for The conflict of 3 Worlds5/18/2021 c3 
4Major Simi
The chapter is ok but a bit jumbled in regards to what happens. It could be a bit more coherent . Anyway great chapter
4Major SimiThe chapter is ok but a bit jumbled in regards to what happens. It could be a bit more coherent . Anyway great chapter
5/18/2021 c3 The Follower Of Power
Glad you got back mate I see great potential in this story just gotta fix a couple grammar issues and this would be great also thanks for putting both units of measurements true bro good luck.
Glad you got back mate I see great potential in this story just gotta fix a couple grammar issues and this would be great also thanks for putting both units of measurements true bro good luck.
1/22/2021 c1 Guest
I live near the area of Santa Cruz, so this is personal. Not you author, but towards the Saderans.
I live near the area of Santa Cruz, so this is personal. Not you author, but towards the Saderans.
12/27/2020 c1 Guest
For those who don't know, you can choose to shoot Alex on the leg.
For those who don't know, you can choose to shoot Alex on the leg.
12/26/2020 c1 Alastor343
Interesting fic but please do not base yourself on the anime, it was very childish
Interesting fic but please do not base yourself on the anime, it was very childish
12/24/2020 c2 Guest
Great story, but I think you should improve your grammar
Great story, but I think you should improve your grammar