for Optimistic Game: Revised11/28/2020 c8 Time's Avatar
Keep Going And Thanks For The Chapter
Keep Going And Thanks For The Chapter
11/28/2020 c8 
2Hiremsage00
I'm not disappointed at the semblance. In fact you finally delivered. I would like to see how it can evolve further and what aspect of his character is the basis of it. But I'm confused. Was he already wearing a mask before tyrian and hazel attacked or did he put it on during the fight?
2Hiremsage00I'm not disappointed at the semblance. In fact you finally delivered. I would like to see how it can evolve further and what aspect of his character is the basis of it. But I'm confused. Was he already wearing a mask before tyrian and hazel attacked or did he put it on during the fight?
11/28/2020 c8 SlothDGod
Ominous.
I liked the small DBZ Abridged reference. It was touching.
Also, yeah, really weird how Team CFVY’s Semblances are so... odd? It just made more sense what it was believed to be before. Now, you gotta watch for making sure the Semblances are correct and that’s gonna SUUUCK!
Ominous.
I liked the small DBZ Abridged reference. It was touching.
Also, yeah, really weird how Team CFVY’s Semblances are so... odd? It just made more sense what it was believed to be before. Now, you gotta watch for making sure the Semblances are correct and that’s gonna SUUUCK!
11/28/2020 c7 Maksell
Hi!
Just want to say few things.
1. Love your story, in few places kinda feel rushed, but you wrote most things the same way like in oreginal so I don't blame you. There are few little errors here and there, but nothing that could make me angry or annoyed to much. So keep the good stuff coming, will ya?
2. I am more happy of this version, original had few flaws that irked me...bigger ones compare to this one. But can't have all things the way I want, do I? Kinda shame but a completly normal thing. Its your work, so no matter how much something could irk me, can't change it unless you are willing...yeah.
3. I could praise this work for few minutes...but better not. To much of a praise and stuff goes down usually. But looking at the fact that I don't have to many 'bad' things to talk about either...well its hard to make this review longer...
4. Quick question out of curiosity, lemons or this stuff is not going to be here? Before you say, think, or whatever you want to do, yes, I am a horny bastard and I shall be proud of it to the and of my days.
But really, I don't say that story without this stuff must be bad, just the ones that have...tend to get smaller or bigger boosts in rating and pupularity xd.
5. Your MC is fun, but your Gamer system is generic and annoying...at least from my point of view...nothing that can't be ignored but still. But I can respect the idea of having female "higher" or "veteran" gamer. At least I think 'she' is. From the way you are writing stuff.
Don't many people tend to do that this days...usually someone "higher" is edgy sociopath perverted
"first" gamer or some "thing" like R.O.B that likes to play with mortals, oooorrr bunch of "senior" gamers.
The last one is not that popular but its getting there slowly.
I am happy that you are NOT another, Dark Wolf Shiro (at least for now). Cuz work of this guy and few others is...just...not for me? Don't want to call it terrible, cuz its not. As much as I want to call it that way cuz I hate MOST of it...I just can't do that...I like it or not, his writing is good quality and he writes good amout of stuff. So...I don't like most of his work...not one bit...buuuut I respect it as much as someone that don't like it, can.
But this is about you and your story not him, now.
6. I am a simple man, I like Dark Souls, I like wolfs, you have a great wolf in your story, simple as f' , but sooo god daim good to see it here...sooo have a cookie.
Well that's it from me...at least for now. Keep up the good work, cuz I don't want to stop reading.
Stay safe and happy! Have a great day!
(Sorry for my Eng. not my main lang. ;p )
~Maksell out.
Hi!
Just want to say few things.
1. Love your story, in few places kinda feel rushed, but you wrote most things the same way like in oreginal so I don't blame you. There are few little errors here and there, but nothing that could make me angry or annoyed to much. So keep the good stuff coming, will ya?
2. I am more happy of this version, original had few flaws that irked me...bigger ones compare to this one. But can't have all things the way I want, do I? Kinda shame but a completly normal thing. Its your work, so no matter how much something could irk me, can't change it unless you are willing...yeah.
3. I could praise this work for few minutes...but better not. To much of a praise and stuff goes down usually. But looking at the fact that I don't have to many 'bad' things to talk about either...well its hard to make this review longer...
4. Quick question out of curiosity, lemons or this stuff is not going to be here? Before you say, think, or whatever you want to do, yes, I am a horny bastard and I shall be proud of it to the and of my days.
But really, I don't say that story without this stuff must be bad, just the ones that have...tend to get smaller or bigger boosts in rating and pupularity xd.
5. Your MC is fun, but your Gamer system is generic and annoying...at least from my point of view...nothing that can't be ignored but still. But I can respect the idea of having female "higher" or "veteran" gamer. At least I think 'she' is. From the way you are writing stuff.
Don't many people tend to do that this days...usually someone "higher" is edgy sociopath perverted
"first" gamer or some "thing" like R.O.B that likes to play with mortals, oooorrr bunch of "senior" gamers.
The last one is not that popular but its getting there slowly.
I am happy that you are NOT another, Dark Wolf Shiro (at least for now). Cuz work of this guy and few others is...just...not for me? Don't want to call it terrible, cuz its not. As much as I want to call it that way cuz I hate MOST of it...I just can't do that...I like it or not, his writing is good quality and he writes good amout of stuff. So...I don't like most of his work...not one bit...buuuut I respect it as much as someone that don't like it, can.
But this is about you and your story not him, now.
6. I am a simple man, I like Dark Souls, I like wolfs, you have a great wolf in your story, simple as f' , but sooo god daim good to see it here...sooo have a cookie.
Well that's it from me...at least for now. Keep up the good work, cuz I don't want to stop reading.
Stay safe and happy! Have a great day!
(Sorry for my Eng. not my main lang. ;p )
~Maksell out.