for A Flower for the Soul12/29/2024 c1 Dot1warner
I am really looking forward to reading this story, you are a fabulous storyteller. These fics are top notch and some of the best out there.
I like how you brought in the older generations.
To NEW readers… read ALL fics here. Many, many hoirs of good reading!
I am really looking forward to reading this story, you are a fabulous storyteller. These fics are top notch and some of the best out there.
I like how you brought in the older generations.
To NEW readers… read ALL fics here. Many, many hoirs of good reading!
12/17/2024 c1 Animeworld2.0
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Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I run a YouTube channel called Infinity Harry (Channel link: Infinityharry), where I share fanfiction stories with an audience that prefers listening over reading.
I would like to inform you that my channel is now monetized, and I make sure to give proper credit in the description of your story. Additionally, I will share the video link under your story review for your view. I respect authors and their copyright.
If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am happy to make changes according to your guidance.
I would greatly appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission.
Thank you!,
12/17/2024 c37 mumphie
I guess I read this before, since it wouldn't let me comment on the last chapter. Oh well. I will say this again, then.
I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful, wonderful story. It's so nice to have a HEA! :)
It moved quickly, was well woven, and your characters really popped. They were believable and your pacing and dialogue was fantastic! I know a really good story when I am smiling at the end, and yet sad that it ended. I am sad that 'Beel' died, but glad that Sirius and Remus did not. Did they ever find love and companionship? Did Hermione find her place in the Magical world? How about Neville?
I also liked how you had Harry grow from the closed off, afraid to accept friendship and love child to someone who could show his love of others.
Again, a wonderful story. Thank you!
I guess I read this before, since it wouldn't let me comment on the last chapter. Oh well. I will say this again, then.
I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful, wonderful story. It's so nice to have a HEA! :)
It moved quickly, was well woven, and your characters really popped. They were believable and your pacing and dialogue was fantastic! I know a really good story when I am smiling at the end, and yet sad that it ended. I am sad that 'Beel' died, but glad that Sirius and Remus did not. Did they ever find love and companionship? Did Hermione find her place in the Magical world? How about Neville?
I also liked how you had Harry grow from the closed off, afraid to accept friendship and love child to someone who could show his love of others.
Again, a wonderful story. Thank you!
12/14/2024 c20 mumphie
oops - "...more a trial I front of the Wizengamot..."
Really not wanting to be picky. I love your story. Just thought I'd help out.
oops - "...more a trial I front of the Wizengamot..."
Really not wanting to be picky. I love your story. Just thought I'd help out.
12/14/2024 c19 mumphie
oops - "No, however, he had that need."
"...and brought my own home last year."
"...and he's doe bugger all here..."
oops - "No, however, he had that need."
"...and brought my own home last year."
"...and he's doe bugger all here..."
12/13/2024 c14 mumphie
oops - "...I would lie you to cast it."
"I believe there is very little you could do..."
"...not present not much f a problem..."
Again, I love your work. Your 'Honour Thy blood' is one of my favorites, even if it gets a tad grisly at times.
oops - "...I would lie you to cast it."
"I believe there is very little you could do..."
"...not present not much f a problem..."
Again, I love your work. Your 'Honour Thy blood' is one of my favorites, even if it gets a tad grisly at times.
12/13/2024 c13 mumphie
oops - "...how often do you here of people losing their wand..."
"I do not believe you are on to respect stalling tactics..."
Sorry - it's the teacher in me... ;)
I've never noticed typos in your other stories. Maybe I was too entrance within your writings to notice? You write so well, and weave a terrific story. At heart I am a HEA gal.
oops - "...how often do you here of people losing their wand..."
"I do not believe you are on to respect stalling tactics..."
Sorry - it's the teacher in me... ;)
I've never noticed typos in your other stories. Maybe I was too entrance within your writings to notice? You write so well, and weave a terrific story. At heart I am a HEA gal.
12/12/2024 c10 mumphie
Great story! Hoping for a Harry who will learn to open up, and not get burned.
Wondering why he doesn't count living with Sirius as being with someone. I hope he doesn't totally freeze Sirius and Remus out.
Missed a 'w' - "pressing the tip of his and against it"
Great story! Hoping for a Harry who will learn to open up, and not get burned.
Wondering why he doesn't count living with Sirius as being with someone. I hope he doesn't totally freeze Sirius and Remus out.
Missed a 'w' - "pressing the tip of his and against it"
11/16/2024 c15 Sahamosveb
The author asks not to flame. It's okay to criticise:
1. that he doesn't want to risk other people is his decision, which can't be "cancelled" by a simple "it's her decision to risk it or not". Ok, and if he doesn't want to, what then? Make him feel guilty and ask for forgiveness for... Deciding not to risk someone else's life?
2. Women are scaryit's such a cliché that it doesn't even bring a smile.
3. Fleur literally forced Harry into a relationship with her. If Harry did what she did, everyone would be screaming about how toxic and abusive he is.
The author asks not to flame. It's okay to criticise:
1. that he doesn't want to risk other people is his decision, which can't be "cancelled" by a simple "it's her decision to risk it or not". Ok, and if he doesn't want to, what then? Make him feel guilty and ask for forgiveness for... Deciding not to risk someone else's life?
2. Women are scaryit's such a cliché that it doesn't even bring a smile.
3. Fleur literally forced Harry into a relationship with her. If Harry did what she did, everyone would be screaming about how toxic and abusive he is.
11/16/2024 c15 Sahamosveb
Dumbest chapter ever. Stupid teenagers. Stupid "lose to take away her sadness" choice. Ugh. It's disgusting.
"I guess I deserved it." What a disgrace.
Dumbest chapter ever. Stupid teenagers. Stupid "lose to take away her sadness" choice. Ugh. It's disgusting.
"I guess I deserved it." What a disgrace.
11/6/2024 c36 
2ta.shrivastava
I discovered this story when the topic of the soul shard being good was brought up. I have seen the versions where it possesses Harry, turns him evil and other such ideas. But a reformed one was not something I saw. This story was recommended and given I was looking for a large one to occupy my time, I started to read it.
I liked how you developed the relationship between Tom and Harry and how neatly the soul shard and Voldemort are separated as two different characters. That is how they felt to me, I am aware that they are same people with different shades.
I'm glad that you didn't turn Dumbledore into a idiotic villain who has craziest of plans. I mean I get it, those are fun to read. But they kind of get boring after a while. You can only see an idea so many times after all.
That also brings me to the professors. In much of the fan fictions, they are presented as buffoons unworthy of their positions. Either because they are not good in combat (they are teachers!) Or because they are in with Dumbledore to screw Harry in some fashion. But here, you presented them as competent academicians who are experts of their craft, having dedicated their lives to it and expect the same dedication from their apprentices that they have.
However, there are a few complaints I have.
The romance of Harry and Fleur. I felt it took too much screen time. This on itself is not a bad thing, but it felt like the constant loop of guilt, apologies, and the repetition of the fact that Vila are passionate creatures. I mean I get it man, no need to hammer this into my brain already!
I feel like she just ended up an anchor for Harry. Her stake in the plot, especially when it comes to dealing with the villains was unequal. Granted, it is not easy to do, and you would end up bringing a lot of elements to the story which would increase the length, and convolute the plot. It makes sense to keep her where you did, given how the only stake in this is her involvement with Harry. She has come late to the party in this case.
Having said that, ultimately I liked the story you have written, despite my complaints. I have given a detailed analysis to the best of my abilities, hopefully it won't be seen as a flame review. Keep writing!
2ta.shrivastavaI discovered this story when the topic of the soul shard being good was brought up. I have seen the versions where it possesses Harry, turns him evil and other such ideas. But a reformed one was not something I saw. This story was recommended and given I was looking for a large one to occupy my time, I started to read it.
I liked how you developed the relationship between Tom and Harry and how neatly the soul shard and Voldemort are separated as two different characters. That is how they felt to me, I am aware that they are same people with different shades.
I'm glad that you didn't turn Dumbledore into a idiotic villain who has craziest of plans. I mean I get it, those are fun to read. But they kind of get boring after a while. You can only see an idea so many times after all.
That also brings me to the professors. In much of the fan fictions, they are presented as buffoons unworthy of their positions. Either because they are not good in combat (they are teachers!) Or because they are in with Dumbledore to screw Harry in some fashion. But here, you presented them as competent academicians who are experts of their craft, having dedicated their lives to it and expect the same dedication from their apprentices that they have.
However, there are a few complaints I have.
The romance of Harry and Fleur. I felt it took too much screen time. This on itself is not a bad thing, but it felt like the constant loop of guilt, apologies, and the repetition of the fact that Vila are passionate creatures. I mean I get it man, no need to hammer this into my brain already!
I feel like she just ended up an anchor for Harry. Her stake in the plot, especially when it comes to dealing with the villains was unequal. Granted, it is not easy to do, and you would end up bringing a lot of elements to the story which would increase the length, and convolute the plot. It makes sense to keep her where you did, given how the only stake in this is her involvement with Harry. She has come late to the party in this case.
Having said that, ultimately I liked the story you have written, despite my complaints. I have given a detailed analysis to the best of my abilities, hopefully it won't be seen as a flame review. Keep writing!
10/12/2024 c36 10RevDorothyL
Well done! I cried when "Tom" died in Harry's place, and again when Serana died, full of years and well-loved in a sunny, warm home with Harry's family.
10RevDorothyLWell done! I cried when "Tom" died in Harry's place, and again when Serana died, full of years and well-loved in a sunny, warm home with Harry's family.
10/8/2024 c36 1Cele13hrt
Having read several of your stories, I think this one might be my second favorite. One, I hadn't encountered this pairing before, and while I'll try to find some others (like the ones you recommended), I think this one might spoil the rest for me. Personally, I think this is the best romance you've written so far, and maybe the most interesting Harry. The story is perhaps less grand than When the Roses Bloom Again, but the portrayal of Harry as such a brilliant introvert was one I enjoyed. Also, his emotional maturity growth alongside his foil in Fleur was really well done, and I felt like their romance made a lot of sense. I'll keep working through the rest of this catalogue. You're really talented!
1Cele13hrtHaving read several of your stories, I think this one might be my second favorite. One, I hadn't encountered this pairing before, and while I'll try to find some others (like the ones you recommended), I think this one might spoil the rest for me. Personally, I think this is the best romance you've written so far, and maybe the most interesting Harry. The story is perhaps less grand than When the Roses Bloom Again, but the portrayal of Harry as such a brilliant introvert was one I enjoyed. Also, his emotional maturity growth alongside his foil in Fleur was really well done, and I felt like their romance made a lot of sense. I'll keep working through the rest of this catalogue. You're really talented!