for Optimistic Game: Revised11/25/2020 c1 Jack1nTheBox
I would be mad about the fact that he chose fire magic but if those 4 were my only options I would do the same. where is the unique magic! Maybe later i guess
I would be mad about the fact that he chose fire magic but if those 4 were my only options I would do the same. where is the unique magic! Maybe later i guess
611/25/2020 c2 wandering reader
please don't railroad the mc into being a hero. i don't mind him being one just try not to make it so forceful... please note i understand that its your story, i was just giving my opinion.
please don't railroad the mc into being a hero. i don't mind him being one just try not to make it so forceful... please note i understand that its your story, i was just giving my opinion.
11/24/2020 c2 LordJarJar
Ya-hoo mir, disa was another amazen chaptah by yousa! me wonderen what goen to happenen in da next chapter? disa story already more good den yous old una! most good of luck!
lord jar jar
Ya-hoo mir, disa was another amazen chaptah by yousa! me wonderen what goen to happenen in da next chapter? disa story already more good den yous old una! most good of luck!
lord jar jar
11/24/2020 c2 G119
Is Reid part Saiyan? It'd explain the near DBS Goku levels of 'I need to fight!'
Also get started on that restoration potion glitch BB! God Howard hasn't patched it yet.
Is Reid part Saiyan? It'd explain the near DBS Goku levels of 'I need to fight!'
Also get started on that restoration potion glitch BB! God Howard hasn't patched it yet.
11/24/2020 c1 TruePork
Firstly can you drop the whole God complex royalty thing he is neutral good, but acts like a psycho that is above every one his personality in chapter one was pretty good. And secondly if all it took was some random ingredients a mortal and pester with a bit of aura it would already be around so you should change your alchemy system a bit...
Firstly can you drop the whole God complex royalty thing he is neutral good, but acts like a psycho that is above every one his personality in chapter one was pretty good. And secondly if all it took was some random ingredients a mortal and pester with a bit of aura it would already be around so you should change your alchemy system a bit...