for Lightning God of the Hidden Sky Island1/9 c2 SPark681
Hmm, a nice chapter would Hinata be in this just wondering other than that keep up the great work!
Hmm, a nice chapter would Hinata be in this just wondering other than that keep up the great work!
1/8 c2 pedro.hccalixto01
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor
Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor
12/26/2020 c2 reap2
So far, not bad, don't know if you know this or not, but in the Naruto movies, the one with the Zero Tail Beast, there is a Sky Ninja Village, you could make them the first enemy of Skypiea, which will draw attention to them.
So far, not bad, don't know if you know this or not, but in the Naruto movies, the one with the Zero Tail Beast, there is a Sky Ninja Village, you could make them the first enemy of Skypiea, which will draw attention to them.
12/24/2020 c2 PhoenixDragon90
Great Chapter!
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!
Stay Safe.
Happy Holidays.
Great Chapter!
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!
Stay Safe.
Happy Holidays.
12/23/2020 c2 NoaRien
Great job can’t wait for more but in the parings you had Sarada isn’t she Sakura daughter and can you have hinata
Great job can’t wait for more but in the parings you had Sarada isn’t she Sakura daughter and can you have hinata
12/21/2020 c2 bastidaswilliam2005
i like Scheherazade to the harem (after looking her because i dont have seen fate)
i like Scheherazade to the harem (after looking her because i dont have seen fate)
12/18/2020 c2 AshBladeHentai
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
12/17/2020 c2 
403headed-dragon
Great chapter I can't wait to see what happens next and further development of Naruto's connection with the people he'll soon be leading.
403headed-dragonGreat chapter I can't wait to see what happens next and further development of Naruto's connection with the people he'll soon be leading.
12/17/2020 c2 1insanemaelstorm
This was great. The highlight was obviously how Naruto helped the girls and how angry he got seeing their treatment. Like how he made friends and even got his first priests. Like how Naruto is a bit shy, which makes sense. Really love the character interactions and how Naruto is getting along with everyone. Can't wait to read more
1insanemaelstormThis was great. The highlight was obviously how Naruto helped the girls and how angry he got seeing their treatment. Like how he made friends and even got his first priests. Like how Naruto is a bit shy, which makes sense. Really love the character interactions and how Naruto is getting along with everyone. Can't wait to read more