for Optimistic Game: Revised7/21/2024 c68 Neo Infinity
Thanks for the great chapter yea raven is big mess but I would still kill cinderbitch.
Thanks for the great chapter yea raven is big mess but I would still kill cinderbitch.
7/20/2024 c68 
4AnonTheKingOfCitrus18
Holy f$cking Oum, Raven's a f$cking retard! yeesh... You did real good at writing a truly hateable character Mirlnir, I can't even put into words what it is about the way your version of Raven acts that tilts me so much. I just feel seething, incandescent rage whenever she opens her Brothers damned mouth. I totally gotta agree with Reid, B!tch deserves death, and she's gonna have to put in some SERIOUS F$CKING WORK, if she wants to keep her head at the end of this fiasco.
4AnonTheKingOfCitrus18Holy f$cking Oum, Raven's a f$cking retard! yeesh... You did real good at writing a truly hateable character Mirlnir, I can't even put into words what it is about the way your version of Raven acts that tilts me so much. I just feel seething, incandescent rage whenever she opens her Brothers damned mouth. I totally gotta agree with Reid, B!tch deserves death, and she's gonna have to put in some SERIOUS F$CKING WORK, if she wants to keep her head at the end of this fiasco.
7/20/2024 c67 1Sindas
reid could make chimera golems that would be cool as shit, imagine it, centaurs, lynels, minotaurs, traditional chimeras, manticores, medusa-like snake people things, any kind of were-animal, the possibilities are endless, also i'm wondering if the homonculi thing only includes artificial humans or if it would include other animals. granted, it could be limited to humans and allow other animals after it's maxed, maybe even as one of those specialization things, but idk
1Sindasreid could make chimera golems that would be cool as shit, imagine it, centaurs, lynels, minotaurs, traditional chimeras, manticores, medusa-like snake people things, any kind of were-animal, the possibilities are endless, also i'm wondering if the homonculi thing only includes artificial humans or if it would include other animals. granted, it could be limited to humans and allow other animals after it's maxed, maybe even as one of those specialization things, but idk
7/18/2024 c47 Sindas
"thankfully i have a 5 month deadline, which will be more than long enough for me to kill another titan without any effort,"
annie the eelnoble human, i have come to assist you in your quest"
"thankfully i have a 5 month deadline, which will be more than long enough for me to kill another titan without any effort,"
annie the eelnoble human, i have come to assist you in your quest"
7/15/2024 c25 Sindas
love the callback of ruby getting startled by the same "squirrel" as taiyang's friend i forgot the name of, cool fleshing out that the titan uses the same method to lower someone's guard, almost like a human habit it exhibits
love the callback of ruby getting startled by the same "squirrel" as taiyang's friend i forgot the name of, cool fleshing out that the titan uses the same method to lower someone's guard, almost like a human habit it exhibits
7/15/2024 c21 Sindas
moron should have taken the rest of the library as well since he already has translation notes for it
moron should have taken the rest of the library as well since he already has translation notes for it
7/14/2024 c16 Sindas
also are there duplicate common dungeons to explain why he somehow has the quicksilver boots even though he failed that quest?
also are there duplicate common dungeons to explain why he somehow has the quicksilver boots even though he failed that quest?
7/10/2024 c27 erozoth
Damn it, I couldn't make it again, last time I stopped at earlier chapter. The amount of stuff I think is bad in this story is too much, the mental manipulation of the flaws, I consider them as killing the MC and replacing him with an alternate variant.
The constant near death and then luck to defeat the enemies.
The power of luck and friendship basically.
The trash quests, making the MC stronger after the enemy dies, utterly useless and defeats the purpose of a gamer novel, the entire concept was create for quick powerup.
The MC... smart, stupid, rash, calculative, depending on what the author wants and that brings it to the worse part of this story:
Everything is controller by the author, like all stories really, but here it is obvious and so it is predictable, just waiting for the next nerf, the nerf surprise that will make things harder, and the next luck that will solve it.
Like I said, the annoyance of all of this is real, the drama is now, while other novels give a sense of excitement (similar stories), this one does not, like the author thought: I have a great idea for a story, like those others I read, but I will make it more real!
The writing quality is unquestionably good, the main reason I tried again and hoped I would like it, the style of writing is also very good, the idea is something I like.
Damn it, I couldn't make it again, last time I stopped at earlier chapter. The amount of stuff I think is bad in this story is too much, the mental manipulation of the flaws, I consider them as killing the MC and replacing him with an alternate variant.
The constant near death and then luck to defeat the enemies.
The power of luck and friendship basically.
The trash quests, making the MC stronger after the enemy dies, utterly useless and defeats the purpose of a gamer novel, the entire concept was create for quick powerup.
The MC... smart, stupid, rash, calculative, depending on what the author wants and that brings it to the worse part of this story:
Everything is controller by the author, like all stories really, but here it is obvious and so it is predictable, just waiting for the next nerf, the nerf surprise that will make things harder, and the next luck that will solve it.
Like I said, the annoyance of all of this is real, the drama is now, while other novels give a sense of excitement (similar stories), this one does not, like the author thought: I have a great idea for a story, like those others I read, but I will make it more real!
The writing quality is unquestionably good, the main reason I tried again and hoped I would like it, the style of writing is also very good, the idea is something I like.