
5/17/2023 c4
2Account B-145347
Chapter 4 is messed up in the middle. I think you tried updating it, because it now has two copies of the same narrative elements stuck together

Chapter 4 is messed up in the middle. I think you tried updating it, because it now has two copies of the same narrative elements stuck together
5/14/2023 c45 Jon
Great new chapter!
Disagree with the other comments that kids should be introduced any time soon
Great new chapter!
Disagree with the other comments that kids should be introduced any time soon
5/14/2023 c45 ArachnidHiveMind
Quick fact check: Piper repeatedly fought Empousa in the Blood of Olympus series, the best example being in the House of Hades when she worked to counter their charm speak (and made the Empousa start tearing each other up)
Quick fact check: Piper repeatedly fought Empousa in the Blood of Olympus series, the best example being in the House of Hades when she worked to counter their charm speak (and made the Empousa start tearing each other up)
5/14/2023 c45 chriskidd2001
Oh Piper your getting what she desired I can't wait for the next story Arch
Oh Piper your getting what she desired I can't wait for the next story Arch
5/13/2023 c45 Garfungo
Excellent chapter once again. I’m excited to see where the plot goes! Hoping to see a certain demi Titan in the future.
Excellent chapter once again. I’m excited to see where the plot goes! Hoping to see a certain demi Titan in the future.
5/13/2023 c45
11WCLC
That was hot. I wonder if Piper would get invited to a three way.
What if the next storyline? Will any of the girls get pregnant? If so, who will be the first. Imagine what the house would be like if the whole harem had Percy’s kids. Those would be some kids and the house would be chaotic.

That was hot. I wonder if Piper would get invited to a three way.
What if the next storyline? Will any of the girls get pregnant? If so, who will be the first. Imagine what the house would be like if the whole harem had Percy’s kids. Those would be some kids and the house would be chaotic.
5/7/2023 c8 jdh22121
Can’t wait for the coming story arc, hope Khione is mellow enough for a threesome with Silena.
Can’t wait for the coming story arc, hope Khione is mellow enough for a threesome with Silena.
5/7/2023 c6 jdh22121
Love it, great interactions with the camp, good building of a dynamic for Silena and funny way to end the chapter
Love it, great interactions with the camp, good building of a dynamic for Silena and funny way to end the chapter