for The Tales Of A New Olympian2/28/2023 c42 meryfcuckery
chap was great but i noticed something a bit contradictory, Annabeth stated previously when this Pipers attraction was revealed to her that shes just not into girls like that and suddenly in this chap shes making out with Piper? that's a bit of a weird 360 to make lol
chap was great but i noticed something a bit contradictory, Annabeth stated previously when this Pipers attraction was revealed to her that shes just not into girls like that and suddenly in this chap shes making out with Piper? that's a bit of a weird 360 to make lol
2/27/2023 c42 
8Arthurian-Legend's-the-Bomb
Cool chapter, and nice to see that Piper and Annabeth are being given the chance to have some fun. It's also good that Reyna might be getting some attention too.
8Arthurian-Legend's-the-BombCool chapter, and nice to see that Piper and Annabeth are being given the chance to have some fun. It's also good that Reyna might be getting some attention too.
2/27/2023 c42 Guest
thank you for this chapter i was really preoccupaid that this story was abbandoned. On another not i dont know if you are still trainig but i hope that the path of zyzz is still before you. And if you are still training hope that is going well. Good luck for your next prs. remeber PR or ER.
thank you for this chapter i was really preoccupaid that this story was abbandoned. On another not i dont know if you are still trainig but i hope that the path of zyzz is still before you. And if you are still training hope that is going well. Good luck for your next prs. remeber PR or ER.
2/26/2023 c42 Ariadne Venegas
I think I started to hate Annabeth
You are suppose to ask about this before doing. Also she acts a little too much. Thalia is right. Percy needs to worry not to be hurt.
About Juniper I still think she is not needed
I think I started to hate Annabeth
You are suppose to ask about this before doing. Also she acts a little too much. Thalia is right. Percy needs to worry not to be hurt.
About Juniper I still think she is not needed
2/26/2023 c42 9Tri-Edge
There are a lot of typos and outright grammar or spelling mistakes in this chapter. More than usual. This chapter just seems plain unpolished.
9Tri-EdgeThere are a lot of typos and outright grammar or spelling mistakes in this chapter. More than usual. This chapter just seems plain unpolished.
2/26/2023 c42 cameron1812
Absolutely loving it, Percy calling Khione Elsa to her face made me giggle, as did drunk ordering Thalia! Thank you!
Absolutely loving it, Percy calling Khione Elsa to her face made me giggle, as did drunk ordering Thalia! Thank you!
2/26/2023 c42 Gonzalj
about damn time you came back and yes the drunk editing is there but I found it more funny than anything.
about damn time you came back and yes the drunk editing is there but I found it more funny than anything.
2/26/2023 c42 Martin-di-Arcov
poor Reyna got forgotten about
really needs to socialize more if she manages to be so passive in interacting with others
on a completely different note
Annabeth just broke Piper
completely
poor Reyna got forgotten about
really needs to socialize more if she manages to be so passive in interacting with others
on a completely different note
Annabeth just broke Piper
completely
2/26/2023 c42 Garfungo
I enjoyed the chapter. Some of the spelling mistakes made me piece together what you were saying, but it’ll be fixed. I am enjoying the small fluff with the plot. I believe the story is progressing well and would like to see a few more plot chapters before we get to a lot of fluff. I’m guessing Piper will be brought in next with Reyna and Calypso after. Possibly Thalia later on. I assume Khione and Circe will be wildcards.
I enjoyed the chapter. Some of the spelling mistakes made me piece together what you were saying, but it’ll be fixed. I am enjoying the small fluff with the plot. I believe the story is progressing well and would like to see a few more plot chapters before we get to a lot of fluff. I’m guessing Piper will be brought in next with Reyna and Calypso after. Possibly Thalia later on. I assume Khione and Circe will be wildcards.
2/26/2023 c42 11WCLC
Fun chapter. But lately it feels like the plot is dragging. And sometimes if you focus too much on the little stuff of the story than the plot, you could waste the drive to keep writing it. Believe me I know that feeling.
When will Annabeth get pregnant? Will Silena get pregnant? Would the children of Percy technically be demigods since he is a god if he had them with demigoddesses (Annabeth, Silena, etc)? I’m writing a story where a female demigod we know has a child with a god. I won’t say who and with whom.
11WCLCFun chapter. But lately it feels like the plot is dragging. And sometimes if you focus too much on the little stuff of the story than the plot, you could waste the drive to keep writing it. Believe me I know that feeling.
When will Annabeth get pregnant? Will Silena get pregnant? Would the children of Percy technically be demigods since he is a god if he had them with demigoddesses (Annabeth, Silena, etc)? I’m writing a story where a female demigod we know has a child with a god. I won’t say who and with whom.
2/26/2023 c42 PTYN
Nice. Are you going to add Reyna? You set it up soooo. Piper would be a really nice addition too.
I've always had this theory that when Hera was in pipers head, making fake memories with Jason and stuff, Hera made it so piper would only find Jason attractive, seeing as she thought Percy was meh in canon when everyone else thought he was hot (Hazel thought he was a God even after weeks of fighting and running).
I see that you set calypso up too, with that comment about how she looks at Percy. I've always thought that she has lasting feelings for Percy.
Nice. Are you going to add Reyna? You set it up soooo. Piper would be a really nice addition too.
I've always had this theory that when Hera was in pipers head, making fake memories with Jason and stuff, Hera made it so piper would only find Jason attractive, seeing as she thought Percy was meh in canon when everyone else thought he was hot (Hazel thought he was a God even after weeks of fighting and running).
I see that you set calypso up too, with that comment about how she looks at Percy. I've always thought that she has lasting feelings for Percy.
2/25/2023 c42 kamcanco
I have a question, do you have any plans for Reina? I feel like he's a character that would fit well with Percy.
I have a question, do you have any plans for Reina? I feel like he's a character that would fit well with Percy.