for The Tales Of A New Olympian12/2 c29 Haloman5988
this chapter... gold.
see this is the stuff.
ps. Is "Fierce Charlie" a good writer name for fanfiction?
also, as a pilot myself, don't make the mistake i did and apply for fighter pilot. not as awesome as Top Gun. less volleyball and sexy blondes, more missile and parachute training
this chapter... gold.
see this is the stuff.
ps. Is "Fierce Charlie" a good writer name for fanfiction?
also, as a pilot myself, don't make the mistake i did and apply for fighter pilot. not as awesome as Top Gun. less volleyball and sexy blondes, more missile and parachute training
12/2 c28 Haloman5988
is something going to happen with Artemis or what?
also can you send me the link to the Discord. im starting my own Percy Jackson series, and want some advice from the Masters. you included
is something going to happen with Artemis or what?
also can you send me the link to the Discord. im starting my own Percy Jackson series, and want some advice from the Masters. you included
11/3 c24 Guest
Good shit
Good shit
11/1 c43 Point break
This is really an amazing story I really do think the plot is handled really well. It’s one of those I came for the smut but stayed for the plot kinda things. The handling of the characters is really good and I’m also really glad you choose to take your time rather than rush to make Percy have sex with everyone just because.
also I wasn’t originally gonna say anything but the part that says Percy lost his shirt says he he lost his shift instead. This one just bothered my more than any of the other mistakes I’ve noticed and decided to mention it.
I look forward to eventually seeing what the Reyna plot line looks like though I suspect that won’t come to fruition for a good long while so I’ll be sticking with this one
This is really an amazing story I really do think the plot is handled really well. It’s one of those I came for the smut but stayed for the plot kinda things. The handling of the characters is really good and I’m also really glad you choose to take your time rather than rush to make Percy have sex with everyone just because.
also I wasn’t originally gonna say anything but the part that says Percy lost his shirt says he he lost his shift instead. This one just bothered my more than any of the other mistakes I’ve noticed and decided to mention it.
I look forward to eventually seeing what the Reyna plot line looks like though I suspect that won’t come to fruition for a good long while so I’ll be sticking with this one
10/30 c2 
7Takamura Rules
It reads way better than when I first read this all those years ago but you still have some unsplit dialogue where two characters talk in the same paragraph and some unintentional character swaps where "Percy" is saying Poseidon's line and character action being put in dialogue brackets.
Will keep reading to see what else has changed.
7Takamura RulesIt reads way better than when I first read this all those years ago but you still have some unsplit dialogue where two characters talk in the same paragraph and some unintentional character swaps where "Percy" is saying Poseidon's line and character action being put in dialogue brackets.
Will keep reading to see what else has changed.
10/28 c17 3Blackplant
I'll read on, but I think I should mention this as a courtesy: You use of question marks (?) is quite often incorrect. You often don't use them where you should, and you also use them way too often as a substitute for the exclamation mark (!). It huts the flow of the story a bit.
3BlackplantI'll read on, but I think I should mention this as a courtesy: You use of question marks (?) is quite often incorrect. You often don't use them where you should, and you also use them way too often as a substitute for the exclamation mark (!). It huts the flow of the story a bit.
10/20 c55 Jon
If I’m honest I do miss the smut
If I’m honest I do miss the smut
10/17 c55 7Frosty Wolf
Zeus is coaching cheerleaders...I suspect he and Hera will not be on good terms for very long at this rate. Still, he took things about as well as well as I think anyone expected.
Also not surprised Percy isn't forcing Khione to put the collar back on. He's cool like that. Juniper's fate is still in question but I'm curious to see what happens next.
Thanks for the chapter! It was a lot of fun to read.
7Frosty WolfZeus is coaching cheerleaders...I suspect he and Hera will not be on good terms for very long at this rate. Still, he took things about as well as well as I think anyone expected.
Also not surprised Percy isn't forcing Khione to put the collar back on. He's cool like that. Juniper's fate is still in question but I'm curious to see what happens next.
Thanks for the chapter! It was a lot of fun to read.
10/14 c55 11Gabriel Herrol
Can Percy have a breakthrough on his godly powers? Because right now he's still at the level of a very powerful demigod, but he's still quite limited.
11Gabriel HerrolCan Percy have a breakthrough on his godly powers? Because right now he's still at the level of a very powerful demigod, but he's still quite limited.
10/14 c55 chriskidd2001
Yes another chapter in the books Uncle Hades is the best him and Percy told Zeus off poor Juniper and Mrs O'Leary
Yes another chapter in the books Uncle Hades is the best him and Percy told Zeus off poor Juniper and Mrs O'Leary
10/14 c55 Canwewrite
Another cool chapter.
This time, though, it seemed to me there were more typos/repetitions than usual. I don't know if you have a beta reader, but any anglophone could do. I'd be more than happy to do it for free, as I did for another fanfic years ago.
Another cool chapter.
This time, though, it seemed to me there were more typos/repetitions than usual. I don't know if you have a beta reader, but any anglophone could do. I'd be more than happy to do it for free, as I did for another fanfic years ago.
10/13 c55 D3VIOS
Another banger mate, I love it.
Another banger mate, I love it.