
5/14 c18 Heracross64
One more thing I'M SO HAPPY that you decided to include his parents it makes me feel giddy that they'll finally see their son again. Even if this isn't canon...
A man can dream can't he? I'm glad your making a dream into reality.
God, that's cheesy.
One more thing I'M SO HAPPY that you decided to include his parents it makes me feel giddy that they'll finally see their son again. Even if this isn't canon...
A man can dream can't he? I'm glad your making a dream into reality.
God, that's cheesy.
5/14 c17 Heracross64
NNNOOOO I caught up! WHY! I guess it's my fault for binging...
Man I really hope by the end this story expands upon from just the reactions. This plot line is extremely intriguing and can't wait to learn more about Jack! Also what is Flugel planning on doing exactly..?
NNNOOOO I caught up! WHY! I guess it's my fault for binging...
Man I really hope by the end this story expands upon from just the reactions. This plot line is extremely intriguing and can't wait to learn more about Jack! Also what is Flugel planning on doing exactly..?
5/12 c18 Jaldabaoth-Evil Lord
My only complaint is that you, seriously, in every fanfic you put your shitty OC, you put Jack where he shouldn't even be, this ruins the experience, and the worst thing is that you make him fight
My only complaint is that you, seriously, in every fanfic you put your shitty OC, you put Jack where he shouldn't even be, this ruins the experience, and the worst thing is that you make him fight
5/8 c18 Evan
Hey, How are you doing ? Good i hope, I just finished your fic from start to finish recently, and have to say i loved it. Coming from someone who doesn't read in general for some reason i found out about this fic from instagram and decided to read it. I think you got the characters very well and personally like the inclusion of the parents because it finally changes the pace of the character's interaction with Subaru's sleeping form, instead of getting his hand crushed constantly they now interact with the parents instead , its a good change imo. Regarding what happened to Japan , it seemed like the parents remember what went down so i would love to see their rection/conversation with the other characters when the intro rolls out and they see Subaru walking in front of the city. Wish you the best with your studies, take care of yourself
Hey, How are you doing ? Good i hope, I just finished your fic from start to finish recently, and have to say i loved it. Coming from someone who doesn't read in general for some reason i found out about this fic from instagram and decided to read it. I think you got the characters very well and personally like the inclusion of the parents because it finally changes the pace of the character's interaction with Subaru's sleeping form, instead of getting his hand crushed constantly they now interact with the parents instead , its a good change imo. Regarding what happened to Japan , it seemed like the parents remember what went down so i would love to see their rection/conversation with the other characters when the intro rolls out and they see Subaru walking in front of the city. Wish you the best with your studies, take care of yourself
5/3 c18 justAguy
cant wait for chapter 19 keep it up
cant wait for chapter 19 keep it up
5/2 c9 Guest
What was the last part.
What was the last part.
5/4 c18 giocbacc
Your doing great don’t worry I and I feel like other can agree that your doing good I don’t mind waiting
Your doing great don’t worry I and I feel like other can agree that your doing good I don’t mind waiting
5/1 c18 Don
please don't drop this it has been an awesome fic so far
please don't drop this it has been an awesome fic so far
5/3 c16 giocbacc
I don’t like the oc part much not saying I hate it but you know I want to read the story more instead but it’s definitely unique in a way and jeez I love this especially since his parents are now involved but will his parents and his friends from the Rezero world meet I hope they do and warden sama better get a power up you hear
I don’t like the oc part much not saying I hate it but you know I want to read the story more instead but it’s definitely unique in a way and jeez I love this especially since his parents are now involved but will his parents and his friends from the Rezero world meet I hope they do and warden sama better get a power up you hear
5/1 c18 Fish
Plis update it.
Plis update it.
4/30 c18 lightuae2001
My god you truly made happy since you made this fan fiction i really cant wait i wanna read more!also i hope you get in top 5 and dont forget to get breaks so you dont get burnt out from all the hard work you made first always think about yourself first)
My god you truly made happy since you made this fan fiction i really cant wait i wanna read more!also i hope you get in top 5 and dont forget to get breaks so you dont get burnt out from all the hard work you made first always think about yourself first)
4/25 c2 Rico
the narrator imedietely calling everyone everyone out with thier inermost guilts and regrets, persoanlly calling out Pricillas bullshit from the get go, Rems confusion and feelings towards everyones sudden bond towards subbaru before she got put in a coma, Emilias jealousy, rems anger defying the warden to bring out her horn when even reinhard can't even use devine protections, (probbaly not intetnional or meant to be seen as a power but a nice detail) ottos intelect to take into account his sourrundings and risks of his comrads past being shown, Rosewaals not so hidden intents, Subarus freinds recalling even the most spesicific imoirtant memories to put in the puzzle peices together throughout the entire eposide made for the best story telling, writeing ive ever seen. an author who takes into account other people's judgment, calling you the best author is an understatement. You top Suzanne Collins AND William Shakespeare both in my eyes. you bring out everyone's reactions to the fullest with the most emotion (with good build up and plot behind it instead of plain outburts with actual story telling through thier memories and perosnaities) and littearly everything in between to keep readers engaged. You pretty much perfected this, the only thing I would point out would be the initail reactions as everyone is still too dumb to realize or consider just how many times he died and suffered yet, I feel like with how smart (Otto, Beatrice, Anastasia) and loud for some to call out the obvious (Crusch, Garfiel) to not call it out already, after all the feats and even saying he learned from previous deaths I feel like at least half of the cast would have been hit by a train of realisation of just how much truma he must have went through (esspealy Rem and Emilia as those two saw the worst of it.) but OTHER than that, everything was beyond perfect. Im positive with the amount of dedication, heart, and soul poured into this that that train is coming to hit them soon without a doubt. You keep doing you at your own pace, I still have a lot to read to catch up on but you are the G.O.A.T.
I think the first season of Re:Zero showed the most trauma, emotion, character development, and other things, and for those reasons, these reactions will probably (after wishing I could read it all again) leave me content. I won't beg you to keep going into season 2 as I already see there's a possibility of a burnout, but If you do, with this quality, you have one more loyal reader. Have a good day and I hope you're doing okay.
the narrator imedietely calling everyone everyone out with thier inermost guilts and regrets, persoanlly calling out Pricillas bullshit from the get go, Rems confusion and feelings towards everyones sudden bond towards subbaru before she got put in a coma, Emilias jealousy, rems anger defying the warden to bring out her horn when even reinhard can't even use devine protections, (probbaly not intetnional or meant to be seen as a power but a nice detail) ottos intelect to take into account his sourrundings and risks of his comrads past being shown, Rosewaals not so hidden intents, Subarus freinds recalling even the most spesicific imoirtant memories to put in the puzzle peices together throughout the entire eposide made for the best story telling, writeing ive ever seen. an author who takes into account other people's judgment, calling you the best author is an understatement. You top Suzanne Collins AND William Shakespeare both in my eyes. you bring out everyone's reactions to the fullest with the most emotion (with good build up and plot behind it instead of plain outburts with actual story telling through thier memories and perosnaities) and littearly everything in between to keep readers engaged. You pretty much perfected this, the only thing I would point out would be the initail reactions as everyone is still too dumb to realize or consider just how many times he died and suffered yet, I feel like with how smart (Otto, Beatrice, Anastasia) and loud for some to call out the obvious (Crusch, Garfiel) to not call it out already, after all the feats and even saying he learned from previous deaths I feel like at least half of the cast would have been hit by a train of realisation of just how much truma he must have went through (esspealy Rem and Emilia as those two saw the worst of it.) but OTHER than that, everything was beyond perfect. Im positive with the amount of dedication, heart, and soul poured into this that that train is coming to hit them soon without a doubt. You keep doing you at your own pace, I still have a lot to read to catch up on but you are the G.O.A.T.
I think the first season of Re:Zero showed the most trauma, emotion, character development, and other things, and for those reasons, these reactions will probably (after wishing I could read it all again) leave me content. I won't beg you to keep going into season 2 as I already see there's a possibility of a burnout, but If you do, with this quality, you have one more loyal reader. Have a good day and I hope you're doing okay.
4/26 c17 EntyM3
I think the inclusion of Subaru’s parents is fine. It separates this fic from the other arc 4 reaction fic. Its understandable they got so much focus in this chapter because they don’t know this world, these people, or Subaru’s power.
I would hope you would finish season 2 and maybe the ifs before an arcane fic, but if you do make the arcane fic soon that’s your decision and i’ll still read it lol.
I think the inclusion of Subaru’s parents is fine. It separates this fic from the other arc 4 reaction fic. Its understandable they got so much focus in this chapter because they don’t know this world, these people, or Subaru’s power.
I would hope you would finish season 2 and maybe the ifs before an arcane fic, but if you do make the arcane fic soon that’s your decision and i’ll still read it lol.