9/28/2023 c18 Guest
well 18 chapters.. and still haven't see Moat Cailin rebuilt, or anything that would make the North stronger. It's just a little girl playing around doing nothing.
well 18 chapters.. and still haven't see Moat Cailin rebuilt, or anything that would make the North stronger. It's just a little girl playing around doing nothing.
7/16/2023 c18 Cata
I hope you come back with your next chapter of her kicking their asses plz I was really hoping she wouldn’t be a defenseless girl
I hope you come back with your next chapter of her kicking their asses plz I was really hoping she wouldn’t be a defenseless girl
5/25/2023 c4 lucifyr04
Ugh I feel so conflicted about this story. On one hand, she just survived a war and was finally free from it. She says she wants to do what she wants from now on and is currently trying to find out what it is. If she were to go to Westeros, she'd be loaded with responsibilities given to her by her ancestors. She's also going to a world where wars and battles are prevalent, it's counterintuitive to what she desires.
On the other hand, the responsibilities would keep her grounded until such a time that she finds meaning and purpose of her life. Especially since people were always dictating her what to do. I guess she could find solace that while someone will dictate her in the future, due to what her role would be, atleast her word still prevails. It would also serve as a guide of many choices on how to restart her life.
Ugh I feel so conflicted about this story. On one hand, she just survived a war and was finally free from it. She says she wants to do what she wants from now on and is currently trying to find out what it is. If she were to go to Westeros, she'd be loaded with responsibilities given to her by her ancestors. She's also going to a world where wars and battles are prevalent, it's counterintuitive to what she desires.
On the other hand, the responsibilities would keep her grounded until such a time that she finds meaning and purpose of her life. Especially since people were always dictating her what to do. I guess she could find solace that while someone will dictate her in the future, due to what her role would be, atleast her word still prevails. It would also serve as a guide of many choices on how to restart her life.
5/2/2023 c18 c.pollock
i love this story, please continue
i love this story, please continue
4/3/2023 c18 Shadowhunter36
This has been an amazing story so far! I have become saddened at how quickly I read through the chapters though I must say. I do have hopes that you will come back to this someday though.
This has been an amazing story so far! I have become saddened at how quickly I read through the chapters though I must say. I do have hopes that you will come back to this someday though.
12/28/2022 c18 Guest
Frankly, I find that she is not prepared enough! She would have had to go around Westeros and the Free Cities to be able to find transplanation points. Then instead of doing everything possible to repair this house, She wastes her time with the Starks, Why not go into the citadel itself and creature, disguised as man or invisible no matter. It almost looks like it has no magic. Why not speed up the construction of moat pebble, by taking workers from free cities and the faults sign binding contracts so that he does their job well and uses magic secretly with Kreatur. Really looks like an ordinary SI and without magic
Frankly, I find that she is not prepared enough! She would have had to go around Westeros and the Free Cities to be able to find transplanation points. Then instead of doing everything possible to repair this house, She wastes her time with the Starks, Why not go into the citadel itself and creature, disguised as man or invisible no matter. It almost looks like it has no magic. Why not speed up the construction of moat pebble, by taking workers from free cities and the faults sign binding contracts so that he does their job well and uses magic secretly with Kreatur. Really looks like an ordinary SI and without magic
12/29/2022 c18 Isabella95
I actually thought about having Jon join her household when they were away, glad that you made a point of that.
I hope you will update soon! I don't think I can stand being on a cliff for too long
I actually thought about having Jon join her household when they were away, glad that you made a point of that.
I hope you will update soon! I don't think I can stand being on a cliff for too long
12/28/2022 c12 Isabella95
the ending here had me on edge. so glad I don't have to wait for a new chapter.
I enjoy long chapters, depending on what's happening og course
the ending here had me on edge. so glad I don't have to wait for a new chapter.
I enjoy long chapters, depending on what's happening og course
11/11/2022 c18 Maverick
great story, please update!
great story, please update!
10/7/2022 c9 sadarsa
Eh... like a dummy, i for some reason didn't notice that this was a romance novel. It was going good there for a bit until Robb came into the picture. guess ill move on then...
Eh... like a dummy, i for some reason didn't notice that this was a romance novel. It was going good there for a bit until Robb came into the picture. guess ill move on then...