for The Rebirth of a Sword Hero5/8 c51 Number XLVII
Many people seem to disagree, but personally I rather like seeing Emiya having a nice vacation while also growing and changing as a person, rather than being stuck suffering eternally in a horrible endless angst loop.
("The trouble is that we have a bad habit, encouraged by pedants and sophisticates, of considering happiness as something rather stupid. Only pain is intellectual, only evil interesting. This is the treason of the artist; a refusal to admit the banality of evil and the terrible boredom of pain."
-Ursula K. Le Guin)
Also nice to see him help break the other Heroes out of their own angst cycles using his own special brand of mentoring.
("YOU'RE NOT MY PROTEGE!"
-Guy who is totally the Batman to your Robin)
The fight scenes are also cool. They manage to strike a good balance of Emiya being badass and Emiya learning to rely on other people.
Many people seem to disagree, but personally I rather like seeing Emiya having a nice vacation while also growing and changing as a person, rather than being stuck suffering eternally in a horrible endless angst loop.
("The trouble is that we have a bad habit, encouraged by pedants and sophisticates, of considering happiness as something rather stupid. Only pain is intellectual, only evil interesting. This is the treason of the artist; a refusal to admit the banality of evil and the terrible boredom of pain."
-Ursula K. Le Guin)
Also nice to see him help break the other Heroes out of their own angst cycles using his own special brand of mentoring.
("YOU'RE NOT MY PROTEGE!"
-Guy who is totally the Batman to your Robin)
The fight scenes are also cool. They manage to strike a good balance of Emiya being badass and Emiya learning to rely on other people.
4/28 c50 Star
Man this is just stupid. You could have done better than this.
Emiya pulls out the key blade, fully mastered and all, out of his ass when he has never even used it once in the last 49 chapters.
Wyndia gets an entire flashback on how not to give into vengeance and kill indiscriminately...and what does she do? Spares the scum humans but kills most of the dragons who are just mounts. DRAGONS WHO ARE RELATIVES OF HER ADOPTED FATHER! WTF
Man this is just stupid. You could have done better than this.
Emiya pulls out the key blade, fully mastered and all, out of his ass when he has never even used it once in the last 49 chapters.
Wyndia gets an entire flashback on how not to give into vengeance and kill indiscriminately...and what does she do? Spares the scum humans but kills most of the dragons who are just mounts. DRAGONS WHO ARE RELATIVES OF HER ADOPTED FATHER! WTF
4/27 c46 Star
It's been a while since I read a more stupider fight. What is this? A turn based game?
Pope fires one attack, emiya counteracts. Than everyone waits while the pope monologues and when he attacks only then the team retaliates. The king traps the pope in place and emiya with his near infinite years of battle experience doesn't capitalise on it. Instead starts talking
It's been a while since I read a more stupider fight. What is this? A turn based game?
Pope fires one attack, emiya counteracts. Than everyone waits while the pope monologues and when he attacks only then the team retaliates. The king traps the pope in place and emiya with his near infinite years of battle experience doesn't capitalise on it. Instead starts talking
4/27 c44 Star
Mercenary Tao seeing emiya fly using a sword: listen here u Lil shi-
Mercenary Tao seeing emiya fly using a sword: listen here u Lil shi-
4/27 c51 T.V. 2000
This chapter was certainly chaotic.
Something notable was Queen Mirellia's participation. She may not be at the level of Aultcray as a Staff Hero, but she did well in this chapter. However, they still need to defeat the False Pope.
Speaking of that character, his reaction to how his plans keep failing, such as his magic cannons being destroyed, was satisfying. His point of view again mentions the word "cheater." I still maintain that he's not a Wave Vanguard. If he were, wouldn't he have had the ability to steal legendary/vassal weapons? That's a characteristic power of Vanguards. Besides, he could have stolen the Vassal Staff chapters ago and lied that God chose him as a Vassal Hero.
Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter. Naofumi would have to appear no matter what because he will have an important role in the final battle against Balamus.
This chapter was certainly chaotic.
Something notable was Queen Mirellia's participation. She may not be at the level of Aultcray as a Staff Hero, but she did well in this chapter. However, they still need to defeat the False Pope.
Speaking of that character, his reaction to how his plans keep failing, such as his magic cannons being destroyed, was satisfying. His point of view again mentions the word "cheater." I still maintain that he's not a Wave Vanguard. If he were, wouldn't he have had the ability to steal legendary/vassal weapons? That's a characteristic power of Vanguards. Besides, he could have stolen the Vassal Staff chapters ago and lied that God chose him as a Vassal Hero.
Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter. Naofumi would have to appear no matter what because he will have an important role in the final battle against Balamus.
4/27 c41 Star
Kanshou and bakuya are great weapons but the dragon vein attack was OP. You are giving noble Phantasms too much credit while needing everything in the fused world of the four cardinals.
What's the point of being summoned into this world if he is only ever rely on his own arsenal? And if he is gonna rely on his arsenal, giving just one shield to Naofumi and no spear to motoyasu is stunting them
Kanshou and bakuya are great weapons but the dragon vein attack was OP. You are giving noble Phantasms too much credit while needing everything in the fused world of the four cardinals.
What's the point of being summoned into this world if he is only ever rely on his own arsenal? And if he is gonna rely on his arsenal, giving just one shield to Naofumi and no spear to motoyasu is stunting them
4/26 c37 Star
Why do you keep giving stupid excuses like 'this is canon' and what not?
People don't read fanfiction to experience the same bullshite. DO BETTER
Why do you keep giving stupid excuses like 'this is canon' and what not?
People don't read fanfiction to experience the same bullshite. DO BETTER
4/26 c36 Star
Would be funny if all the countries were to now invade melromarc. Poor pope in trying to dispose off the heroes now bought total annihilation on his head.
I'm not sure lord Camelot is stronger than rho aias since one is a conceptualized shield of seven ox hide layers while another is a dining table
Would be funny if all the countries were to now invade melromarc. Poor pope in trying to dispose off the heroes now bought total annihilation on his head.
I'm not sure lord Camelot is stronger than rho aias since one is a conceptualized shield of seven ox hide layers while another is a dining table
4/26 c34 Star
How nice of the wave monsters to stand aside and let glass and the defenders duke it out in peace.
None of them could even harm a hair in her and yet Naofumi says she wasn't that skilled. Dafuq?
If glass' race is strongest when at full magic capacity, could this be used as a trigger condition to activate Fragarach?
How nice of the wave monsters to stand aside and let glass and the defenders duke it out in peace.
None of them could even harm a hair in her and yet Naofumi says she wasn't that skilled. Dafuq?
If glass' race is strongest when at full magic capacity, could this be used as a trigger condition to activate Fragarach?
4/26 c33 Star
I have always wondered... The heroes of one world get their levels and benefits reset when invading another. Yet glass doesn't seem to be weakened by much
I have always wondered... The heroes of one world get their levels and benefits reset when invading another. Yet glass doesn't seem to be weakened by much
4/25 c31 Star
Oh look, the entourage found the super rare decoction within a day itself. How convenient.
How look the entourage found willing soldiers to form a battalion. How convenient.
Emiya calling itsuki a narcissistic brat despite spending his whole life trying to fight on his own, even when his comrades where infinitely stronger than him. Hilarious.
Nobody asked emiya to join his team. Why he butting in like he is the center of the world?
I just realised something...this story doesn't have Filo in it. Instead we have 3 filolials why though?
Oh look, the entourage found the super rare decoction within a day itself. How convenient.
How look the entourage found willing soldiers to form a battalion. How convenient.
Emiya calling itsuki a narcissistic brat despite spending his whole life trying to fight on his own, even when his comrades where infinitely stronger than him. Hilarious.
Nobody asked emiya to join his team. Why he butting in like he is the center of the world?
I just realised something...this story doesn't have Filo in it. Instead we have 3 filolials why though?
4/24 c28 Star
A trend I have noticed multiple times. Emiya sometimes looks at someone's weapon and starts wondering how it would work or how strong the wielder is... shouldn't he automatically know all this just by a simple structural analysis? Or is the cardinal sword preventing him from utilising this skill?
If fire is the way to beat the hydra? Why didn't dawn lion causterize the cut heads?
Zelretch? This overused nutjob who no one in Type moon even cares about? Why help summon emiya here knowing he will be seriously handicapped? Why not just some ritsuka. The girl would be stronger cuz of it.
If zelretch already knows the main villain behind the Army Behind the Waves, why not summon dozens of parallel zelretches and vaporize the mofo? Or get chaldea involved? Or get a frand servant involved? Why the secrecy when the stakes are this high?
Pretty sure you are trying to insinuate that the main villain is a outer god like the ones nasu was 'inspired' to include in the nasuverse. Or maybe C.H.A.O.S.? Though world devourer could fit Velbar too.
Ranking fitoria with the likes of grand servants is too much. She is not a BEAST.
I don't know if this Yuki is a canon character or created by you but fitoria saying she will one day become one of the most powerful monsters makes little sense since that role should belong to the four legendary beasts
A trend I have noticed multiple times. Emiya sometimes looks at someone's weapon and starts wondering how it would work or how strong the wielder is... shouldn't he automatically know all this just by a simple structural analysis? Or is the cardinal sword preventing him from utilising this skill?
If fire is the way to beat the hydra? Why didn't dawn lion causterize the cut heads?
Zelretch? This overused nutjob who no one in Type moon even cares about? Why help summon emiya here knowing he will be seriously handicapped? Why not just some ritsuka. The girl would be stronger cuz of it.
If zelretch already knows the main villain behind the Army Behind the Waves, why not summon dozens of parallel zelretches and vaporize the mofo? Or get chaldea involved? Or get a frand servant involved? Why the secrecy when the stakes are this high?
Pretty sure you are trying to insinuate that the main villain is a outer god like the ones nasu was 'inspired' to include in the nasuverse. Or maybe C.H.A.O.S.? Though world devourer could fit Velbar too.
Ranking fitoria with the likes of grand servants is too much. She is not a BEAST.
I don't know if this Yuki is a canon character or created by you but fitoria saying she will one day become one of the most powerful monsters makes little sense since that role should belong to the four legendary beasts
4/24 c27 Star
Why does nobody ever ask why there are waves happening in every country and why summon only 4 warriors to combat a world wide invasion?
Also emiya should try copying all sorts of weapons and not just swords. If shovel and vines can unlock swords, so can a spear, or a morning star and definitely an axe. Hell could the legendary sword copy the legendary axe and vice versa?
Did you just copy the whole talk about magic staves from Harry potter? Be a Lil original, you are already using elements of 2 franchises.
Why only 200 warriors? Is that the total number of warriors an entire kingdom can muster? Or did zeltoble suffer heavy losses in the previous 3 waves?
Why does nobody ever ask why there are waves happening in every country and why summon only 4 warriors to combat a world wide invasion?
Also emiya should try copying all sorts of weapons and not just swords. If shovel and vines can unlock swords, so can a spear, or a morning star and definitely an axe. Hell could the legendary sword copy the legendary axe and vice versa?
Did you just copy the whole talk about magic staves from Harry potter? Be a Lil original, you are already using elements of 2 franchises.
Why only 200 warriors? Is that the total number of warriors an entire kingdom can muster? Or did zeltoble suffer heavy losses in the previous 3 waves?
4/23 c26 Star
The fight with the axe hero made me realise something... By erecting the magic barrier, emiya is forced to fight with a handicap. Otherwise he could just trace IG Alima high up in the atmosphere and slam it down on the captain like a meteor. Overkill sure but nothing would make him surrender faster than annihilation.
Shouldn't the vassal axe change forms too? Or was the axe hero using just one form to combat the sword hero? Ballsy.
Specially since Ragnarok breaker was basically just a skill.
Why would legendary sword punish emiya for tracing rho aias? He doesn't need to hold the conceptual shield in his hand and also he didn't trace it with the intention to fight, only to protect himself... No rule stated by the cardinal weapon was actually broken... If just holding a weapon is gonna zap him, how is he cooking all the time?
Old enough to kill, definately old enough to drink u dumbass.
The fight with the axe hero made me realise something... By erecting the magic barrier, emiya is forced to fight with a handicap. Otherwise he could just trace IG Alima high up in the atmosphere and slam it down on the captain like a meteor. Overkill sure but nothing would make him surrender faster than annihilation.
Shouldn't the vassal axe change forms too? Or was the axe hero using just one form to combat the sword hero? Ballsy.
Specially since Ragnarok breaker was basically just a skill.
Why would legendary sword punish emiya for tracing rho aias? He doesn't need to hold the conceptual shield in his hand and also he didn't trace it with the intention to fight, only to protect himself... No rule stated by the cardinal weapon was actually broken... If just holding a weapon is gonna zap him, how is he cooking all the time?
Old enough to kill, definately old enough to drink u dumbass.
4/23 c25 Star
I think you have forgotten about levels. No mention of opponent levels throughout the tournament and emiya even laughed when the cronny told him he had so l sent 20 men after team emiya... Without even considering that perhaps their level could be high enough to be a problem.
The panda woman talking about how emiya doesn't fit in the world. Gurl of course he doesn't. He was summoned!
Don't force connections where there are none. Atla looks nothing like illya. If she does than i look like chris Hemsworth .
Emiya the counter guardian can't trace avalon? Even though Shirou emiya the boi could and did? Or maybe that was the actual sheath? It has been decades since I watched Deen's adaptation... Anyway your explanation for emiya not tracing avalon is bs. It doesn't matter whether he gave avalon or not, as a heroic spirits, his legend(or lack thereof) started with avalon. So it will be recorded in the throne as well.
I think you have forgotten about levels. No mention of opponent levels throughout the tournament and emiya even laughed when the cronny told him he had so l sent 20 men after team emiya... Without even considering that perhaps their level could be high enough to be a problem.
The panda woman talking about how emiya doesn't fit in the world. Gurl of course he doesn't. He was summoned!
Don't force connections where there are none. Atla looks nothing like illya. If she does than i look like chris Hemsworth .
Emiya the counter guardian can't trace avalon? Even though Shirou emiya the boi could and did? Or maybe that was the actual sheath? It has been decades since I watched Deen's adaptation... Anyway your explanation for emiya not tracing avalon is bs. It doesn't matter whether he gave avalon or not, as a heroic spirits, his legend(or lack thereof) started with avalon. So it will be recorded in the throne as well.