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9/17 c17 jokko
This is quite good! I don't know if you will see this, but I really want this tory to have a proper ending, so please update!
9/14 c10 Timo
Great story!
9/10 c3 1Dezzal
He knows too much about situations that he shouldn't know about and no one calls him on it it causes a break in the story
9/10 c2 Dezzal
So we just gonna ignore the fact that he is magical and she didn't know that prior to this happening.
9/5 c17 1Spetsnaz Pinkie Pie
please another chapter. PLEASE!
9/3 c17 Midgard Warfare
Two things:
infodumps are boring and dont really contribute anything to the story. I just skim over it.
constant ignored pleas for help from the system are annoying and makes Nick looks like an self destructive dumbshit asshole.
9/3 c17 Joe Schmoe
My thoughts in this: The author doesnt know what he is dong and is trying to put some unneeded angst into a porn harem plot. The MC doesnt have to think hard about stupid things like morality, he can bend the laws of the universe. the fact that his gaming system is glitching is a real problem and he should do something about it. Just ignoring it blatantly asking for help from the inside of his head and thinking about morality of fucking a teen girl is really obtuse. Might makes right, Reality bending powers mean that he can bend reality over and fuck it, and everyone in it. Seems to me that the Game System is probably the source of his reality bending powers, why the hell wouldnt he fix it? Does he want to become powerless in a magical crapsaccharine world? Where Power is very important and the most powerful can do whatever they want?
Hell, I thought that perverted MC with puritanical cockblocking systems were boring, but with the way you wrote the MC this story just is not fun.
Paraphrasing a comment by another Guest: " Is he retarded?" Or the Game System being broken turned his brain into mush?
8/29 c17 moozga
This story od great, can't wait to read more!
8/23 c8 Visual Bliss
Woah so that's how he is gonna bag two potter girls ...nice thinking
8/23 c6 Visual Bliss
Hmm nick is a very good person... I wouldn't feel guilty about that at all lol
8/21 c17 FateBurn
Great story so far, please continue again soon.
8/20 c1 FateBurn
nice start
8/17 c17 AlRBUS DumbLedor
I am very conflicted about this story. It feels like it tries to be different but only achieves to be lacking or burdened by unnecessary plot elements, depending on the reader's perspective.

The initial premise was vaguely that of a gamer fanfic with a harem-seeking protag that is also a Mary Sue. It was not the best initial premise, and the ton of tropes that would have come with it were sure to draw criticism.

The author is certainly aware of that. I surmise that's why he never bothered writing skill lists/grinding sessions and all the jazz that comes with gamer fanfics. Same with the harem, where he was very pragmatic and just got rid of the harem. However, it just makes you wonder what's the point of the story.

The MC is a Mary Sue. That's a fact. This is not even criticism because you expect a Mary Sue in most self-insert fanfic. However, this leaves me extremely confused. Why the Mary Sue trope and not the others? It feels like a cliché story but it is also clear that was not the intent.
8/15 c16 1TheMostAbstract
This book has no reason to be as well-written as it is. Shame on you, author. Now, write some more, please.
8/14 c17 3Necrogod
Good, update soon!
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