for into silent water4/21/2022 c27 SergeantNeko
This has taken me the longest to read of any story because I'vefor onceread all the text between the speeches. Amazing story, and a very neat canon divergence that I honestly think would have worked better for the story, instead of what we had in the game. Good show.
This has taken me the longest to read of any story because I'vefor onceread all the text between the speeches. Amazing story, and a very neat canon divergence that I honestly think would have worked better for the story, instead of what we had in the game. Good show.
4/17/2022 c27 
3Archangel Writings
I’ve been with this story a long time, and while I’m sad to see it end, it’s preferable to a long unneeded drawn out plot. You’ve done great work remaining in the games plot while still making it yours with many many many tweaks that not only made sense, but also trimmed the unneeded (and boring) fat that many game novelization fics fall into. Amazing work, and I’m sure I’ll be back to reread it one day…
3Archangel WritingsI’ve been with this story a long time, and while I’m sad to see it end, it’s preferable to a long unneeded drawn out plot. You’ve done great work remaining in the games plot while still making it yours with many many many tweaks that not only made sense, but also trimmed the unneeded (and boring) fat that many game novelization fics fall into. Amazing work, and I’m sure I’ll be back to reread it one day…
1/2/2022 c27 Ancalagon
Thank you for sharing this story.
In particular, thank you for handling the ending carefully. I am often saddened by stories which remove Zelda from the rebuilding of Hyrule. In my opinion, she would never abandon people to whom she could give aid, even if she could be considered to have done more than enough on their behalf.
Thank you for sharing this story.
In particular, thank you for handling the ending carefully. I am often saddened by stories which remove Zelda from the rebuilding of Hyrule. In my opinion, she would never abandon people to whom she could give aid, even if she could be considered to have done more than enough on their behalf.
12/30/2021 c1 random
26 chapters, reviews, & favs wow
nice fic by the way
26 chapters, reviews, & favs wow
nice fic by the way
8/16/2021 c23 23the7horcrux
I actually loved this chapter. Revali not being quite as a jerk, Link and Revali making up at the end, Teba being the worthy successor, and Link's adventure getting there. Great job. Hope you update faster than you did last time!
23the7horcruxI actually loved this chapter. Revali not being quite as a jerk, Link and Revali making up at the end, Teba being the worthy successor, and Link's adventure getting there. Great job. Hope you update faster than you did last time!
6/20/2021 c21 2zViridian
i’ve followed this since start and continue to be impressed over your storytelling and your own little twists to the original story. Keep it up, cant wait for more
2zViridiani’ve followed this since start and continue to be impressed over your storytelling and your own little twists to the original story. Keep it up, cant wait for more
5/6/2021 c20 23the7horcrux
This is a wonderful story! Your characterization of Link, Impa, Zelda, and all the rest are simply brilliant. I love the bigger narrative that you're creating along with the other structure of the game. One of my favorite parts of the story is when Link has memories from other TLoZ games, it pulls everything together amazingly. Keep writing and update soon!
23the7horcruxThis is a wonderful story! Your characterization of Link, Impa, Zelda, and all the rest are simply brilliant. I love the bigger narrative that you're creating along with the other structure of the game. One of my favorite parts of the story is when Link has memories from other TLoZ games, it pulls everything together amazingly. Keep writing and update soon!
5/3/2021 c20 James Birdsong
Nice three chapters
Nice three chapters
5/3/2021 c12 Ancalagon
I am racing through this story. It is well-told and I like the attention to detail you are including.
I am racing through this story. It is well-told and I like the attention to detail you are including.
5/3/2021 c1 Ancalagon
I'm always keen to read well-written BOTW retellings :)
I'm always keen to read well-written BOTW retellings :)
2/28/2021 c17 James Birdsong
Good three chapters
Good three chapters
2/7/2021 c15 Vexyuki
Haha the pot lid reflect story in the game oh that’s hilarious and insane at the same time but I expect nothing from a reckless boy.
Pot lid should be a shield again in botw2 just for this fact.
Haha the pot lid reflect story in the game oh that’s hilarious and insane at the same time but I expect nothing from a reckless boy.
Pot lid should be a shield again in botw2 just for this fact.
2/3/2021 c14 James Birdsong
Good fourteen chapters
Good fourteen chapters