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35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Oh my gosh "I toss him aside..."
I really love these kids. They're all over the place and so stupid. They're mean and criminals and for some reason they insist on crabwalking? They're really fun.
I'm glad you're not dead :P Nice chapter, hah. Looking forward to the next, of course.
35SilverflowerXRavenpawOh my gosh "I toss him aside..."
I really love these kids. They're all over the place and so stupid. They're mean and criminals and for some reason they insist on crabwalking? They're really fun.
I'm glad you're not dead :P Nice chapter, hah. Looking forward to the next, of course.
2/5/2021 c7 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Yasss Rosemary! What a grand adventure lol
Oh I've seen Laicao's idea around! I'm glad he finally got written hah. It'll be fun to see how he affects the Games...
I'm so PUMPED we got another CHAPTER
35SilverflowerXRavenpawYasss Rosemary! What a grand adventure lol
Oh I've seen Laicao's idea around! I'm glad he finally got written hah. It'll be fun to see how he affects the Games...
I'm so PUMPED we got another CHAPTER
1/4/2021 c5 LittleAvery88
Good chapters! I missed reviewing District 7 and I am late to 10 but I’m here now. These tributes are all cool and have interesting traits about them. I really enjoyed the new way of writing in this chapter, I like hearing the mentors’ stories.
Good chapters! I missed reviewing District 7 and I am late to 10 but I’m here now. These tributes are all cool and have interesting traits about them. I really enjoyed the new way of writing in this chapter, I like hearing the mentors’ stories.
1/2/2021 c5 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Oooh, this was fun! It'll be nice to see more about these tributes, because we learned a lot about the mentors this chapter, but I'm sure you'll get there when you do.
I love that Argon's Games were a mess whereas Cowgo was just like "I'm gonna make some animal noises :)"
Oooh, this was fun! It'll be nice to see more about these tributes, because we learned a lot about the mentors this chapter, but I'm sure you'll get there when you do.
I love that Argon's Games were a mess whereas Cowgo was just like "I'm gonna make some animal noises :)"
12/1/2020 c4 4adoxographyy
Absolutely amazing job! I don’t have time to write a long review since it’s late my time, but you portrayed Pine absolutely perfectly. Splinter is interesting too!
4adoxographyyAbsolutely amazing job! I don’t have time to write a long review since it’s late my time, but you portrayed Pine absolutely perfectly. Splinter is interesting too!
12/1/2020 c4 35SilverflowerXRavenpaw
YASSSSSS They're so bad
Okay Birch Treé absolutely sent me as a name. She would make a good ally for Perfecta. 10/10. She's so dumb djeodnhcude
Splinter is going to be so good. I sense an early, self-sacrificial death. RIP my dude.
35SilverflowerXRavenpawYASSSSSS They're so bad
Okay Birch Treé absolutely sent me as a name. She would make a good ally for Perfecta. 10/10. She's so dumb djeodnhcude
Splinter is going to be so good. I sense an early, self-sacrificial death. RIP my dude.
12/1/2020 c3 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Did somebody say... submit more?
Lol. Anyway it's fine to take all the time in the world! It be like that.
Did somebody say... submit more?
Lol. Anyway it's fine to take all the time in the world! It be like that.
11/16/2020 c2 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Oh dang, Oedipus is gonna be super cool lol. Pumped to read about him.
I love Maeve so much. This type of story is the best.
Okay, I really love what you did with this chapter. I was curious as to why Oedipus had such short POVs, but then you explained! And so well. Of *course* It switched to his parents. The kid had stabbed his eye out. That's so good! I am curious as to whether that was a flashback - the POV says eighteen, but that seems like a kid thing to do, not an 18yo. Still, I love that you're playing around with formatting to find what works best for each character. That's so cool!
Oh dang, Oedipus is gonna be super cool lol. Pumped to read about him.
I love Maeve so much. This type of story is the best.
Okay, I really love what you did with this chapter. I was curious as to why Oedipus had such short POVs, but then you explained! And so well. Of *course* It switched to his parents. The kid had stabbed his eye out. That's so good! I am curious as to whether that was a flashback - the POV says eighteen, but that seems like a kid thing to do, not an 18yo. Still, I love that you're playing around with formatting to find what works best for each character. That's so cool!
11/14/2020 c2 LittleAvery88
I love how Maeve’s mom is actually kind of scared of her. Her mom does act like a toddler. Anyways, I like that Maeve shows she’s got some confidence.
Did he just stab his own eye out? For a dare. That’s got to hurt. Wow, I actually like Oedipus.
Nice chapter! Exciting for the next reapings.
I love how Maeve’s mom is actually kind of scared of her. Her mom does act like a toddler. Anyways, I like that Maeve shows she’s got some confidence.
Did he just stab his own eye out? For a dare. That’s got to hurt. Wow, I actually like Oedipus.
Nice chapter! Exciting for the next reapings.
11/9/2020 c1 LittleAvery88
I liked this chapter...
Perfecta was reminding me a Snow White in the beginning. Anywho, she seems like a good District 1 tribute. Gary-Stu seems nice. His name, and district partners names are entertaining. I don’t mean that in a bad way.
Good pov’s overall!
I liked this chapter...
Perfecta was reminding me a Snow White in the beginning. Anywho, she seems like a good District 1 tribute. Gary-Stu seems nice. His name, and district partners names are entertaining. I don’t mean that in a bad way.
Good pov’s overall!