for The Tales Of A New Olympian12/8/2022 c40 Martin-di-Arcov
nice short chapter
bit of set-up
a small view into how the camp treats Silena now that they know what's up with her
some Piper plot slow development (it's brewing, slowly but it's brewing)
and a nice bit of Lemons (lime?) with Juniper to start introducing her to the pairing for real now
nice short chapter
bit of set-up
a small view into how the camp treats Silena now that they know what's up with her
some Piper plot slow development (it's brewing, slowly but it's brewing)
and a nice bit of Lemons (lime?) with Juniper to start introducing her to the pairing for real now
12/8/2022 c40 Ariadne Venegas
Poor Silena she really need him and he dismissed her right away really coldly.
I hope next chapter they talk about what happened to her at camp, because it was really bad, and she need Percy to get them in right
Poor Silena she really need him and he dismissed her right away really coldly.
I hope next chapter they talk about what happened to her at camp, because it was really bad, and she need Percy to get them in right
12/8/2022 c40 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
12/8/2022 c40 
1Bromega2477
What do you know, the day I look back at this story is the same day it updates!
1Bromega2477What do you know, the day I look back at this story is the same day it updates!
12/2/2022 c39 Martin-di-Arcov
oooh, nice and smooth way of introducing Artemis into the equation properly!
the Juniper and Kione bits worked as pretty neat set-up too
you're pretty good at building the closeness up
my only pet peeve is with Percy constantly being dumb as bricks
but that's Mr. Riordan's fault innit?
can't wait for more
toodles!
oooh, nice and smooth way of introducing Artemis into the equation properly!
the Juniper and Kione bits worked as pretty neat set-up too
you're pretty good at building the closeness up
my only pet peeve is with Percy constantly being dumb as bricks
but that's Mr. Riordan's fault innit?
can't wait for more
toodles!
11/30/2022 c39 Platodi
Binged this whole thing in a matter of days. I love the plot as well as the more spicy parts and I can’t wait till the bed becomes a bit more crowded. Looking forward to more chapters!
Binged this whole thing in a matter of days. I love the plot as well as the more spicy parts and I can’t wait till the bed becomes a bit more crowded. Looking forward to more chapters!
11/30/2022 c25 max176
since I can't reply to you normally I'll write another. but I can't see how being a a God has diminished his skill in melee so much
since I can't reply to you normally I'll write another. but I can't see how being a a God has diminished his skill in melee so much
11/28/2022 c25 max176
Percy being brought down by these kind of numbers is laughable at best by book 5 let alone at this point. Army's chouldnt stop him solo and now he's a God a a group of girls takes him down?
Percy being brought down by these kind of numbers is laughable at best by book 5 let alone at this point. Army's chouldnt stop him solo and now he's a God a a group of girls takes him down?
11/27/2022 c39 5FleetMaster
Wow dude, just wow. I love this by the way, much more plot than your other ones though I thought those were good too.
5FleetMasterWow dude, just wow. I love this by the way, much more plot than your other ones though I thought those were good too.