for The Heiress Black —REWRITE3/17/2022 c9 Guest
I LOVVVVE IT
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ
I LOVVVVE IT
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ
2/28/2022 c9 
1EverRose808
I definitely want to see the sketch for the charm bracelet! Keep up the awesome work I can't wait to see what happens next!
1EverRose808I definitely want to see the sketch for the charm bracelet! Keep up the awesome work I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/10/2021 c8 WhyCan'tTheyBeReal7
Omg Xanxus was actually being a gentleman wtf omg kskskssk ngl i freaked out lmao xD
dO WE GET SUM BLACK FAMILY BONDING? HELL YEAH
Omg Xanxus was actually being a gentleman wtf omg kskskssk ngl i freaked out lmao xD
dO WE GET SUM BLACK FAMILY BONDING? HELL YEAH
12/10/2021 c5 WhyCan'tTheyBeReal7
I—
Isn’t she oversharing? Even if these weren’t mafioso looking for your weaknesses, it is not normal to share your childhood trauma to a group of strangers (unless the gathering is specifically meant for sharing and therapy or whatever). No really, she does not owe them any explanations on her psyche.
Damn. So the whole neighbourhood knows that they’re getting fucked up? DOESNT THAT SCREAM WEIRD AND MAGIC? What a careless bastard.
Skull is her cousin! Coooolll—I love than headcanon in this xover lol.
Also stillborn son of the Potters; is that canon Harry? Aw ;-;
Always nice to have a parent who cares 3
I hope for more details on the wixen underworld! She has monopoly on it? Weird but do-able. How does Riddle compute into the underworld? I sorta expected him to be a huge part of it too haha;;;
I—
Isn’t she oversharing? Even if these weren’t mafioso looking for your weaknesses, it is not normal to share your childhood trauma to a group of strangers (unless the gathering is specifically meant for sharing and therapy or whatever). No really, she does not owe them any explanations on her psyche.
Damn. So the whole neighbourhood knows that they’re getting fucked up? DOESNT THAT SCREAM WEIRD AND MAGIC? What a careless bastard.
Skull is her cousin! Coooolll—I love than headcanon in this xover lol.
Also stillborn son of the Potters; is that canon Harry? Aw ;-;
Always nice to have a parent who cares 3
I hope for more details on the wixen underworld! She has monopoly on it? Weird but do-able. How does Riddle compute into the underworld? I sorta expected him to be a huge part of it too haha;;;
7/26/2021 c9 Misabeth
I love your story/stories! I will patiently wait for a new chapter but I really like your plot! And this new version is more to my liking than the original because it doesn't seem so rushed from the plot line. I would love to read more about how Xanxus has to deal with a overprotective father and several equally overprotective brothers to be with his soul mate!
I love your story/stories! I will patiently wait for a new chapter but I really like your plot! And this new version is more to my liking than the original because it doesn't seem so rushed from the plot line. I would love to read more about how Xanxus has to deal with a overprotective father and several equally overprotective brothers to be with his soul mate!
7/17/2021 c5 ChaoticMinds
Ugh, you've got to be kidding me! This chapter is so unrealistic it gives me HIVES. There's no bloody way Jade would have spilt her whole life story out to a crowd of STRANGERS. No matter their relation to her father. Ugh, I hate it when I see this bullshit in stories! It never makes sense for the characters to do so, and it just feels contrived. Nobody trusts random strangers with their life stories or secrets. NOBODY.
Ugh, you've got to be kidding me! This chapter is so unrealistic it gives me HIVES. There's no bloody way Jade would have spilt her whole life story out to a crowd of STRANGERS. No matter their relation to her father. Ugh, I hate it when I see this bullshit in stories! It never makes sense for the characters to do so, and it just feels contrived. Nobody trusts random strangers with their life stories or secrets. NOBODY.
6/6/2021 c9 Shadow Wolf 15846
nice! though the chapter does feel a little rushed. im looking forward to the next chapter.
nice! though the chapter does feel a little rushed. im looking forward to the next chapter.