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1Miles VorKosigan
In Chapter 12, Jaheira's character sheet says she is a warrior.
Also, every character sheet for Harry and Imoen leaves 'Mage of the Blood' off of the bloodline skills list.
Another issue is that everyone's item box is supposed to spit out its contents upon their death. That never happens.
At the beginning of the story the rule for repairing gear is very restrictive and that changes later in the story.
Another issue that is never discussed. Why do they not try to resurrect Harry's father figure in the beginning?
One last plot hole that I think needs to be addressed is after the fight that included Drizzl, they leave a bunch of bodies lying around. Isn't that a bad idea from the beginning? If you leave a body lying there it could come back from the dead.
These are issues that I think should be addressed in when fixing typos and working on past chapters.
I like the story and the brief interludes that show what is going on out in the Wizarding World. How this monkey wrench has led to things being much better than the OTL.
1Miles VorKosiganIn Chapter 12, Jaheira's character sheet says she is a warrior.
Also, every character sheet for Harry and Imoen leaves 'Mage of the Blood' off of the bloodline skills list.
Another issue is that everyone's item box is supposed to spit out its contents upon their death. That never happens.
At the beginning of the story the rule for repairing gear is very restrictive and that changes later in the story.
Another issue that is never discussed. Why do they not try to resurrect Harry's father figure in the beginning?
One last plot hole that I think needs to be addressed is after the fight that included Drizzl, they leave a bunch of bodies lying around. Isn't that a bad idea from the beginning? If you leave a body lying there it could come back from the dead.
These are issues that I think should be addressed in when fixing typos and working on past chapters.
I like the story and the brief interludes that show what is going on out in the Wizarding World. How this monkey wrench has led to things being much better than the OTL.
12/5 c16 omh666
Fantastic update! Can't wait to see future chapters. Thank you for writing, and again for posting it here for us to read.
Fantastic update! Can't wait to see future chapters. Thank you for writing, and again for posting it here for us to read.
12/2 c16 ulttoanova
I absolutely love this chapter, and this story, I can't wait for more, I hope you update it sooner than usual. I don't have much to say other than really wanting Edwin to stay Edwin, both cause it's funny and I dislike him less as a girl, but also cause he's the type of person I could totally see deciding the magical benefits of the belt are worth far more than his "wand" I don't have much else to say but I absolutely can't wait for more.
I absolutely love this chapter, and this story, I can't wait for more, I hope you update it sooner than usual. I don't have much to say other than really wanting Edwin to stay Edwin, both cause it's funny and I dislike him less as a girl, but also cause he's the type of person I could totally see deciding the magical benefits of the belt are worth far more than his "wand" I don't have much else to say but I absolutely can't wait for more.
12/2 c16 Armiture
I agree with your decision to stick with Harry's portion of the hobgoblin invasion and get all the grinding out of the way; and kudos for not making the blacksmith bargain like Cut-me-own-throat Dibbler from Discworld.
I look forward to the Beregost portion of the hobgoblin campaign, though I wonder if Imoen is officially in charge of the other half because of her auror training and being Harry's childhood friend and second most experienced with the AAS.
I agree with your decision to stick with Harry's portion of the hobgoblin invasion and get all the grinding out of the way; and kudos for not making the blacksmith bargain like Cut-me-own-throat Dibbler from Discworld.
I look forward to the Beregost portion of the hobgoblin campaign, though I wonder if Imoen is officially in charge of the other half because of her auror training and being Harry's childhood friend and second most experienced with the AAS.
12/1 c16 jaclon
Thanks for the update. Love your tale of daring do, as always. Your tales always bring me great enjoyment along with smiles and laughter. ciao til next time
Thanks for the update. Love your tale of daring do, as always. Your tales always bring me great enjoyment along with smiles and laughter. ciao til next time
12/1 c16 jslee102
Looking forward to the next battle and especially the choice of God. I sort of remember the discussion he had a while back with the older paladin, but have already forgotten what advantages if any had. I loved having these chapters to read. I had been missing the story. I like this concept of him in the game a lot better than the “game” harry fics as this seems a lot more balanced mechanics wise and also likely to be finished.
Looking forward to the next battle and especially the choice of God. I sort of remember the discussion he had a while back with the older paladin, but have already forgotten what advantages if any had. I loved having these chapters to read. I had been missing the story. I like this concept of him in the game a lot better than the “game” harry fics as this seems a lot more balanced mechanics wise and also likely to be finished.
11/30 c15 Armiture
A very entertaining finish to a good-sized chapter.
I'm kind of glad this tale isn't based off of BG3, I've heard the werebears can have way too much adult fun in that game.
A belated thanks for the update, missed this one earlier.
A very entertaining finish to a good-sized chapter.
I'm kind of glad this tale isn't based off of BG3, I've heard the werebears can have way too much adult fun in that game.
A belated thanks for the update, missed this one earlier.
11/30 c16 cHaZzi123
Definitely enjoyed this chapter, Thanks :D
Lots of interesting things going on, plenty of intrigue and combat, and a mix of slice of life, made this a thoroughly enjoyable chapter.
Definitely enjoyed this chapter, Thanks :D
Lots of interesting things going on, plenty of intrigue and combat, and a mix of slice of life, made this a thoroughly enjoyable chapter.
11/30 c16 Tribernator
I like this setup. We are seeing harry and crew gradually reach the tier of experienced and powerful adventurers. Normally a fight like this would be a desperate scramble, but with their better stats, more practice, better gear, and better strategy, it became a LOT easier to roflstomp as you put it.
I like this setup. We are seeing harry and crew gradually reach the tier of experienced and powerful adventurers. Normally a fight like this would be a desperate scramble, but with their better stats, more practice, better gear, and better strategy, it became a LOT easier to roflstomp as you put it.
11/29 c16 DarkRavie
I really love this story. It's really good, an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
I really love this story. It's really good, an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.
11/29 c16 28Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
Somehow I'm not surprised Harry ended up sleeping with Viconia.
Honestly, I'm getting tired of Val and her distrust.
28Kairan1979Thanks for the chapter.
Somehow I'm not surprised Harry ended up sleeping with Viconia.
Honestly, I'm getting tired of Val and her distrust.