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11/30/2020 c4 BMS
Good one
11/30/2020 c4 USA-Jeanette
Thank you! I look forward to seeing how the next year goes!
11/30/2020 c4 autumngold
Outstanding story! Thank goodness your Harry has Tom to keep him safe and healthy. Even better is that he has someone to support and take care of him. It's too bad that no other adult in his life has cared to. Thank you for letting Sirius get away unharmed. Fabulous story!
11/30/2020 c4 cfosterstars
Great chapter... I cant wait for the next ones. Please please keep it going.
11/30/2020 c4 Qul
Wonderful chapter i really enjoyed reading about Harry's third year has to be my favorite year so far! Keep up the good work Author you are doing Great I am looking forward to following your work in the future.
11/30/2020 c4 WalkerFRD
Ok, eu comecei a ler a fic recentemente e desanimei um pouco quando vi que ele era um Ravenclaw, mas tenho que admitir que estou gostando bastante da fic.
Aguardando o próximo capítulo.
11/28/2020 c3 Guest
I suppose I expected too much from you, since I enjoyed most of Stepping Back. The whole Tom/basilisk scene just reeks of inexperienced fanfiction writer though. The quality of your writing really went down the drain once you started forcing canon paths. Too bad.
11/30/2020 c4 flight.of.the.phoenix.86
and so the Blacks enter the story!

update soon!
11/28/2020 c3 Guest
No idea why it sent that one early. Anyway:

For someone who put focus on having written a unique type of story, you sure are reaching far and hard to push a copy of canon events. First the mirror room, now joining the duelling club and event having Flint summon a snake and repeat the events there. It makes no sense that it would happen in this way and it's really making your story worse for it.

Was very close to stop reading at that point. Don't know why you have such a hard time steering away from canon.
11/28/2020 c3 Guest
Eugh.. for someone who seemed q
11/28/2020 c2 Guest
Very confused why he would drag Harry down to the mirror. That felt like a really, really large reach in order to mimic canon down in that room.
11/28/2020 c1 Guest
While this is not a unique idea, it remains an interesting one.
11/30/2020 c4 3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Good chapter but strange ending. Thanks for sharing!
11/30/2020 c4 Uchicha ASHU
This story is getting better and better the more it is progressing ...
I had some reservations after second chapter like how Harry can just take Tom’s response that he is on his side on face value after all he was a part of Voldemort, no matter what he may belong now ...
But seeing as in the starting of chapter 3 you explained that it was not an easy sailing for them and they still had arguments about it made it more acceptable ...
Regarding the chapter itself I am very surprised at the amount of details you usually cover subtly like Dumbledore’s negligence, Harry’s still unresolved issues with bullying and loneliness, etc ... Its very easy to skip past them as unimportant but together they tell a great story ... The way you dealt with Dementors was also great,,,, I don’t remember reading it somewhere before ... The best though was the whole Werewolf incident,,,, you showed us Harry’s capabilities in practical magic and also his quick thinking to deal with unfavourable incidents ...
Thanks for the chapter ... Keep up the great work!
11/30/2020 c4 bdwilliams3
Absolutely fantastic writing! Love all your work but find this to be the best.
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