for Wolf of Numenor14h c59 ItzJoe
if its been 50 years, then there should be no need to go to westeros? everyone who caused his families downfall are long dead by now?
if its been 50 years, then there should be no need to go to westeros? everyone who caused his families downfall are long dead by now?
21h c57 ItzJoe
ok im done, fuck you, 6 chapters concurrently away from the MC and the main plot? wtaf?
ok im done, fuck you, 6 chapters concurrently away from the MC and the main plot? wtaf?
21h c55 ItzJoe
fuck sake how many chapters are you gonna divert for? we dont need to know how the idiots in westeros are doing especially not over 4 damn chapters! all you had to do was 1 chapter touching upon what they were up to but with the focus upon aegon and sauron, thats it! such an abysmal way to prolong a story
fuck sake how many chapters are you gonna divert for? we dont need to know how the idiots in westeros are doing especially not over 4 damn chapters! all you had to do was 1 chapter touching upon what they were up to but with the focus upon aegon and sauron, thats it! such an abysmal way to prolong a story
9/17 c48 ItzJoe
this is good so far, but there is way too much inner monologuing for my tastes, its like reading an info dump at times as well *sadface*
this is good so far, but there is way too much inner monologuing for my tastes, its like reading an info dump at times as well *sadface*
9/17 c40 ItzJoe
all this crying and what not is ruining this story for me, its maddening, they are battle-hardened men and women, crying over every little thing? are you female by any chance? and why would he swear fealty to elendil if from what manwe has said jon will need to go and rule westeros after he has finished in middle-earth? it makes no sense to me, he doesn't need to swear fealty, he just needs to make an oath of help and friendship, that would be more than enough
all this crying and what not is ruining this story for me, its maddening, they are battle-hardened men and women, crying over every little thing? are you female by any chance? and why would he swear fealty to elendil if from what manwe has said jon will need to go and rule westeros after he has finished in middle-earth? it makes no sense to me, he doesn't need to swear fealty, he just needs to make an oath of help and friendship, that would be more than enough
9/5 c87 
4Michal.J.J.Badura
Polish
Historia nawet wciągająca chociaż wkurwia trochę harem. Ale wszystko inne nawet jest w porządku czekam na kolejny rozdział.
4Michal.J.J.BaduraPolish
Historia nawet wciągająca chociaż wkurwia trochę harem. Ale wszystko inne nawet jest w porządku czekam na kolejny rozdział.
5/20 c1 Robbler
I remember when you guys split up.
I actually thought you might write something less stupid than he did.
Seems I was wrong.
Again with the damn harem in LotR...
To disregard the cultures and backgrounds in such a way. I'm glad Tolkien won't have to witness this... butchery.
I remember when you guys split up.
I actually thought you might write something less stupid than he did.
Seems I was wrong.
Again with the damn harem in LotR...
To disregard the cultures and backgrounds in such a way. I'm glad Tolkien won't have to witness this... butchery.
4/13 c2 luffy1996
There's no way Margaery would call Ned Jon's father... This is a formal introduction of people to a Noble Lord that currently outranks her family.
There's no way Margaery would call Ned Jon's father... This is a formal introduction of people to a Noble Lord that currently outranks her family.
2/16 c87 Janny092
Reading this chapter has reminded me of the hate that I for this Jon, so many years of experience and wisdom accumulated and yet he is still shaking like a fucking greenhorn in their first battle. Grow a pair you fucking sissy!
Reading this chapter has reminded me of the hate that I for this Jon, so many years of experience and wisdom accumulated and yet he is still shaking like a fucking greenhorn in their first battle. Grow a pair you fucking sissy!
2/15 c1 blyat
dude you have to put Harem warning to this kind of thing because some people in this site dont like harem like me, this was good and well written but the harem is major turn off for me.
dude you have to put Harem warning to this kind of thing because some people in this site dont like harem like me, this was good and well written but the harem is major turn off for me.
2/15 c87 llimiter4
Sad and annoying how good this was and how well written you are early on. But honestly you killed it with glutinous unrealistic and unnecessary polygomy. Harems are like salt, its a garnish for flavor not the meat itself. 2-3 is fine but now youre just ruining your plot lines with filler sexcapades
Sad and annoying how good this was and how well written you are early on. But honestly you killed it with glutinous unrealistic and unnecessary polygomy. Harems are like salt, its a garnish for flavor not the meat itself. 2-3 is fine but now youre just ruining your plot lines with filler sexcapades