for Optimistic Game: Revised11/30/2020 c10 SasquatchY
Y'know what, you caught me off guard with Hazel dying. After your last chapter I figured he'd survive, as you'd specifically not had him cuffed. Well played, friend.
Y'know what, you caught me off guard with Hazel dying. After your last chapter I figured he'd survive, as you'd specifically not had him cuffed. Well played, friend.
11/30/2020 c10 JackWhitenight
I'll admit, I am bit pissed. I understand what the point of this interlude is, but I expected complete chapter with reactions to Titan's death and ripples it will cause. So please, don't disappoint in next chapter, and PLEASE upload next chapter quicker. Great work as allways.
I'll admit, I am bit pissed. I understand what the point of this interlude is, but I expected complete chapter with reactions to Titan's death and ripples it will cause. So please, don't disappoint in next chapter, and PLEASE upload next chapter quicker. Great work as allways.
11/30/2020 c10 HollowSeven
Sooo. You still went with the whole “Evil Grimm clone” plot line? Eh. Not a fan. Nothing against you, just really hate that trope in general.
Sooo. You still went with the whole “Evil Grimm clone” plot line? Eh. Not a fan. Nothing against you, just really hate that trope in general.
11/30/2020 c10 
2NeroAlmia
I feel your pain, dude. These guys complaining about something as laughable as THAT are so annoying.
...But overall, this was a good chapter, even if it's a bit short. It has no relevance with the previous statement up there, but I'm barely able to think clearly right now. I'm tired... That's no excuse though.
A small question, you talked previously about a different set of alignments on a few chapters ago (Also, sorry if my English feels awkward. I'm not a native speaker, and for a weird reason I can't manage to focus right now, so...), "Chaotic MORAL" specifically. Where I can give it a look to this different set? As far as I know, the few variations I managed to find are on the Nasuverse, such as Chaotic Mad... Among others, however ridiculous they are. I would be grateful if you can point me to the right direction.
Thanks for the chapter!
2NeroAlmiaI feel your pain, dude. These guys complaining about something as laughable as THAT are so annoying.
...But overall, this was a good chapter, even if it's a bit short. It has no relevance with the previous statement up there, but I'm barely able to think clearly right now. I'm tired... That's no excuse though.
A small question, you talked previously about a different set of alignments on a few chapters ago (Also, sorry if my English feels awkward. I'm not a native speaker, and for a weird reason I can't manage to focus right now, so...), "Chaotic MORAL" specifically. Where I can give it a look to this different set? As far as I know, the few variations I managed to find are on the Nasuverse, such as Chaotic Mad... Among others, however ridiculous they are. I would be grateful if you can point me to the right direction.
Thanks for the chapter!
11/30/2020 c10 56Neon dagger
I am somewhat curious to see just what something created with part of the gamer's body would be able to do, if this bit is like the original that is, it might be interesting to say the least cause the dark wolf shiro approached the idea but ended up ending the fic due to as*holes being what they are so I am curious and hopeful
56Neon daggerI am somewhat curious to see just what something created with part of the gamer's body would be able to do, if this bit is like the original that is, it might be interesting to say the least cause the dark wolf shiro approached the idea but ended up ending the fic due to as*holes being what they are so I am curious and hopeful
11/30/2020 c10 2Hiremsage00
Try to avoid the same mistakes while making new ones. This will be a challenge later and emphasize how battle maniac is the flaw of idiots. Good chapter though, shame one of them had to die. Even though I loath their hypocrisy they much better than the irredeemable psycho.
2Hiremsage00Try to avoid the same mistakes while making new ones. This will be a challenge later and emphasize how battle maniac is the flaw of idiots. Good chapter though, shame one of them had to die. Even though I loath their hypocrisy they much better than the irredeemable psycho.
11/30/2020 c10 4Haxorus knight
"Ruby is a teen, seducing her bad!" conveniently forgets that Reid is merely one year older, which makes him a teen too.
Which means cheesy flirting
4Haxorus knight"Ruby is a teen, seducing her bad!" conveniently forgets that Reid is merely one year older, which makes him a teen too.
Which means cheesy flirting
11/29/2020 c8 Notice me sempai.2nd
Forgot to add
Reid astora SS Rank hunter
Hunter of Titan's-Slayer of fenrir
Thats probably something ozpin's gonna say to when torchwick steals his shit and hurts bunny waifu
Forgot to add
Reid astora SS Rank hunter
Hunter of Titan's-Slayer of fenrir
Thats probably something ozpin's gonna say to when torchwick steals his shit and hurts bunny waifu