would get his positivity and his worst quirks his positively would would be beaten out of him and his worst quirks would be expanded upon and amplified and that's why that Naruto is behaving the way he is he's literally a starved attack dog that's been beaten and trained for the dog fight of the Shinobi world.
The object toy thing the women he's treating that way are monsters that are slightly tame demons that enjoy the negative side of things way more easily than humans do basically someone who likes to get paddled with like to be hooked up to a execution electric shock chair after they become a devil devil's media is literally porn with a plot sailor Moon magical girl b******* where she gets raped every third episode type of thing in the underworld where the reincarnated devils live that's what they watch and they consider that tame children's programming... Wouldn't that make the devils when they start becoming teenagers and hormones and stuff make them develop a lot of kinks like at least 12 for each female and wouldn't they also mistaken lust ownership control type of feelings for love you got to remember these are human beings that got their soul pretty much replaced with the instincts of a devil their consciously aware and able to control themselves but deep down some part of them wants to be the Gimp made cat girl submissive to the big strong male demon master cuz that's just the way demons naturally behave females are always looking for the strongest male and the ACT submissive and obedient and willing to fulfill the males every kink and Morton desire in exchange for being under the powerful males agus and/or control God goddesses well something similar could occur think of Zeus and his papillon literally they're f***** up psychopaths they torture they manipulate they trick the main they put people in dangerous mazes the laugh at the puny stupid mortals and they have sex on the bleeding blood covered ground from the corpses of a thousand mortals and they get off of that s*** gods and goddesses have been around so long they picked up so many kinks that it bent and twisted their perception of reality plus Naruto comes from a world that 99% of all the so-called immortals were literally agents of the evil of all the world ochimaru mad scientist Ninja sociopath psychopath obsessive compulsive with a Napoleon complex he literally a scientist trying to discover a immortality and he's a sick twisted bastard then there's pan of the rineagun hell god statue multiple bodies has a God complex suffers from PTSD has extremely unhealthy coping mechanism and he tries to become God then there's keguru whatever her name is the moon goddess of the show she literally becomes a demigod and then she goes that s*** crazy and tries to murder enslave and some versions of her rape at the same time the whole Shinobi world she wants to become one again or something by eating everyone which is really f***** up I'm just saying Naruto has been conditioned from a very long time to respond and behave and Pacific ways and if Naruto didn't stay the positive Sunshine version of himself and he failed somehow or he wasn't able to keep pushing himself to go further and he actually became a joinin or whatever then he would get his positivity and his worst quirks his positively would would be beaten out of him and his worst quirks would be expanded upon and amplified and that's why that Naruto is behaving the way he is he's literally a starved attack dog that's been beaten and trained for the dog fight of the Shinobi world.
2/23/2022 c27 Cross69
so you're effectively gonna make Issei Rance, and make Knight whoop his ass multiple times? hell yes
so you're effectively gonna make Issei Rance, and make Knight whoop his ass multiple times? hell yes
2/21/2022 c28 
115The Eschaton
Wow, I know self depreciation but this is just awesome with what you did there. If you did write write a story like that, than there is no denying that it deserved the hate.
But you admit it and that's fine. At least you're not Mykan. The guy is a prick.
115The EschatonWow, I know self depreciation but this is just awesome with what you did there. If you did write write a story like that, than there is no denying that it deserved the hate.
But you admit it and that's fine. At least you're not Mykan. The guy is a prick.