for Optimistic Game: Revised6/15/2024 c66 Guest
love it
love it
6/15/2024 c59 Macilnar
So even after acknowledging that she should have aimed to kill Adam before, when she gets the chance she knocks him unconscious instead.
So even after acknowledging that she should have aimed to kill Adam before, when she gets the chance she knocks him unconscious instead.
6/15/2024 c66 BeetleRUs
The fear for Ozpin is harmful, he could ask for a secret and then he would reveal his secret?
The fear for Ozpin is harmful, he could ask for a secret and then he would reveal his secret?
6/15/2024 c66 
2AvidReader2425
Thank you very much for another excellent chapter, and the final line made me chuckle a little bit since that man usually keeps others in the dark, gotta love karma.
2AvidReader2425Thank you very much for another excellent chapter, and the final line made me chuckle a little bit since that man usually keeps others in the dark, gotta love karma.
6/15/2024 c1 Grant10000
This story is one of, if not the Most Retarded. NGL. I'm not gonna say why because everyone who actually knows the definition of cringe and power wanking knows why. This is the type of story that losers who suck in real life will write. They're desperate to feel good about themselves. Fckin edgelords with no actual edge.
This story is one of, if not the Most Retarded. NGL. I'm not gonna say why because everyone who actually knows the definition of cringe and power wanking knows why. This is the type of story that losers who suck in real life will write. They're desperate to feel good about themselves. Fckin edgelords with no actual edge.
6/13/2024 c1 Zyxis Ouroboros ReArchtypist
This is okay. The main character feels painfully generic, and there are a couple grammatical errors. Still, it's alright. i hope things get better as it goes.
This is okay. The main character feels painfully generic, and there are a couple grammatical errors. Still, it's alright. i hope things get better as it goes.