
6/2/2024 c1 Guest
Harry should be far richer than that
Harry should be far richer than that
6/1/2024 c26 Guest
I always hate dumble more than voldy. I think he is the ultimate bad guy. A manipulative hypocrite. I think the worst evil is child abuse and dumble is guilty of it, not voldy. His inaction in the name of avoiding killing is cowardly and self serving.. Frankly i hate him
I always hate dumble more than voldy. I think he is the ultimate bad guy. A manipulative hypocrite. I think the worst evil is child abuse and dumble is guilty of it, not voldy. His inaction in the name of avoiding killing is cowardly and self serving.. Frankly i hate him
6/1/2024 c15 Guest
She s toxic a bit. Him, letting her burn him because he felt she needed to hurt him is..not good c9nsidering his history of abuse.. The burn scarring him is bad too
She s toxic a bit. Him, letting her burn him because he felt she needed to hurt him is..not good c9nsidering his history of abuse.. The burn scarring him is bad too
5/27/2024 c1 Grosvenor
thats not how they verify your identity in Gringotts ! They put drops of blood on a piece of parchment and dip it in potion in a bowl, then read it!
thats not how they verify your identity in Gringotts ! They put drops of blood on a piece of parchment and dip it in potion in a bowl, then read it!
5/25/2024 c1 l30rusty
why would he return to the dursleys why not a potter property or a magical tent
why would he return to the dursleys why not a potter property or a magical tent
5/6/2024 c37 Guest
Good story
Good story
5/1/2024 c5 Placeholder00005
The pacing of this story is genuinely terrible. Truthfully, I would have found it less jarring for you to have skipped the first three years of Hogwarts entirely. It feels like doing them as one chapter each got you in the habit of rushing through things to the point chapters feel like summaries more than scenes.
The pacing of this story is genuinely terrible. Truthfully, I would have found it less jarring for you to have skipped the first three years of Hogwarts entirely. It feels like doing them as one chapter each got you in the habit of rushing through things to the point chapters feel like summaries more than scenes.
5/1/2024 c2 Placeholder00005
The whole Tom and Voldemort thing seems odd. In a confrontation between Harry and the latter, it really feels like Tom should have intervened. At this point, the two should be more or less equal fragments of the same soul. Tom convincing Voldemort that Harry isn't his enemy was the least that I was expecting here.
The whole Tom and Voldemort thing seems odd. In a confrontation between Harry and the latter, it really feels like Tom should have intervened. At this point, the two should be more or less equal fragments of the same soul. Tom convincing Voldemort that Harry isn't his enemy was the least that I was expecting here.
4/26/2024 c4 Guest
Really nice and unique third year...
Really nice and unique third year...
4/26/2024 c36
3tenga
Be still my bleeding heart! i actually had tears in my eyes when Serana passed on. As I did when Harry put Tom to rest.
Considering Dumbledore would have lived to about 130 in this fic, I choose to imagine that Fleur and Harry have another 60 years of bliss, dancing, and no doubt copius, wildly inventive sex ahead of them.
10/10 story. I absolutely loved it. It ranks among the very best i have ever read on this site. The characterisation was phenomenal.
Bravo, and thank you for the journey. I'll be going to read everything else you've ever written now.
james

Be still my bleeding heart! i actually had tears in my eyes when Serana passed on. As I did when Harry put Tom to rest.
Considering Dumbledore would have lived to about 130 in this fic, I choose to imagine that Fleur and Harry have another 60 years of bliss, dancing, and no doubt copius, wildly inventive sex ahead of them.
10/10 story. I absolutely loved it. It ranks among the very best i have ever read on this site. The characterisation was phenomenal.
Bravo, and thank you for the journey. I'll be going to read everything else you've ever written now.
james