for The Tales Of A New Olympian1/29/2024 c4 Guest
"Sex, there will be a lot of sex in this story, just a bit more patience."
Gonna be real with you. Only time i like this in a story is if it helps the story. I can tell just by your talking that yours wont. In fact your story came after the idea of sex. I wanted sex id go watch some porn, and definitely not by you. Disappointing.
"Sex, there will be a lot of sex in this story, just a bit more patience."
Gonna be real with you. Only time i like this in a story is if it helps the story. I can tell just by your talking that yours wont. In fact your story came after the idea of sex. I wanted sex id go watch some porn, and definitely not by you. Disappointing.
1/23/2024 c49 
1Balthazar the Unworthy
Imma be honest, i don't even care for the smut at this point. I'm here for the plot. It's been pretty great!
1Balthazar the UnworthyImma be honest, i don't even care for the smut at this point. I'm here for the plot. It's been pretty great!
1/11/2024 c50 Guest
Binged the entire story over the past week or so. Will say I was originally very excited about a Percy/Silena story as it's by far my favorite rare-pair, and was disappointed when she was sidelined for Annabeth. Still happy with how the stories progressed though - I love all the characters except Juniper.
That being said, is Annabeth meant to come off as... slutty(?) as she is portrayed in the story? By far the horniest character in a story that includes 2 Aphrodite children and a Nymph is definitely not what I imagined. Still happy with her, don't get me wrong, just different.
If I may make a suggestion, keep Thalia just a friend. Their brother/sister-like interactions so far have been great, going down the harem route from there would just be... offputting.
Great story! Looking forward to Act 2! More Silena is always going to be appreciated :)
Binged the entire story over the past week or so. Will say I was originally very excited about a Percy/Silena story as it's by far my favorite rare-pair, and was disappointed when she was sidelined for Annabeth. Still happy with how the stories progressed though - I love all the characters except Juniper.
That being said, is Annabeth meant to come off as... slutty(?) as she is portrayed in the story? By far the horniest character in a story that includes 2 Aphrodite children and a Nymph is definitely not what I imagined. Still happy with her, don't get me wrong, just different.
If I may make a suggestion, keep Thalia just a friend. Their brother/sister-like interactions so far have been great, going down the harem route from there would just be... offputting.
Great story! Looking forward to Act 2! More Silena is always going to be appreciated :)
1/9/2024 c11 3Twilightlover1234567890
its almost 2am. i need sleep. got class tomorrow, but loving this story so far and will read more soon
3Twilightlover1234567890its almost 2am. i need sleep. got class tomorrow, but loving this story so far and will read more soon
12/22/2023 c50 Guest
I would personally like to see more of your take on Drew or Bianca, based on your past stories although I admit that this may not work here. Similar for Calypso but Drew is definitely a character that i think I've only seen you write well. Have a good Holiday season
I would personally like to see more of your take on Drew or Bianca, based on your past stories although I admit that this may not work here. Similar for Calypso but Drew is definitely a character that i think I've only seen you write well. Have a good Holiday season
12/20/2023 c50 Me Myself And I 777
I am very much looking forward to the second plot Arc my friend keep them coming but no need to rush yourself
I am very much looking forward to the second plot Arc my friend keep them coming but no need to rush yourself
12/12/2023 c49 TriainaMoon
This was a really good chapter and enjoyed it
The grou fun was sexy and different for Percy. Liked having Piper joining in the fun hopefully she officially joins Annabeth and her sister in Percy’s group.
Seems like the got trouble in the shadows. They need to move in with Percy for safety and numbers advantage. Could have been more descriptive during their fun time. Will Percy get cracking on his godly training now?
Keep up the great work and update soon please
Happy holidays
This was a really good chapter and enjoyed it
The grou fun was sexy and different for Percy. Liked having Piper joining in the fun hopefully she officially joins Annabeth and her sister in Percy’s group.
Seems like the got trouble in the shadows. They need to move in with Percy for safety and numbers advantage. Could have been more descriptive during their fun time. Will Percy get cracking on his godly training now?
Keep up the great work and update soon please
Happy holidays