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9AlucardY17
Another great chapter as always! I see that Aegon is going to get a dragon of his own as well! Makes a second Dance of Dragons more climatic. When shall Jon finally marry his other ladies and have children with them?
9AlucardY17Another great chapter as always! I see that Aegon is going to get a dragon of his own as well! Makes a second Dance of Dragons more climatic. When shall Jon finally marry his other ladies and have children with them?
3/18 c88 Janny092
I wish to give a clapping emoji if it were possible for how this chapter ended. Hope to see more soon!
I wish to give a clapping emoji if it were possible for how this chapter ended. Hope to see more soon!
1/19 c21 Church21
This got really dumb when you shoved lord of the rings and pirates into it. It is no longer a game of thrones story just a cross over with an oc mc namex jon anow thats nothing like jon snow
This got really dumb when you shoved lord of the rings and pirates into it. It is no longer a game of thrones story just a cross over with an oc mc namex jon anow thats nothing like jon snow
1/19 c13 Church21
Just got super disappointed in this story so I think I’ll quit. I never really liked the pairing because is their is anything we know for sure about Jon Snow in the books its that he is attracted to strong women. Ygritt and Val are both ferocious not to forget the girl boss herself Danny. Margery is the epitome of a southern dainty lady. Not only that you turned Jon into a cuck thats gonna guard the door while his girl gets fucks and impregnated by someone else. Worst of all you’ve removed all the proud northman from him. North marches to war and he doesn’t return to his brothers side and marches with the flowers instead. In cannon Jon picked up the name the White wolf which since hes niw more reachman then anything in this it wont fit so I suggest the name the cuck flower. Margery is a completely unforgivable bitch in this story. She gets pissed that a girl kissed Jon yet marrys someone else a few chapters later. The least she could do is let him go and move on. Poor cuck flower
Just got super disappointed in this story so I think I’ll quit. I never really liked the pairing because is their is anything we know for sure about Jon Snow in the books its that he is attracted to strong women. Ygritt and Val are both ferocious not to forget the girl boss herself Danny. Margery is the epitome of a southern dainty lady. Not only that you turned Jon into a cuck thats gonna guard the door while his girl gets fucks and impregnated by someone else. Worst of all you’ve removed all the proud northman from him. North marches to war and he doesn’t return to his brothers side and marches with the flowers instead. In cannon Jon picked up the name the White wolf which since hes niw more reachman then anything in this it wont fit so I suggest the name the cuck flower. Margery is a completely unforgivable bitch in this story. She gets pissed that a girl kissed Jon yet marrys someone else a few chapters later. The least she could do is let him go and move on. Poor cuck flower
1/19 c6 Church21
Its a very interesting premis and the writting is great but as a plot I dont think I like a version of Jon that is this disconnected to the north. Jon is the only brother that looks like a stark both bran and rob look like tulleys Jon is pretty much the epitome of what it is to be a northman. Jon of the flowers just isnt near as cool
Its a very interesting premis and the writting is great but as a plot I dont think I like a version of Jon that is this disconnected to the north. Jon is the only brother that looks like a stark both bran and rob look like tulleys Jon is pretty much the epitome of what it is to be a northman. Jon of the flowers just isnt near as cool
11/26/2024 c49 Robtar
this would be an excellent story, but the harem is too big, and it seems the plan is for it to grow. We are at what 6 people now that is well too much as it is.
this would be an excellent story, but the harem is too big, and it seems the plan is for it to grow. We are at what 6 people now that is well too much as it is.
10/24/2024 c68 jccoop54
Why is his targ name baelon when it was aemon last chapter. You really need a beta reader to help with grammer and flaws. Honestly you need to do that with the whole story. Dont feel bad the other Author is just as bad and pretty sure abandoned his version.
Why is his targ name baelon when it was aemon last chapter. You really need a beta reader to help with grammer and flaws. Honestly you need to do that with the whole story. Dont feel bad the other Author is just as bad and pretty sure abandoned his version.
10/22/2024 c52 jccoop54
You know I really like your story tellubg you go into great detail. You really know alot of tolkien and got lore. But your losing me a lil by making john glen quagmire. I could get behind it a bit but adding sansa arya and galadreil is to much john doesnt need to screw everything that moves other than that great story.
You know I really like your story tellubg you go into great detail. You really know alot of tolkien and got lore. But your losing me a lil by making john glen quagmire. I could get behind it a bit but adding sansa arya and galadreil is to much john doesnt need to screw everything that moves other than that great story.
10/17/2024 c4 Pokemark17
These early chapters are super rough especially since I came from one of the authors other stories
These early chapters are super rough especially since I came from one of the authors other stories
9/29/2024 c1 ItzJoe
i take back my initial distain of the story author, it progressively gets better, and i now find myself pleasantly surprised, im now hoping for more to come haha, you got well and good author!
i take back my initial distain of the story author, it progressively gets better, and i now find myself pleasantly surprised, im now hoping for more to come haha, you got well and good author!