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7/28 c57 8Alexiitz
Es increible lo atrapante de la historia, ya casi la acabo en menos de una semana
7/26 c68 Guest
God, how pathetic of her. Touting all that crap about strength and weakness but the moment something more powerful than her shows up she labels them as monsters, cowers, and wants nothing to do with them.

This, coming from a literal bandit queen who makes it their business to ruin other people's lives in a world where humanity is already being pushed to the brink by literal eldritch monsters.

The hypocrisy is stifling, I'm surprised her neck hasn't snapped yet from the sheer amount of delusion her head is clearly stuffed with. What a total coward indeed.
7/25 c68 Guest
Mmm, thats whatchu get for mouthing off on a nuke shaped like a man like reid

hasnt she met Ironwood? not all of Ozpins allies are save everyone types

im pretty sure James would totally beat ravens ass for her bitchyness if someone doesnt calm him down, or he uses his sociopath semblance that turns him into a robo human or someone physically stops him from doing so

but yeah, tell her reid

Raven aint nothing but an idiotic flighty coward XD

although i hope reid makes a souls sucker pokeball or something to contain the maiden powers if he does kill raven from her sheer self distructiveness

it would be kinda hard for Reids comrades if cinder got all ravens magic

i mean Reid could literally omniman hand spear cinder through the heart with soru and shit but he aint omnipresent

hed be playing the biggest game of among us with a human shaped bomb terrorist

with 4 (5 countries if you count salems domain) as the maps for his hunts

he might be almost omniscient within his area of effecr with his observation haki but he aint omnipresent yet

kinda hope he gets or maybe makes it from scratch the flying thundergod to be almost omnipresent tho

he could make rings for his girls to wear so he could be a teleport away from them in at any time

and maybe some
7/24 c63 1Havenone2324
How many gacha has he got now and whens he gonna use them lol
7/23 c68 kratosroman10
good history
7/23 c51 Havenone2324
Van we get a info page of all his students teachers and allys semblance magic affinity and stats maybe what moves there made like yangs fire armour and rubds light bomb/beam and light sword
7/23 c48 Havenone2324
I hope he cures her shed me a good mistress of magic
7/23 c68 evilstatistic19
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
7/23 c68 Numbet1ebaystoregmail
inlaws
7/22 c68 GrimScarlet
Why would anyone want to kill Raven she’s literally the second hottest female character after Salem.
7/22 c68 yahiro365
fantastic. Great dialogue with this Raven situation. Really enjoyed the pacing of this chapter
7/22 c35 Havenone2324
I hope when gwyn learns magic he just spams magic missiles while zooming around the battle field
7/22 c35 Havenone2324
Summon shego or some female villin cape and make her a crome lord so you can just take over
7/22 c68 3Lennex MacDuff
Nice work! Keep it up!
7/21 c68 Guest
Well raven done fucked up hopefully she can reconcile and make it up to Yang before he kills her
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