for The Tales Of A New Olympian2/25/2023 c42 chriskidd2001
Happy to have a new chapter glad Piper and Annabeth story Arc can get going
Happy to have a new chapter glad Piper and Annabeth story Arc can get going
2/10/2023 c41 R
Looking forward to the update!
Looking forward to the update!
1/29/2023 c41 Guest
Really enjoying this one, keep up the great work! Cat mob looking forward to the eventual Piper / Annabeth too
Really enjoying this one, keep up the great work! Cat mob looking forward to the eventual Piper / Annabeth too
1/27/2023 c37 RandomReader
The way you add people like Juniper and Piper (and of course Silena) is really natural and believable! Tho I feel like Annabeth got off abit too easy…
Hope to see Reyna eventually added too!
The way you add people like Juniper and Piper (and of course Silena) is really natural and believable! Tho I feel like Annabeth got off abit too easy…
Hope to see Reyna eventually added too!
1/16/2023 c21 
6Wade98
Ok 1. Percy is supposed to be a god so shouldn't he be oozing gold ichor and not red blood? And 2. Why is Percy so curious and interested in doing anal?
6Wade98Ok 1. Percy is supposed to be a god so shouldn't he be oozing gold ichor and not red blood? And 2. Why is Percy so curious and interested in doing anal?
1/8/2023 c41 Guest
Lemon with Silena is always amazing. Esp if she’s adjusting more to her slave role. Adding Annabeth there would also be rly fun!
Lemon with Silena is always amazing. Esp if she’s adjusting more to her slave role. Adding Annabeth there would also be rly fun!
1/2/2023 c41 justsomeguy99
Always down for lemons
Always down for lemons
1/1/2023 c41 ArachnidHiveMind
Plot is good, this chapter was adorable and I loved it. Yet, more lemons will never really be unwelcome (that sounds pervy when I say it, buts less like “give me more, I need MORE” and more like “oh sweet” you know?)
Plot is good, this chapter was adorable and I loved it. Yet, more lemons will never really be unwelcome (that sounds pervy when I say it, buts less like “give me more, I need MORE” and more like “oh sweet” you know?)
12/30/2022 c41 Trinity seven
hahaha curiously I have also had thoughts that Clarisse would be an mma fighter
hahaha curiously I have also had thoughts that Clarisse would be an mma fighter
12/28/2022 c41 An old reader
Hi Henry, long time reader here.
I've been following you since... oh god, since you were writing your first version of this fic. Let me see... before 2017. More than 5 years. I have commented a few times with different names and enjoyed your increasing ability at character development. Sadly, this is not why I'm writing to you today. I apologize for the length.
I'm a trans girl. That probably should explain the rest, but I'll lay it out for you anyway. If you have any interest in sports (or maybe even if you haven't) you'll know that in the last decade a lot of controversy has surrounded trans athletes, fostered by a lot of people trying to score points for their agenda. Most of the discussion, as in any trans related discussion in public opinion, has been coming from cis people ignorant, and sometimes willfully so, of any detail of trans biology or trans history in sports.
For example, I remember once listening to a guy complaining about trans athletes, so I asked him what would happen, in his opinion, if trans women competed in the female Olympics. "They'd crush anyone else" he answered. I then had to inform him that trans people could compete since 2006, and no trans woman had won a medal yet at the time (one year ago). I then asked if he knew the requirements for trans athletes in any sport's organization, or if he knew the effects of estrogen on a body, or if he knew how it affects bone structure or any other number of things. Unsurprisingly, he didn't.
Now, one tactic conservative media uses to promote transphobia is
1 take single instances of a trans athlete (not even a trans woman) winning anything.
2 ignore all their other losses, all other top athletes in the sport who have similar or better records
3 claim that they won because of an "obvious" advantage, often not even mentioning their training or pre transition successes.
One such time was when a trans woman, in an MMA match, fractured an opponent's skull. Now, fractured bones in MMA aren't exactly news worthy normally, not outside MMA. But, since they could, bigots milked the instance as much as possible.
I don't know whether Clarisse's win mentions the opponent being trans. Maybe it had no reason at all, but I find that unlikely. It seems to suggest that winning against a trans opponent is somehow a superhuman feat. Consider that for you it was one word that added little to the story, but for me (and possibly other queer readers) it was a shock. It was also, frankly, a disappointment.
I don't expect every cis person I follow to be INFORMED about trans issues, but at least I'd like them not to PARROT transphobic and ignorant talking points.
I'm on the fence as to whether I should continue reading a story that followed so much of my adolescent sexual awakening. I'm sad I even have to consider it. I hope this review will spark some self reflection,
An old time trans fan.
Hi Henry, long time reader here.
I've been following you since... oh god, since you were writing your first version of this fic. Let me see... before 2017. More than 5 years. I have commented a few times with different names and enjoyed your increasing ability at character development. Sadly, this is not why I'm writing to you today. I apologize for the length.
I'm a trans girl. That probably should explain the rest, but I'll lay it out for you anyway. If you have any interest in sports (or maybe even if you haven't) you'll know that in the last decade a lot of controversy has surrounded trans athletes, fostered by a lot of people trying to score points for their agenda. Most of the discussion, as in any trans related discussion in public opinion, has been coming from cis people ignorant, and sometimes willfully so, of any detail of trans biology or trans history in sports.
For example, I remember once listening to a guy complaining about trans athletes, so I asked him what would happen, in his opinion, if trans women competed in the female Olympics. "They'd crush anyone else" he answered. I then had to inform him that trans people could compete since 2006, and no trans woman had won a medal yet at the time (one year ago). I then asked if he knew the requirements for trans athletes in any sport's organization, or if he knew the effects of estrogen on a body, or if he knew how it affects bone structure or any other number of things. Unsurprisingly, he didn't.
Now, one tactic conservative media uses to promote transphobia is
1 take single instances of a trans athlete (not even a trans woman) winning anything.
2 ignore all their other losses, all other top athletes in the sport who have similar or better records
3 claim that they won because of an "obvious" advantage, often not even mentioning their training or pre transition successes.
One such time was when a trans woman, in an MMA match, fractured an opponent's skull. Now, fractured bones in MMA aren't exactly news worthy normally, not outside MMA. But, since they could, bigots milked the instance as much as possible.
I don't know whether Clarisse's win mentions the opponent being trans. Maybe it had no reason at all, but I find that unlikely. It seems to suggest that winning against a trans opponent is somehow a superhuman feat. Consider that for you it was one word that added little to the story, but for me (and possibly other queer readers) it was a shock. It was also, frankly, a disappointment.
I don't expect every cis person I follow to be INFORMED about trans issues, but at least I'd like them not to PARROT transphobic and ignorant talking points.
I'm on the fence as to whether I should continue reading a story that followed so much of my adolescent sexual awakening. I'm sad I even have to consider it. I hope this review will spark some self reflection,
An old time trans fan.