for Optimistic Game: Revised6/22 c1 
2Uzumaki Creed
I like the concept, i havent watched RWBY so most characters are a blank to me….. Ried though is kinda anticlimatic…. He seems forcefully edgy and instinctual even with something like gamers mind there to capm him down…. Getting his heart pierced like three times now and not dying has made me a little less worried about his health because after a battle he is perfectly fine…
Then there is the plot that does not seem to go anywhere….. i get he is leveling up but when you have half of every chapter talking about skills and not the story itself then it feels like reading a manual and not playing a game…..
I will continue reading though…i have had a writers block and altough i mainly mentioned negative things because that is human nature… i will say i have been enjoying the read and some of the antics from RIED the edgelord as ive come to call him
2Uzumaki CreedI like the concept, i havent watched RWBY so most characters are a blank to me….. Ried though is kinda anticlimatic…. He seems forcefully edgy and instinctual even with something like gamers mind there to capm him down…. Getting his heart pierced like three times now and not dying has made me a little less worried about his health because after a battle he is perfectly fine…
Then there is the plot that does not seem to go anywhere….. i get he is leveling up but when you have half of every chapter talking about skills and not the story itself then it feels like reading a manual and not playing a game…..
I will continue reading though…i have had a writers block and altough i mainly mentioned negative things because that is human nature… i will say i have been enjoying the read and some of the antics from RIED the edgelord as ive come to call him
6/19 c22 Guest
I decided to reread this just for fun and I came across this old Quest that I'm not entirely sure if he got the rewards for.
Quest added
[Seeds of God-Defying Magic]
Objective: Grant magic to five females
Bonus Objective: Grant magic to ten females
Rewards: 5000 Credits, 5000 EXP, Special Observe Upgrade, 1 Gacha Token
Bonus Rewards: 7500 Credits, 7500 EXP, [Alluring Gaze] Perk
Time Limit: 6 Months, 3 Weeks, 2 Days
I decided to reread this just for fun and I came across this old Quest that I'm not entirely sure if he got the rewards for.
Quest added
[Seeds of God-Defying Magic]
Objective: Grant magic to five females
Bonus Objective: Grant magic to ten females
Rewards: 5000 Credits, 5000 EXP, Special Observe Upgrade, 1 Gacha Token
Bonus Rewards: 7500 Credits, 7500 EXP, [Alluring Gaze] Perk
Time Limit: 6 Months, 3 Weeks, 2 Days
6/17 c66 Numbet1ebaystoregmail
it's nice to see ozpin in the dark gives him a taste of what everyone else pts up with around him
it's nice to see ozpin in the dark gives him a taste of what everyone else pts up with around him
6/16 c7 Guest
Wait a minute, was that a shoto Todoroki reference I saw? Awesome.
Wait a minute, was that a shoto Todoroki reference I saw? Awesome.
6/15 c66 Fire turtle
I wonder what Sienna magic is going to be. Maybe lava, or maybe lightning? Or will she get Shadow Magic just like Blake?
I wonder what Sienna magic is going to be. Maybe lava, or maybe lightning? Or will she get Shadow Magic just like Blake?
6/15 c66 Guest
love it
love it
6/15 c59 Macilnar
So even after acknowledging that she should have aimed to kill Adam before, when she gets the chance she knocks him unconscious instead.
So even after acknowledging that she should have aimed to kill Adam before, when she gets the chance she knocks him unconscious instead.