for A Flower for the Soul1/23 c8 RK
what was the point of the elemental magic?
harry shrunk the wards to trap the dragon. problem solved? why the snow?
what was the point of the elemental magic?
harry shrunk the wards to trap the dragon. problem solved? why the snow?
1/23 c7 RK
i love how tom deduces the forest and then harry reiterates on the plan by not going but sending snakes instead
it shows everybody is bringing something to the table. its not tom piloting harry. very well written scene
i love how tom deduces the forest and then harry reiterates on the plan by not going but sending snakes instead
it shows everybody is bringing something to the table. its not tom piloting harry. very well written scene
1/22 c2 RK
wtf why didnt tom just reveal himself to voldy? is he insane? he risked death over... what exactly? revealing himself to himself isnt exactly that big a deal especialy if your about to be killed by yourself... idk that seemed so dumb
wtf why didnt tom just reveal himself to voldy? is he insane? he risked death over... what exactly? revealing himself to himself isnt exactly that big a deal especialy if your about to be killed by yourself... idk that seemed so dumb
1/18 c36 
32Arodnas
I can't believe you actually made me cry for Tom. I loved how you integrated him into the story TTwTT
32ArodnasI can't believe you actually made me cry for Tom. I loved how you integrated him into the story TTwTT
1/5 c32 Nimbus2023
As much as I love Serana as a character, you seem to be ignorant on snake physiology. Snakes do not have nostrils, they smell using their forked-tongue. Certain breeds (mainly pit vipers) have pits in their snouts that detect heat but are not used to smell.
As much as I love Serana as a character, you seem to be ignorant on snake physiology. Snakes do not have nostrils, they smell using their forked-tongue. Certain breeds (mainly pit vipers) have pits in their snouts that detect heat but are not used to smell.
1/3 c16 Nimbus2023
Peter Pettigrew plot armor extraordinaire. Out of all the ways Harry could have been subdued, being taken down by Wormtail is just humiliating.
Peter Pettigrew plot armor extraordinaire. Out of all the ways Harry could have been subdued, being taken down by Wormtail is just humiliating.
1/2 c36 1bleachorange
A good story. It did pick up a little, or perhaps I was slightly too down on it a few chapters ago. I felt that way at that point in the story, and it is valid. I might go and check stepping back one more time. I tried it awhile back and the first chapter was really rough to me, but it probably deserves a chance to see if I can make it througha few more chapters at the beginning to see if it picks up at all.
1bleachorangeA good story. It did pick up a little, or perhaps I was slightly too down on it a few chapters ago. I felt that way at that point in the story, and it is valid. I might go and check stepping back one more time. I tried it awhile back and the first chapter was really rough to me, but it probably deserves a chance to see if I can make it througha few more chapters at the beginning to see if it picks up at all.
1/2 c31 bleachorange
Why didnt voldemort use veritaserum? Not that narcissa knew anything, but there is a difference between punishment and trying to use torture for information when magical methods of finding truth such as potions, legilimancy, and even the imperius curse exist.
Why didnt voldemort use veritaserum? Not that narcissa knew anything, but there is a difference between punishment and trying to use torture for information when magical methods of finding truth such as potions, legilimancy, and even the imperius curse exist.
1/2 c35 bleachorange
Overall good, but the quality has fallen sharply towards the end. I find myself lacking in motivation for the final few chapters. Perhaps I will read them, perhaps not.
Overall good, but the quality has fallen sharply towards the end. I find myself lacking in motivation for the final few chapters. Perhaps I will read them, perhaps not.
1/1 c16 bleachorange
Ah, yet another story succumbs to the siren call of the portkey in the 3rd task. I will grant that someone else triggering it is quite rare, but I have made it personal habit to call it out every time harry gets swept along to the graveyard in little hangleton. It is the singularity of almost every hp fanfiction. It fascinates writers to figure out how they can do things differently, yet this one thing always remains the same. Sigh.
The story is good to this point (nor am I dropping it), and I can only say the graveyard sequence was well done. The one thing I can call out is harry not stopping fleur from grabbing the cup, and then what happens to both of them immediately after. You used her as a deus ex cup - it was not very believable. I just always vent when i come to another rendition of the same thing. Its like authors cannot figure out how to write around this, or are so fascinated by it they do not wish to.
Ah, yet another story succumbs to the siren call of the portkey in the 3rd task. I will grant that someone else triggering it is quite rare, but I have made it personal habit to call it out every time harry gets swept along to the graveyard in little hangleton. It is the singularity of almost every hp fanfiction. It fascinates writers to figure out how they can do things differently, yet this one thing always remains the same. Sigh.
The story is good to this point (nor am I dropping it), and I can only say the graveyard sequence was well done. The one thing I can call out is harry not stopping fleur from grabbing the cup, and then what happens to both of them immediately after. You used her as a deus ex cup - it was not very believable. I just always vent when i come to another rendition of the same thing. Its like authors cannot figure out how to write around this, or are so fascinated by it they do not wish to.
12/29/2024 c1 Dot1warner
I am really looking forward to reading this story, you are a fabulous storyteller. These fics are top notch and some of the best out there.
I like how you brought in the older generations.
To NEW readers… read ALL fics here. Many, many hoirs of good reading!
I am really looking forward to reading this story, you are a fabulous storyteller. These fics are top notch and some of the best out there.
I like how you brought in the older generations.
To NEW readers… read ALL fics here. Many, many hoirs of good reading!
12/17/2024 c1 Animeworld2.0
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Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I run a YouTube channel called Infinity Harry (Channel link: Infinityharry), where I share fanfiction stories with an audience that prefers listening over reading.
I would like to inform you that my channel is now monetized, and I make sure to give proper credit in the description of your story. Additionally, I will share the video link under your story review for your view. I respect authors and their copyright.
If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am happy to make changes according to your guidance.
I would greatly appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission.
Thank you!,
12/17/2024 c37 mumphie
I guess I read this before, since it wouldn't let me comment on the last chapter. Oh well. I will say this again, then.
I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful, wonderful story. It's so nice to have a HEA! :)
It moved quickly, was well woven, and your characters really popped. They were believable and your pacing and dialogue was fantastic! I know a really good story when I am smiling at the end, and yet sad that it ended. I am sad that 'Beel' died, but glad that Sirius and Remus did not. Did they ever find love and companionship? Did Hermione find her place in the Magical world? How about Neville?
I also liked how you had Harry grow from the closed off, afraid to accept friendship and love child to someone who could show his love of others.
Again, a wonderful story. Thank you!
I guess I read this before, since it wouldn't let me comment on the last chapter. Oh well. I will say this again, then.
I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful, wonderful story. It's so nice to have a HEA! :)
It moved quickly, was well woven, and your characters really popped. They were believable and your pacing and dialogue was fantastic! I know a really good story when I am smiling at the end, and yet sad that it ended. I am sad that 'Beel' died, but glad that Sirius and Remus did not. Did they ever find love and companionship? Did Hermione find her place in the Magical world? How about Neville?
I also liked how you had Harry grow from the closed off, afraid to accept friendship and love child to someone who could show his love of others.
Again, a wonderful story. Thank you!