for A Flower for the Soul2/15/2023 c20 Ltbutterfly287
84 to the wizarding world really isn’t that old. Wizards can live anywhere from 150-180.
84 to the wizarding world really isn’t that old. Wizards can live anywhere from 150-180.
2/14/2023 c19 Ltbutterfly287
That was a pretty terrible presentation of how Arcturus Black would teach Harry to interact politically. What Harry did and some of what he said would equate to immediate political suicide.
That was a pretty terrible presentation of how Arcturus Black would teach Harry to interact politically. What Harry did and some of what he said would equate to immediate political suicide.
2/14/2023 c9 Ltbutterfly287
As far as I can see people only like to write extreme abuse fics or fics where harry is a very withdrawn and emotionally impassive person solely because it's easier to not have to deal with making someone expressive or unique and instead make them so uninteresting and uninspired that when you break the shell and and brank out into a relationship it all comes off as quite cringe and inorganic.
As far as I can see people only like to write extreme abuse fics or fics where harry is a very withdrawn and emotionally impassive person solely because it's easier to not have to deal with making someone expressive or unique and instead make them so uninteresting and uninspired that when you break the shell and and brank out into a relationship it all comes off as quite cringe and inorganic.
2/3/2023 c13 ColdxCold
Out of all your stories. I feel this is the only one where the relationship is being upon Harry.
Out of all your stories. I feel this is the only one where the relationship is being upon Harry.
2/1/2023 c36 
8HarryPotterFangirl85
This story has been sitting in my digital library for months, I’m glad I finally took time to read it. I was a bit surprised that none of the kids were named after Tom though, I was sorta expecting it.
8HarryPotterFangirl85This story has been sitting in my digital library for months, I’m glad I finally took time to read it. I was a bit surprised that none of the kids were named after Tom though, I was sorta expecting it.
1/27/2023 c15 Luxo11
Ain’t gonna hold you, I love most of your work but this was a shit chapter. My biggest pet peeve in writing is when an author nerfs someone so they can force plot progression because they could think of no other way to do so.
Ain’t gonna hold you, I love most of your work but this was a shit chapter. My biggest pet peeve in writing is when an author nerfs someone so they can force plot progression because they could think of no other way to do so.
1/26/2023 c36 1SauliusTheBlack
I loved this story. a powerful Harry that had to work for it. intelligent but not genius, human and flawed.
thank you!
1SauliusTheBlackI loved this story. a powerful Harry that had to work for it. intelligent but not genius, human and flawed.
thank you!
1/24/2023 c37 Wolfstar1307
I know this story is so far done but I think it's absolutely amazing, there is only one thing I wish it had and that's a final chapter where harry dies and finally sees Tom again
I know this story is so far done but I think it's absolutely amazing, there is only one thing I wish it had and that's a final chapter where harry dies and finally sees Tom again
1/19/2023 c22 winniesm
The beginning of the story started out so nice but Fleur just sucks the fun out of everything. Too much damned feelings and being a spoiled princess. I really don't know what this hardened Harry sees in that bitch. Too blinded with her emotions and scarred him for life and everyone is fine with it? He's better off without her.
The beginning of the story started out so nice but Fleur just sucks the fun out of everything. Too much damned feelings and being a spoiled princess. I really don't know what this hardened Harry sees in that bitch. Too blinded with her emotions and scarred him for life and everyone is fine with it? He's better off without her.
1/15/2023 c15 1kasicair
The story is very well-written.
Unfortunately, the blend of dense, stubborn, and selectively stupid the author is making his MC is not to my liking. It is pretty frustrating for me to read.
That's why, personally, no matter how well-written the story is, it's not for me.
1kasicairThe story is very well-written.
Unfortunately, the blend of dense, stubborn, and selectively stupid the author is making his MC is not to my liking. It is pretty frustrating for me to read.
That's why, personally, no matter how well-written the story is, it's not for me.
1/7/2023 c33 god eater
i like that you dont bash dumbledore here. he's ultimately human, but will not forget his transgressions against harry. cooperation makes the dream work after all
i like that you dont bash dumbledore here. he's ultimately human, but will not forget his transgressions against harry. cooperation makes the dream work after all
1/7/2023 c27 god eater
man, dumbledore really took a gamble on him cornering harry a la tom/ because if harry was really tom, then tom would have defeated him no doubt because their bodies are different and harry would run laps around the titan, though with difficulty im sure. not just that, but also with the elder wand, if it was tom, no one could have really stopped him taking over especially that the wand is cruel to its masters
man, dumbledore really took a gamble on him cornering harry a la tom/ because if harry was really tom, then tom would have defeated him no doubt because their bodies are different and harry would run laps around the titan, though with difficulty im sure. not just that, but also with the elder wand, if it was tom, no one could have really stopped him taking over especially that the wand is cruel to its masters
12/29/2022 c36 spyguard
Just finished reading this story today. I think it is great from beginning to end. Strangely, one of the best parts are for me Harry interacting with Serana. Would have been nice to have it a bit more, but nonetheless very well done to make her likeable to the extend you did. Pacing overall was very well done. Thank you!
Just finished reading this story today. I think it is great from beginning to end. Strangely, one of the best parts are for me Harry interacting with Serana. Would have been nice to have it a bit more, but nonetheless very well done to make her likeable to the extend you did. Pacing overall was very well done. Thank you!