for Killer Vacation: The 45th Hunger Games SYOT Parody11/12/2023 c34 
65LadyCordeliaStuart
Ah LOL they made her a fortune-teller. With Capitol tact, we're lucky they didn't make her a Romani stereotype.
All right, Poppy-Rose Blumenthal. Going by the name, we got a possible Jewish Victor. Nice.
Ooh is the next story a normal SYOT?
65LadyCordeliaStuartAh LOL they made her a fortune-teller. With Capitol tact, we're lucky they didn't make her a Romani stereotype.
All right, Poppy-Rose Blumenthal. Going by the name, we got a possible Jewish Victor. Nice.
Ooh is the next story a normal SYOT?
11/11/2023 c34 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
NOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE BLOOD RED RUBIESSSSSSSS
I'm so happy that Mara gets a reasonable body and not like. 32GGs lol. She honestly sounds like she looks super cool
Omg we're almost done omg
35SilverflowerXRavenpawNOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT THE BLOOD RED RUBIESSSSSSSS
I'm so happy that Mara gets a reasonable body and not like. 32GGs lol. She honestly sounds like she looks super cool
Omg we're almost done omg
8/2/2023 c33 57AmericanPi
Great chapter!
I really like the comical tone of the POV's! Like, everyone is so sassy and sarcastic. It really fits a parody SYOT. I love how the action is really intense but funny at the same time. Mara slashing Aggra's Achilles tendon and then strangling her to death with her bra is hilarious because it's serious, then funny. I honestly kind of hope you write another parody SYOT because your writing style fits a parody SYOT very well.
Keep it up!
57AmericanPiGreat chapter!
I really like the comical tone of the POV's! Like, everyone is so sassy and sarcastic. It really fits a parody SYOT. I love how the action is really intense but funny at the same time. Mara slashing Aggra's Achilles tendon and then strangling her to death with her bra is hilarious because it's serious, then funny. I honestly kind of hope you write another parody SYOT because your writing style fits a parody SYOT very well.
Keep it up!
7/31/2023 c33 65LadyCordeliaStuart
at last it's here, and it was everything we hoped for. Mara shook that ball one last time and it came up "Victor". a worthy Victor to be sure, who followed a very conventional path and defeated all others. Long may she live.
65LadyCordeliaStuartat last it's here, and it was everything we hoped for. Mara shook that ball one last time and it came up "Victor". a worthy Victor to be sure, who followed a very conventional path and defeated all others. Long may she live.
7/30/2023 c33 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I CAN'T BELIEVE IT YESSSSSSSSSSSS I thought for sure Mara would lose bc I mean Aggra's a Career and also LCS can use a Victor too but I was HOPING for Mara SO HARD
I wish you could've seen my face because like literally the way my face FELL when it took too long for her POV to start and I thought that Aggra was going to get the only POV and when Mara realized she didn't have enough weapons and AHHHHHHH this was too much of a rollercoaster but my FAVORITE LITTLE FORTUNE TELLER WON AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
35SilverflowerXRavenpawYESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I CAN'T BELIEVE IT YESSSSSSSSSSSS I thought for sure Mara would lose bc I mean Aggra's a Career and also LCS can use a Victor too but I was HOPING for Mara SO HARD
I wish you could've seen my face because like literally the way my face FELL when it took too long for her POV to start and I thought that Aggra was going to get the only POV and when Mara realized she didn't have enough weapons and AHHHHHHH this was too much of a rollercoaster but my FAVORITE LITTLE FORTUNE TELLER WON AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
3/27/2023 c31 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
LOL Aggra and Mara. Mara just like ? how am I alive
Misread the chapter and thought Mara had won but I'm glad she's still around :)
Nice chapter as always! I can't wait for the next chapter, finale or not. Great drama and great not exactly mutts.
LOL Aggra and Mara. Mara just like ? how am I alive
Misread the chapter and thought Mara had won but I'm glad she's still around :)
Nice chapter as always! I can't wait for the next chapter, finale or not. Great drama and great not exactly mutts.
3/25/2023 c31 65LadyCordeliaStuart
Alas may Dora the blooper Tribute rest in peace. Glad to see she stayed this long and you're definitely right she's better suited for a conventional Res Games. Omg lol are you about to submit her to mine? I am slow sometimes.
oooh, 50/50 chance of getting my second ever winner. Or someone else will get a winner, which is also nice.
65LadyCordeliaStuartAlas may Dora the blooper Tribute rest in peace. Glad to see she stayed this long and you're definitely right she's better suited for a conventional Res Games. Omg lol are you about to submit her to mine? I am slow sometimes.
oooh, 50/50 chance of getting my second ever winner. Or someone else will get a winner, which is also nice.
3/25/2023 c31 Vr
You wanted a review, you got a review. JK. Congrats on making it to the finale!
You wanted a review, you got a review. JK. Congrats on making it to the finale!
12/5/2022 c30 LadyCordeliaStuart
OoooOOoooooh at this point Silver and I have a pretty good chance. Not counting our chickens before they hatch but...
RIP archimedes may he peacefully find salubrious rejuvenation in his subterranean repose.
Kinda funny how the non-parody tribute made it this far but I guess it's meta or something. Probably Mara and aggra and the others have a better chance but oh well. Or maybe Dora will pull off her skin and reveal she's a lizard person or something.
Can't believe we're almost at the end! The suspense is killing me
OoooOOoooooh at this point Silver and I have a pretty good chance. Not counting our chickens before they hatch but...
RIP archimedes may he peacefully find salubrious rejuvenation in his subterranean repose.
Kinda funny how the non-parody tribute made it this far but I guess it's meta or something. Probably Mara and aggra and the others have a better chance but oh well. Or maybe Dora will pull off her skin and reveal she's a lizard person or something.
Can't believe we're almost at the end! The suspense is killing me
12/3/2022 c30 DefinitelySilver
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TOP FOUR AND MARA IS STILL ALIVE
What a legend the crystal ball must really be helping her.
Anyway I really liked this scene :) I like how you described the explosion a lot and I like that it killed both Archimedes and his target - an interesting decision. And we're almost to the end of this grand adventure! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TOP FOUR AND MARA IS STILL ALIVE
What a legend the crystal ball must really be helping her.
Anyway I really liked this scene :) I like how you described the explosion a lot and I like that it killed both Archimedes and his target - an interesting decision. And we're almost to the end of this grand adventure! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
7/22/2022 c29 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
LOL I love the chapter title
Everyone but Mara should die next actually :)
Anyway this was a nice, short chapter. I like how it juxtaposes against the last, longer chapter. I also like that Mara got to brain someone with her eight ball. Someone whose skull apparently is stronger than solid crystal LOL
35SilverflowerXRavenpawLOL I love the chapter title
Everyone but Mara should die next actually :)
Anyway this was a nice, short chapter. I like how it juxtaposes against the last, longer chapter. I also like that Mara got to brain someone with her eight ball. Someone whose skull apparently is stronger than solid crystal LOL
7/22/2022 c29 65LadyCordeliaStuart
Wow, character development in a parody story. This parody out here being better than a lot of serious fics.
Aggra fears no sun. She already has a dozen undetected skin cancers and one more won't kill her any deader.
Dora is BACK IN THE GAME. Probably won't win becuse she's not relly parodic but what if it's a DOUBLE PARODY nd she DOES win?
I think Aggra should win because she is parodic but also sincere and just a cool girl. But if she doesn't win tht is oky
65LadyCordeliaStuartWow, character development in a parody story. This parody out here being better than a lot of serious fics.
Aggra fears no sun. She already has a dozen undetected skin cancers and one more won't kill her any deader.
Dora is BACK IN THE GAME. Probably won't win becuse she's not relly parodic but what if it's a DOUBLE PARODY nd she DOES win?
I think Aggra should win because she is parodic but also sincere and just a cool girl. But if she doesn't win tht is oky
7/17/2022 c28 LadyCordeliaStuart
RIP Perfecta, the best Tribute who ever lived. Surely it ws mockery of justice tht she did not win. lso RIP Loom. Tht's rough, buddy.
Shoutout to ggr for going "tht's my secret. I'm alwys sunburned". She must hve like eight kinds of skin cncer. Hope they hve sunscreen in Four.
ll other reviewers: the first letter of the lphbet key on my lptop broke so I'm improvising LOL
Wow, six lft (exclmtion mrk is lso broken). I don't think it will be rchimedes but nyone else could bring this ll home. Here's rooting for M r or ggr , since I think Dor is longer shot
RIP Perfecta, the best Tribute who ever lived. Surely it ws mockery of justice tht she did not win. lso RIP Loom. Tht's rough, buddy.
Shoutout to ggr for going "tht's my secret. I'm alwys sunburned". She must hve like eight kinds of skin cncer. Hope they hve sunscreen in Four.
ll other reviewers: the first letter of the lphbet key on my lptop broke so I'm improvising LOL
Wow, six lft (exclmtion mrk is lso broken). I don't think it will be rchimedes but nyone else could bring this ll home. Here's rooting for M r or ggr , since I think Dor is longer shot
7/17/2022 c28 Kkstar47 Cassy
Ay no perfecta :(
Ay no perfecta :(