for The Tales Of A New Olympian10/20/2023 c46 Guest
Why do chapter 42, 47 and 48 not work
Why do chapter 42, 47 and 48 not work
10/16/2023 c10 Annoying guy
I like to review but it takes to much work to comment so I I’m doing this once
I like to review but it takes to much work to comment so I I’m doing this once
10/15/2023 c48 Gustrubio
Debauchery, Debauchery everywhere XD.
Things I'm curious about for the second arc:
What will be Percy's Domain (if he ever gets one).
Do we have more plot in the future or keep focus os lewdness?
Are we heading towards a happy life or someone will get hurt soon with this situation?
Can't wait for sauce and tea .
Debauchery, Debauchery everywhere XD.
Things I'm curious about for the second arc:
What will be Percy's Domain (if he ever gets one).
Do we have more plot in the future or keep focus os lewdness?
Are we heading towards a happy life or someone will get hurt soon with this situation?
Can't wait for sauce and tea .
10/14/2023 c34 Gustrubio
Huge props for Artemis in her choice of beverage, maybe I'm biased for being brazilian, but caipirinha is the best 18 drink, hands down.
Huge props for Artemis in her choice of beverage, maybe I'm biased for being brazilian, but caipirinha is the best 18 drink, hands down.
10/14/2023 c25 Gustrubio
...f this one almost made me cry , had to double take near the end, I was like: " why is my screen so blurry? Oh eyes filled to the brim with water that's why . " Dam, didn't think was going to get emotional on this fic...good job.
...f this one almost made me cry , had to double take near the end, I was like: " why is my screen so blurry? Oh eyes filled to the brim with water that's why . " Dam, didn't think was going to get emotional on this fic...good job.
10/14/2023 c20 Gustrubio
I'm trying to hack my brain to remember if this cannon ( pretty sure it is) but doesn't Percy have an aversion to alcohol, especially beer, because of smelly Gabe? Him drinking beer is the most ooc thing so far from him XD.
I'm trying to hack my brain to remember if this cannon ( pretty sure it is) but doesn't Percy have an aversion to alcohol, especially beer, because of smelly Gabe? Him drinking beer is the most ooc thing so far from him XD.
10/3/2023 c48 
7Frosty Wolf
Finally, and sadly, it would seem I'm all caught up. So far this story has been a lot of fun to read! I like how you're twisting the normal harem dynamics, even looking at Annabeth and Piper, most stories only focus on the guys relationship with his girls. So that's a nice touch! And I was wondering what you were going to do with Circe, can't imagine she'd just be stuck down there for the rest of the story.
I look forward to future chapters!
7Frosty WolfFinally, and sadly, it would seem I'm all caught up. So far this story has been a lot of fun to read! I like how you're twisting the normal harem dynamics, even looking at Annabeth and Piper, most stories only focus on the guys relationship with his girls. So that's a nice touch! And I was wondering what you were going to do with Circe, can't imagine she'd just be stuck down there for the rest of the story.
I look forward to future chapters!
10/1/2023 c42 Frosty Wolf
The talk about domains makes me wonder what Percy could end up being the god of. Good of Artemis to help out Sally like that. And I still can't tell if Apollo knows about his sisters crush or he's just being a brother about things.
Overall a very entertaining chapter.
The talk about domains makes me wonder what Percy could end up being the god of. Good of Artemis to help out Sally like that. And I still can't tell if Apollo knows about his sisters crush or he's just being a brother about things.
Overall a very entertaining chapter.
9/23/2023 c34 Frosty Wolf
On the one hand I like Artemis better, especially after what Hades tried to pull during the war with Kronos. On the other hand, assuming he's being honest about his reasons, I have to side with Hades on this.
And I'm guessing Thalia has never seen Artemis either blush or back down from a guy like that? Either way, now I'm wondering how the Hunt would react to Artemis having a crush. The mental images are hilarious!
Percy as a judge of the underworld though? That's an original idea. Though if anywhere could use someone with empathy and a sense of mercy it's there. Sadly the night ended on a sour note, but now we have a little mystery to solve.
On the one hand I like Artemis better, especially after what Hades tried to pull during the war with Kronos. On the other hand, assuming he's being honest about his reasons, I have to side with Hades on this.
And I'm guessing Thalia has never seen Artemis either blush or back down from a guy like that? Either way, now I'm wondering how the Hunt would react to Artemis having a crush. The mental images are hilarious!
Percy as a judge of the underworld though? That's an original idea. Though if anywhere could use someone with empathy and a sense of mercy it's there. Sadly the night ended on a sour note, but now we have a little mystery to solve.
9/23/2023 c33 Frosty Wolf
I guess with Gods being immortal and all that Hera doesn't get to plan too many weddings on Olympus. Part of me wants to see Artemis and Athena react to her suggestion though, it could be hilarious. I can kinda follow her logic with the former though. If there's a guy Artemis gets along better with than Percy, who isn't her brother, I don't know who it is.
Meanwhile, Percy gets his first party since his ascension! He deserves it.
I guess with Gods being immortal and all that Hera doesn't get to plan too many weddings on Olympus. Part of me wants to see Artemis and Athena react to her suggestion though, it could be hilarious. I can kinda follow her logic with the former though. If there's a guy Artemis gets along better with than Percy, who isn't her brother, I don't know who it is.
Meanwhile, Percy gets his first party since his ascension! He deserves it.
9/23/2023 c48 Guest
Im looking forward to Annabeth and Percy fucking each other in front of Circe. It will fun to see the bitch horny and wanting in on the action.
Im looking forward to Annabeth and Percy fucking each other in front of Circe. It will fun to see the bitch horny and wanting in on the action.
9/14/2023 c28 Frosty Wolf
That was a well written quest. Monster encounters, romance, drama, Percy making progress with his divine powers, and compared to canon Circe's defeat was a lot less embarrassing. Helps that one is now a god and neither are tweens anymore. And his reward for this victory? Another unwanted houseguest! Definitely true to canon there.
That was a well written quest. Monster encounters, romance, drama, Percy making progress with his divine powers, and compared to canon Circe's defeat was a lot less embarrassing. Helps that one is now a god and neither are tweens anymore. And his reward for this victory? Another unwanted houseguest! Definitely true to canon there.