for Rey's Mission12/4/2020 c1 
2k+Hawki
So, little tidbit, scripts aren't allowed on this site. Don't worry, I won't tell though.
That said, the formatting is weird. I don't know why you've gone for centre rather than left alignment, but it doesn't make it easy to read. That said, upon reading it, it's...okay. Like, there isn't really anything wrong with the dialogue in of itself, but from a pacing point of view, I wouldn't put this at the start of the movie. This isn't even factoring Last Jedi into things, more that this is a lot of information that comes out very quickly, and all in the one place.
2k+HawkiSo, little tidbit, scripts aren't allowed on this site. Don't worry, I won't tell though.
That said, the formatting is weird. I don't know why you've gone for centre rather than left alignment, but it doesn't make it easy to read. That said, upon reading it, it's...okay. Like, there isn't really anything wrong with the dialogue in of itself, but from a pacing point of view, I wouldn't put this at the start of the movie. This isn't even factoring Last Jedi into things, more that this is a lot of information that comes out very quickly, and all in the one place.