
4/15/2024 c52 chriskidd2001
Well things are heating up glad nothing happened to Sally,Paul,and estelle or Percy would have gone ballistic glad yo have a new chapter to read
Well things are heating up glad nothing happened to Sally,Paul,and estelle or Percy would have gone ballistic glad yo have a new chapter to read
4/7/2024 c51 Jack Brenway
Been loving this story! Do you have any information on an update schedule? Or do you just kinda post as it comes
Been loving this story! Do you have any information on an update schedule? Or do you just kinda post as it comes
3/22/2024 c22 AssiriosDM
Started reading this fic yesterday, I like the dialogues, and the romance interactions seems somewhat believable, what is a surprise considering the whole Harem aspect of the fic, my only problem with it are the fight scenes, or to be more specific, how nerfed Percy is, idk if you're attempting to make things tense, but for me it just come as idiotic considering how experienced Percy is and the mistakes he's making during fights...
Don't get me wrong, I'm liking the fic a lot, I'm just trying to offer some criticism at a thing that's bothering me. So, at best your Percy fights like he just got out of the Great Prophecy, he barely uses his water powers, I only recall him calling storms once and don't recall his earthquake powers being mentioned once, and this seems to even reflect in his thinking process, this comes as particularly strange since he is now a God, he should be stronger than that.
The fight this chapter for example, a Kraken sneaking up on a Sea-God? That's quite strange, but not as strange as this Sea-God failing to hold the Kraken down with his water powers... Idk, maybe his water control was counted by the Kraken somewhat, but it just feels like cheap tension.
But that was not the worse fight, the worse one by far is the one with the centaurs. Like, maybe I'm missremembering things, but I'm pretty sure that Percy was feeling nervous at facing a gang of centaurs, now maybe it was because they technically had a hostage, though I should mention that this was never mentioned by Percy himself until the surviving one tried to kill the Goddess, but for me, unless all Centaurs are all Chiron clones, they shouldn't be a problem for Percy, I mean, we are talking about the guy that fought against the God of War when he was 12, defeated a few titans and that was when he still was a demigod... Afraid of a centaur charge? You control the earth bro, just make an earthquake big enough to trip them, then rush while they are on the ground and desoriented to finish the job... Without water in close proximity? You're the strongest son of the Stormbringer, just call the water to you like you did when you were still a demigod...
Again, I like the fic, the characters are quite good, and I know the fights aren't the focus of it, but I'm still a little annoyed by the fight scenes, hopefully they become better as the chapters progress.
Started reading this fic yesterday, I like the dialogues, and the romance interactions seems somewhat believable, what is a surprise considering the whole Harem aspect of the fic, my only problem with it are the fight scenes, or to be more specific, how nerfed Percy is, idk if you're attempting to make things tense, but for me it just come as idiotic considering how experienced Percy is and the mistakes he's making during fights...
Don't get me wrong, I'm liking the fic a lot, I'm just trying to offer some criticism at a thing that's bothering me. So, at best your Percy fights like he just got out of the Great Prophecy, he barely uses his water powers, I only recall him calling storms once and don't recall his earthquake powers being mentioned once, and this seems to even reflect in his thinking process, this comes as particularly strange since he is now a God, he should be stronger than that.
The fight this chapter for example, a Kraken sneaking up on a Sea-God? That's quite strange, but not as strange as this Sea-God failing to hold the Kraken down with his water powers... Idk, maybe his water control was counted by the Kraken somewhat, but it just feels like cheap tension.
But that was not the worse fight, the worse one by far is the one with the centaurs. Like, maybe I'm missremembering things, but I'm pretty sure that Percy was feeling nervous at facing a gang of centaurs, now maybe it was because they technically had a hostage, though I should mention that this was never mentioned by Percy himself until the surviving one tried to kill the Goddess, but for me, unless all Centaurs are all Chiron clones, they shouldn't be a problem for Percy, I mean, we are talking about the guy that fought against the God of War when he was 12, defeated a few titans and that was when he still was a demigod... Afraid of a centaur charge? You control the earth bro, just make an earthquake big enough to trip them, then rush while they are on the ground and desoriented to finish the job... Without water in close proximity? You're the strongest son of the Stormbringer, just call the water to you like you did when you were still a demigod...
Again, I like the fic, the characters are quite good, and I know the fights aren't the focus of it, but I'm still a little annoyed by the fight scenes, hopefully they become better as the chapters progress.
2/24/2024 c51 Big blue
Haha, may have put off school work for the last day and a half read ing all of this. I have my small gripes here and there, but honestly I think the fact I read it all and so quick speaks for itself. Anticipating the next chapter!
Haha, may have put off school work for the last day and a half read ing all of this. I have my small gripes here and there, but honestly I think the fact I read it all and so quick speaks for itself. Anticipating the next chapter!
2/10/2024 c51 Jon
Glad to see you’re writing! Love the casual vibes between silena and Percy
Glad to see you’re writing! Love the casual vibes between silena and Percy
2/10/2024 c51 TriainaMoon
Silena has gotten pretty bold with casually offering her services. Annabeth and Piper must have looked like a pissed off (Annie also a bit roughed up) lesbian couple as they made there way to Percy’s home on Olympus. Annabeth is a badass.
Percy’s getting two more housemates now and Annie has been secretly moving her cloths for some time. A nice thing for the girls is they both wear Percys shirts nicely LOL. were the flowers acting on their own or being commended by someone like Medea?
Will Aphrodite be pleased with this development?
What’s her game by gifting one of her daughters to Percy ? What’s she hoping to gain?
Silena has gotten pretty bold with casually offering her services. Annabeth and Piper must have looked like a pissed off (Annie also a bit roughed up) lesbian couple as they made there way to Percy’s home on Olympus. Annabeth is a badass.
Percy’s getting two more housemates now and Annie has been secretly moving her cloths for some time. A nice thing for the girls is they both wear Percys shirts nicely LOL. were the flowers acting on their own or being commended by someone like Medea?
Will Aphrodite be pleased with this development?
What’s her game by gifting one of her daughters to Percy ? What’s she hoping to gain?
2/7/2024 c51
7Frosty Wolf
And so Percy gains another 'roommate'. I suspect Piper will not be the last one either.
Glad to see this going again! And I get the feeling that dealing with the Piper and Khione situation will be simple compared to getting through to Circe herself. I suspect said witch will get a laugh out of what her followers did.

And so Percy gains another 'roommate'. I suspect Piper will not be the last one either.
Glad to see this going again! And I get the feeling that dealing with the Piper and Khione situation will be simple compared to getting through to Circe herself. I suspect said witch will get a laugh out of what her followers did.