for Void Given Form - ABANDONED, explanation chapter 27 Bonus, 2812/3/2021 c27 
1Arkadian97
Thank you for fixing mess called by high school dxd. I always hated how they made look devil kind, peerage system and issei good. About Riser, you actually gave me an enlightenment. I always thinking as a trash but now looking into it, he's actually better than Issei!. I wish you still contiune this story. Its not masterpiece but still amazing. And let me tell you Knight definitly not Gary stu, writing emotinless good characters always hard but I think you give him really good personality.
I also wanted to try same thing like you, having Zeltrech teach seven people who hate supernatural world magecraft and let them start grail war from boredom. (main character was going to be stray devil) But I never started to because my main knowlege came from fanfictions. But now I learned you also same with me, maybe I should also try:)
1Arkadian97Thank you for fixing mess called by high school dxd. I always hated how they made look devil kind, peerage system and issei good. About Riser, you actually gave me an enlightenment. I always thinking as a trash but now looking into it, he's actually better than Issei!. I wish you still contiune this story. Its not masterpiece but still amazing. And let me tell you Knight definitly not Gary stu, writing emotinless good characters always hard but I think you give him really good personality.
I also wanted to try same thing like you, having Zeltrech teach seven people who hate supernatural world magecraft and let them start grail war from boredom. (main character was going to be stray devil) But I never started to because my main knowlege came from fanfictions. But now I learned you also same with me, maybe I should also try:)
11/18/2021 c19 1Crusada de Lata
Amazing fanfiction, love how it builds the Knight's character and has pretty solid character interactions and world building. Pretty much what I wish crossovers were more of. Definitely a recommend to anyone starting out with crossover fanfiction or just very tired of all the Naruto crossovers kmao
1Crusada de LataAmazing fanfiction, love how it builds the Knight's character and has pretty solid character interactions and world building. Pretty much what I wish crossovers were more of. Definitely a recommend to anyone starting out with crossover fanfiction or just very tired of all the Naruto crossovers kmao
9/20/2021 c27 Kiyama
This is quite sad, this story has potential, i mean more than the tons of naruto and dxd crossover in this site, those are garbarge, except a couple who really dont interact with the main cast.
I dont think this need a rewrite because in the end he had good interactions, you probably was right about the knight becoming a Gary Stu, but finally he help the others by casuality more than morality.
The fact of this becoming slowly a harem was bittersweet, i think the love interest in this story should be just Ophis, i mean both void's beings are terrible with words and dont undertand nothing about feelings, you can do a lot of comedy with that; i mean i dont have anything against Koneko or Ravel, more than that i think Ravel is one best girls in the serie, but i can see Knight broking their heart because he dont undertand and dont know about the love.
This was a great and i hope you back to write this.
This is quite sad, this story has potential, i mean more than the tons of naruto and dxd crossover in this site, those are garbarge, except a couple who really dont interact with the main cast.
I dont think this need a rewrite because in the end he had good interactions, you probably was right about the knight becoming a Gary Stu, but finally he help the others by casuality more than morality.
The fact of this becoming slowly a harem was bittersweet, i think the love interest in this story should be just Ophis, i mean both void's beings are terrible with words and dont undertand nothing about feelings, you can do a lot of comedy with that; i mean i dont have anything against Koneko or Ravel, more than that i think Ravel is one best girls in the serie, but i can see Knight broking their heart because he dont undertand and dont know about the love.
This was a great and i hope you back to write this.
8/26/2021 c6 Degurechaff Gintoki
What epic stories I just found. I didn't know what to read anymore, and I found this.
What epic stories I just found. I didn't know what to read anymore, and I found this.
7/11/2021 c27 Dragoncat261
May this great story Rest In Peace. Or hopefully be picked up again... okay in all seriousness I loved loved this story, there are just so few like it and it’s a shame to see it come to an end, left unfinished. But that’s how life works so I’m just going to have to deal with it. On another note is it just me that imaged the Knight going shade lord during one of the more climactic battles and basically decimating them all? And before you all start complaining about that remember that multiple times extremely powerful characters either were compared to the knight or had some comment on the void, heck Ophis said near the start of the fanfic that the void was as old or nearly as old as she was, which is impressive all things considered.
May this great story Rest In Peace. Or hopefully be picked up again... okay in all seriousness I loved loved this story, there are just so few like it and it’s a shame to see it come to an end, left unfinished. But that’s how life works so I’m just going to have to deal with it. On another note is it just me that imaged the Knight going shade lord during one of the more climactic battles and basically decimating them all? And before you all start complaining about that remember that multiple times extremely powerful characters either were compared to the knight or had some comment on the void, heck Ophis said near the start of the fanfic that the void was as old or nearly as old as she was, which is impressive all things considered.
5/17/2021 c21 2Snazzy Snake
By far the absolute best way to possibly break off the marriage I have read so far. Pure logic delivered bluntly without a care in regards to the stations of those involved.
2Snazzy SnakeBy far the absolute best way to possibly break off the marriage I have read so far. Pure logic delivered bluntly without a care in regards to the stations of those involved.
5/15/2021 c27 Skyegrave
Oh, so that's why it seemed a bit weird, your grasp on the characters. Hmmm, welp, trusting a character via fanfiction is a surefire way to forget other aspects of them that existed within the story.
Oh, so that's why it seemed a bit weird, your grasp on the characters. Hmmm, welp, trusting a character via fanfiction is a surefire way to forget other aspects of them that existed within the story.
4/2/2021 c27 9dark platinum
A pity at the moment I will be left with the doubt of how the other characters would be
9dark platinumA pity at the moment I will be left with the doubt of how the other characters would be
3/31/2021 c27 raven2327
can you add DROPPED to this some where i just read from chapter 1 to here to find out you dropped this if i knew it was dropped i wound not have read it
can you add DROPPED to this some where i just read from chapter 1 to here to find out you dropped this if i knew it was dropped i wound not have read it
3/22/2021 c13 Apple89123
this dot dot dot speech has become cringe as well because that only really worked when the MC answered with single words only. Now he is just talking normally but you are still putting ... before every sentence, this is why it has become cringe.
this dot dot dot speech has become cringe as well because that only really worked when the MC answered with single words only. Now he is just talking normally but you are still putting ... before every sentence, this is why it has become cringe.