for Vex4/20 c1 Guest
I hope you continue doing this story
I hope you continue doing this story
4/3 c10 PaleFeed
I mean the story isnt bad but it is kind of boring. There has been little to no action so far. I’ll try to read it again at a later date but its just too slow.
I mean the story isnt bad but it is kind of boring. There has been little to no action so far. I’ll try to read it again at a later date but its just too slow.
3/27 c10 Chris
Ok you pretty much lost me here Chapter 10, The problem is that your Vex is too powerful! Considering all the antagonists in the Marvel universe, almost none of them are on the same level as a Kryptonian and if the hero doesn't struggle to win you lose the excitement of the story, it gets bland. Now I know Magic is a hard counter for Krytonians only if they allow themselves to be slow enough for the regulars to catch. Teaching Vex Magic even removes that as a threat. There was no lead up to Jane jumping Vex, it sort of popped out of the blue. I mean I could see Darcy jumping Thor's bones straight away, because her character is a bit shallower, but not Jane.
Anyway, after all this rambling crap, I am out.
My 2 cents worth.
Chris
Ok you pretty much lost me here Chapter 10, The problem is that your Vex is too powerful! Considering all the antagonists in the Marvel universe, almost none of them are on the same level as a Kryptonian and if the hero doesn't struggle to win you lose the excitement of the story, it gets bland. Now I know Magic is a hard counter for Krytonians only if they allow themselves to be slow enough for the regulars to catch. Teaching Vex Magic even removes that as a threat. There was no lead up to Jane jumping Vex, it sort of popped out of the blue. I mean I could see Darcy jumping Thor's bones straight away, because her character is a bit shallower, but not Jane.
Anyway, after all this rambling crap, I am out.
My 2 cents worth.
Chris
3/10 c4 realfan16
giving a kryptonian the counter to one of their only weakness isn't that a bit much...but then again none could stop a mind controlled Cerion...
giving a kryptonian the counter to one of their only weakness isn't that a bit much...but then again none could stop a mind controlled Cerion...
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