for Optimistic Game: Revised11/30/2020 c11 
13Vinnypaul
I honestly will say that you have done what most writers don't do...made the reboot better. I love this story
13VinnypaulI honestly will say that you have done what most writers don't do...made the reboot better. I love this story
11/30/2020 c11 ilikefreedom
Now this chapter was absolutely masterful a ride from start to finish it surpasses the original in every way you did amazing work.
Now this chapter was absolutely masterful a ride from start to finish it surpasses the original in every way you did amazing work.
11/30/2020 c11 Y33t
i also have no clue why people hate clones for being overused, because things only get overused because they work
i also have no clue why people hate clones for being overused, because things only get overused because they work
11/30/2020 c10 ilikefreedom
Well this chapter was certainly ominous but awesome. don't listen to what those haters say you're doing amazing with this story and I eagerly await each chapter that comes out. it brightens up my day every time one comes out so thank you for reading this amazing story.
Well this chapter was certainly ominous but awesome. don't listen to what those haters say you're doing amazing with this story and I eagerly await each chapter that comes out. it brightens up my day every time one comes out so thank you for reading this amazing story.
11/30/2020 c11 4Haxorus knight
"...the clone thing was scrapped lol. No Reid clones, don't worry.
Don't know why people hate em..."
Probably because they don't have it... and they are jealous
4Haxorus knight"...the clone thing was scrapped lol. No Reid clones, don't worry.
Don't know why people hate em..."
Probably because they don't have it... and they are jealous
11/30/2020 c1 1ISleep
Also, just for fun, I thought hard about what I would choose in this customization scenario. I would absolutely do Dagger because I can have multiple of those, throw them, carry them discretely, and parry/counter easily with them. I would go Wind Magic because while Water is insane when you're creative with it, fire is the most easily destructive, and earth is terrifying when you consider how you would still have access to it in a space ship or another planet...
I chose Wind because if the place I am in doesn'tt have air, I am as good as dead unless I can potentionally make my own air. Not to mention that it is just as scary as water if you're creative with it. I would choose Light Armor as well for the same reason as him, but also because I could potentially just wear normal clothes and be considered "armored".
Lastly, I would choose Engineering. Mostly because I have always been into Tinkers from Worm, and nothing is saying Engineering will bar you from Bonesaw-Levels "Bio-Engineering".
Definitely would choose Question mark. They wouldn't make me a full monster, or at least not something that cant wear armor/equip weapons (So Goblins, Orcs, Kobolds, etc) so I wouldn't mind that too much, especially since I could get a much stronger race like Undead or something. Also would definitely take any Perks I could get. Pretty sure that is it, would be pretty fun
1ISleepAlso, just for fun, I thought hard about what I would choose in this customization scenario. I would absolutely do Dagger because I can have multiple of those, throw them, carry them discretely, and parry/counter easily with them. I would go Wind Magic because while Water is insane when you're creative with it, fire is the most easily destructive, and earth is terrifying when you consider how you would still have access to it in a space ship or another planet...
I chose Wind because if the place I am in doesn'tt have air, I am as good as dead unless I can potentionally make my own air. Not to mention that it is just as scary as water if you're creative with it. I would choose Light Armor as well for the same reason as him, but also because I could potentially just wear normal clothes and be considered "armored".
Lastly, I would choose Engineering. Mostly because I have always been into Tinkers from Worm, and nothing is saying Engineering will bar you from Bonesaw-Levels "Bio-Engineering".
Definitely would choose Question mark. They wouldn't make me a full monster, or at least not something that cant wear armor/equip weapons (So Goblins, Orcs, Kobolds, etc) so I wouldn't mind that too much, especially since I could get a much stronger race like Undead or something. Also would definitely take any Perks I could get. Pretty sure that is it, would be pretty fun
11/30/2020 c1 ISleep
"No One can be my equalFuture!Akane
*Future!Kuro and Future!Shiro clearly ignored*
I swear, one of these days, I need to read a battle between any two in this trio...
"No One can be my equalFuture!Akane
*Future!Kuro and Future!Shiro clearly ignored*
I swear, one of these days, I need to read a battle between any two in this trio...
11/30/2020 c10 G119
I honestly like both versions. I personally like the old version of the Ruby scene better, IDK it was cuter and felt more warm, I think.
Honestly, just keep doing you my guy. I enjoy the story and a bunch more are too, this story wouldn’t have so many follow/ favs if not.
In my experience, the people that shit on Ruby x OC, a lot of them are okay with xxxtra spicy white rose or Lancaster or god forbid rose garden! That last one is just shooting yourself in the foot!
I honestly like both versions. I personally like the old version of the Ruby scene better, IDK it was cuter and felt more warm, I think.
Honestly, just keep doing you my guy. I enjoy the story and a bunch more are too, this story wouldn’t have so many follow/ favs if not.
In my experience, the people that shit on Ruby x OC, a lot of them are okay with xxxtra spicy white rose or Lancaster or god forbid rose garden! That last one is just shooting yourself in the foot!
11/30/2020 c10 Mattysteel
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Ngl I think at least this Isekai is fun because although you made the progression way too fast, but you at least added new challenges plus a whole new canon for it. Now only one question remains for me: what happens when he beats a world? Does he just get sent away again? Cause that would be awful. Not only to the other characters but to him. If he did imagine the pain he just feel for leaving everyone behind after every world he beats? Will he be able to go back like this was KH or is it permanent? Well you don’t have to answer the questions honestly, I just can’t wait to see what you got in store next but also keep in mind the questions above.
Can’t wait for the next chapter. Ngl I think at least this Isekai is fun because although you made the progression way too fast, but you at least added new challenges plus a whole new canon for it. Now only one question remains for me: what happens when he beats a world? Does he just get sent away again? Cause that would be awful. Not only to the other characters but to him. If he did imagine the pain he just feel for leaving everyone behind after every world he beats? Will he be able to go back like this was KH or is it permanent? Well you don’t have to answer the questions honestly, I just can’t wait to see what you got in store next but also keep in mind the questions above.
11/30/2020 c10 Guest
I honestly don't see the problem. You guys are so demanding, like can't you just enjoy a story for once?
Jeez. Good MCs are honestly a nice change of pace
considering that evil MCs are everywhere these days.
I honestly don't see the problem. You guys are so demanding, like can't you just enjoy a story for once?
Jeez. Good MCs are honestly a nice change of pace
considering that evil MCs are everywhere these days.