for Void Given Form - ABANDONED, explanation chapter 27 Bonus, 281/13/2022 c28 007-Black-Phoenix
Amazing, That's all that I can think about this fic, i start to play hollow knight a month ago, and since i really like the characters that go there and cause chaos, i was thinking, someone must have the idea of sending Ghost or a Reincarnated with the power of Ghost to DXD, and yep, here you are, all that I can say is ththat your ideas for the fic were cool, and since you are levaing the fic, i am going to make a fic with similar ideas, your fic was spectacular and i really hope that it will have more popularity with the time or when silksong is released.
Amazing, That's all that I can think about this fic, i start to play hollow knight a month ago, and since i really like the characters that go there and cause chaos, i was thinking, someone must have the idea of sending Ghost or a Reincarnated with the power of Ghost to DXD, and yep, here you are, all that I can say is ththat your ideas for the fic were cool, and since you are levaing the fic, i am going to make a fic with similar ideas, your fic was spectacular and i really hope that it will have more popularity with the time or when silksong is released.
1/13/2022 c23 007-Black-Phoenix
I love how he say: My sister try to kill me twice, but we are friends XD
I love how he say: My sister try to kill me twice, but we are friends XD
1/12/2022 c21 007-Black-Phoenix
Hey, me encantó, esto de convencer a Riser, me acuerda bastante a Kuro que se hizo amigo de Riser.
Después de todo, si, Riser es un imbecil, pero imbéciles hay en cualquier lugar, jugando tus cartas puedes aliarte con el sujeto y de ser posible tener una ruta de comercio hacia las lágrimas de Fénix, Ravel es la segunda opción pero claro, es necesario mas tiempo aun o derrotar a Riser en un Rating game y eso seria un esfuerzo inneseario.
Hey, me encantó, esto de convencer a Riser, me acuerda bastante a Kuro que se hizo amigo de Riser.
Después de todo, si, Riser es un imbecil, pero imbéciles hay en cualquier lugar, jugando tus cartas puedes aliarte con el sujeto y de ser posible tener una ruta de comercio hacia las lágrimas de Fénix, Ravel es la segunda opción pero claro, es necesario mas tiempo aun o derrotar a Riser en un Rating game y eso seria un esfuerzo inneseario.
1/12/2022 c21 007-Black-Phoenix
Curiosamente el vacío de Hollow knight también es considerado el poder de las sombras o la oscuridad, si tengo que pensar en una habilidad de DXD que se parezca a la del vacío de Hollow knight, probablemente sea Canis Lycaon, pero en una muy pequeña medida.
Curiosamente el vacío de Hollow knight también es considerado el poder de las sombras o la oscuridad, si tengo que pensar en una habilidad de DXD que se parezca a la del vacío de Hollow knight, probablemente sea Canis Lycaon, pero en una muy pequeña medida.
12/24/2021 c27 Xero the Reaper
This story was... not bad... the favorite part of mine was how Knight wasn't turned into Rias' slave and Asia didn't become a devil
What was the least favorite part of the story for me? Everyone said "Let's," a lot! I think I counted 21!
This story was... not bad... the favorite part of mine was how Knight wasn't turned into Rias' slave and Asia didn't become a devil
What was the least favorite part of the story for me? Everyone said "Let's," a lot! I think I counted 21!
12/12/2021 c28 Guest
That bonus was amazing, Ive seen way too many fics like that.
That bonus was amazing, Ive seen way too many fics like that.
12/8/2021 c28 arsenijcelnokov37
Dear author, I would like to thank you. No seriously, you are the light of hope that paints this world with different colors thanks to the stories you write. I have no words and I am overwhelmed with absolutely all positive emotions. You are the one who does not follow the standard script and make the canon story go the other way, which is a huge plus. Thanks for your stories, thanks for just being there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter in Void Given Form. Good luck
Dear author, I would like to thank you. No seriously, you are the light of hope that paints this world with different colors thanks to the stories you write. I have no words and I am overwhelmed with absolutely all positive emotions. You are the one who does not follow the standard script and make the canon story go the other way, which is a huge plus. Thanks for your stories, thanks for just being there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter in Void Given Form. Good luck
12/8/2021 c28 
5MortemPlasmon
I salute your sacrifice o7 for I have not read them either. I only found this from the Hollow Knight side lol
5MortemPlasmonI salute your sacrifice o7 for I have not read them either. I only found this from the Hollow Knight side lol
12/6/2021 c28 Don Obvion
Sere honesto, no lei el fic y solo entre porque me dio curiosidad "abandonada", entro a leer la explicacion del 27 por curiosidad y luego me encuentro con el cap 28 el cual me parece una maravilla 10/10. Gracias por sacarme una sonrisa.
Sere honesto, no lei el fic y solo entre porque me dio curiosidad "abandonada", entro a leer la explicacion del 27 por curiosidad y luego me encuentro con el cap 28 el cual me parece una maravilla 10/10. Gracias por sacarme una sonrisa.
12/6/2021 c28 Poharan
If you want information about dxd just ask, i recommend to read the DXD Zero, in the perspective of a young Sirzechs and what happen before 500 years in the civil war.
If you want information about dxd just ask, i recommend to read the DXD Zero, in the perspective of a young Sirzechs and what happen before 500 years in the civil war.
12/6/2021 c28 Phantom Thief of Hearts
Personally I think that the manga is much better than the anime (the manga is more faithful to the light novel) and better than the light novel (it is not necessary to constantly read the thoughts of the pervert). If I remember correctly the manga is in the Sitri vs Gremory in the youth tournament.
I even think that in the manga, Riser is much better than the anime version and the light novel version of him.
I fully agree with this chapter 28, that's the cruel reality in Naruto / Dxd fanfics(and 99.99% dxd fanfics), if you're lucky there may be some decent fanfics but those are very rare and die quickly.
But there are fanfics worse than Naruto / DxD(and 99.99% dxd fanfics) wish fulfillment fanfics and those are Gamer fanfics and worst of all are ... Gamer "Naruto" fanfics (run, bitch, run!... XD)
I would like to give examples of those bad fanfics and writers who use "Naruto" only for favorites and followers but I think that it is not worth the time to make a black list (XD) (some of those writers are so cheeky to say that it is so "Naruto" in an official one-shot of the series)
...Does issei have redemptive qualities? Ishibumi was never able to use him properly and any decent character development was totally ignored (supposedly issei was traumatized from being killed by Raynare aka personalityless bitch, but that trauma was not well used and developed, it was just something which arose completely at random).
Even issei's parents have more redeeming qualities than issei (XD).
I like Sairaorg, Vali and Tobio more than issei.
good luck, ediros ... waiting if possible a P5 fanfic written by you
Personally I think that the manga is much better than the anime (the manga is more faithful to the light novel) and better than the light novel (it is not necessary to constantly read the thoughts of the pervert). If I remember correctly the manga is in the Sitri vs Gremory in the youth tournament.
I even think that in the manga, Riser is much better than the anime version and the light novel version of him.
I fully agree with this chapter 28, that's the cruel reality in Naruto / Dxd fanfics(and 99.99% dxd fanfics), if you're lucky there may be some decent fanfics but those are very rare and die quickly.
But there are fanfics worse than Naruto / DxD(and 99.99% dxd fanfics) wish fulfillment fanfics and those are Gamer fanfics and worst of all are ... Gamer "Naruto" fanfics (run, bitch, run!... XD)
I would like to give examples of those bad fanfics and writers who use "Naruto" only for favorites and followers but I think that it is not worth the time to make a black list (XD) (some of those writers are so cheeky to say that it is so "Naruto" in an official one-shot of the series)
...Does issei have redemptive qualities? Ishibumi was never able to use him properly and any decent character development was totally ignored (supposedly issei was traumatized from being killed by Raynare aka personalityless bitch, but that trauma was not well used and developed, it was just something which arose completely at random).
Even issei's parents have more redeeming qualities than issei (XD).
I like Sairaorg, Vali and Tobio more than issei.
good luck, ediros ... waiting if possible a P5 fanfic written by you
12/6/2021 c28 9RenegadeForLife
Good luck with reading that. I respect your commitment. The MC is so annoying I could barely watch or read any of the canon DxD before giving it up. Which is a shame because the world itself seems really cool but I guess that's what fanfics are for. I really like some DxD fanfics a lot but you have to wade through a lot of pervy wish fulfillment garbage to find the good ones. The setting of Highschool DxD is so interesting that it makes it easy to forget that the show is not only a harem but an ecchi harem which isn't exactly a recipe for good character writing. It's borderline impossible to write ecchi harem girls with realistic personalities or depth. The best most shows can do is give them a sort of interesting backstory and hope fans ignore how generic they are when said backstory isn't being directly referenced.
This oneshot reminds me of a story called the quirky villain. I was really excited to read the highest rated Naruto BNHA fanfic but the first chapter had Naruto sexually assaulting a hero and playing it off like some witty prank. That's not quirky, that's just gross. Even Jiraiya would probably be ashamed.
In any case, regardless of whether you end up continuing this story thanks for what you've written so far. It's been fun.
9RenegadeForLifeGood luck with reading that. I respect your commitment. The MC is so annoying I could barely watch or read any of the canon DxD before giving it up. Which is a shame because the world itself seems really cool but I guess that's what fanfics are for. I really like some DxD fanfics a lot but you have to wade through a lot of pervy wish fulfillment garbage to find the good ones. The setting of Highschool DxD is so interesting that it makes it easy to forget that the show is not only a harem but an ecchi harem which isn't exactly a recipe for good character writing. It's borderline impossible to write ecchi harem girls with realistic personalities or depth. The best most shows can do is give them a sort of interesting backstory and hope fans ignore how generic they are when said backstory isn't being directly referenced.
This oneshot reminds me of a story called the quirky villain. I was really excited to read the highest rated Naruto BNHA fanfic but the first chapter had Naruto sexually assaulting a hero and playing it off like some witty prank. That's not quirky, that's just gross. Even Jiraiya would probably be ashamed.
In any case, regardless of whether you end up continuing this story thanks for what you've written so far. It's been fun.
12/6/2021 c28 GrumpyGrue
This sounds like a good fic. Would fav it despite the flaws listed here. I hate Rias and what she stands for, and to a lesser extent Issei, his perviness being a side note but weighty still. A quick death that gives him no spotlight is absolutely fine, but I wouldn't shy away from a gruesome torturing of him. I have lots of good reasons, but don't care to get into an extensive debate them because I already did that on QQ and Akun, and don't want to repeat myself. Akeno too, can only give offer her so much pity for who she's become before she becomes deserving of hate. Being the attack dog of devils (evil and manipulative af leaders) since childhood gives her a bit of a pass, but the world would be better off if degenerates like her didn't exist, or were at least broken in and reeducated. Women deserve to be treated like objects if they're terrible enough. The bystanders didn't need to die, but if they pulled out their phones and started filming a superpowered fight from up close, they deserved it.
This sounds like a good fic. Would fav it despite the flaws listed here. I hate Rias and what she stands for, and to a lesser extent Issei, his perviness being a side note but weighty still. A quick death that gives him no spotlight is absolutely fine, but I wouldn't shy away from a gruesome torturing of him. I have lots of good reasons, but don't care to get into an extensive debate them because I already did that on QQ and Akun, and don't want to repeat myself. Akeno too, can only give offer her so much pity for who she's become before she becomes deserving of hate. Being the attack dog of devils (evil and manipulative af leaders) since childhood gives her a bit of a pass, but the world would be better off if degenerates like her didn't exist, or were at least broken in and reeducated. Women deserve to be treated like objects if they're terrible enough. The bystanders didn't need to die, but if they pulled out their phones and started filming a superpowered fight from up close, they deserved it.
12/6/2021 c27 MudSoldier
Chapter 28 is the reason why pass any crossover with Naruto as protagonist.
Bravo you just resumed all what is wrong with Naruto crossovers.
It was excellent chapter thank you.
Chapter 28 is the reason why pass any crossover with Naruto as protagonist.
Bravo you just resumed all what is wrong with Naruto crossovers.
It was excellent chapter thank you.