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16/5/2021 c1 Guest
Continue please.
Continue please.
12/28/2020 c1 Acqua OfThe Back
Que final tan jodido... ME ENCANTO
Seguiré este Fic espero lo continúes
Que final tan jodido... ME ENCANTO
Seguiré este Fic espero lo continúes
12/10/2020 c1 Guest
Interesting start! A few suggestions... he's going to be underpowered for his level if he doesn't get a bonus to HP and MP based on level. Perhaps 25*level added to relevant stat/10? Sneaking should probably be a passive skill, with Stealth being a bonus or a temporary effect like a cloaking device or something. Not sure if you're going to have him be able to raise his stats through training, but I look forward to his character progression. Nice to see a mc who regrets losing their family due to their translocation. Maybe have his Gamer's Mind take the edge off his grief, but still let him feel. A lot of authors make it so their characters are fairly emotionless. That way lies a sociopath. Something to keep in mind.
Interesting start! A few suggestions... he's going to be underpowered for his level if he doesn't get a bonus to HP and MP based on level. Perhaps 25*level added to relevant stat/10? Sneaking should probably be a passive skill, with Stealth being a bonus or a temporary effect like a cloaking device or something. Not sure if you're going to have him be able to raise his stats through training, but I look forward to his character progression. Nice to see a mc who regrets losing their family due to their translocation. Maybe have his Gamer's Mind take the edge off his grief, but still let him feel. A lot of authors make it so their characters are fairly emotionless. That way lies a sociopath. Something to keep in mind.
12/5/2020 c1 Marco Geddes
Really interesting so far, definitely going to favorite the story. Keep up the good work!
Really interesting so far, definitely going to favorite the story. Keep up the good work!
11/29/2020 c1 Zerak
Why is the age 15? I can understand if you want him to be a Genius, but there are legal things he can’t do as a 15 year old. Like get a new house or receive money as a settlement without his mom knowing.
It would make sense if he was emancipated, but I don’t think he can’t do that before 18 and even then he would need a valid reason.
Why is the age 15? I can understand if you want him to be a Genius, but there are legal things he can’t do as a 15 year old. Like get a new house or receive money as a settlement without his mom knowing.
It would make sense if he was emancipated, but I don’t think he can’t do that before 18 and even then he would need a valid reason.
11/25/2020 c1 Zentari2238
That was... something. It comes out as shallow and forced. Pick a theme, and stick to it.
That was... something. It comes out as shallow and forced. Pick a theme, and stick to it.
11/21/2020 c1 Mr Beaver Buttington
This guy is the type of dude to win the lottery and become homeless in the span of 2 years.
This guy is the type of dude to win the lottery and become homeless in the span of 2 years.