for Wolf of Numenor3/28/2021 c41 
2Mando'aMan1603
honest question, when will they start working back to westeros, at this point is seems like a year has passed if not more
2Mando'aMan1603honest question, when will they start working back to westeros, at this point is seems like a year has passed if not more
3/27/2021 c20 White Drive
Wtf is this chapter? it's all over the place and doesn't make sense. You need either a proofreader or just actually read what you wrote.
Wtf is this chapter? it's all over the place and doesn't make sense. You need either a proofreader or just actually read what you wrote.
3/27/2021 c26 Robbler
I like this Story, I truly do.
You are alright.
I won't lie and say you are outstanding but you are on a good way.
That being said, I will drop this story if it becomes a Harem.
I really don't like them.
Also 2 woman for Jon in Got/Asoiaf I can understand, but more than that and it just becomes unrealistic.
I am only writing this, because I think you are trying to send some discrete messages. If Not, I am sry.
It's just, this is not DxD, so please don't ruin it all with a protagonist who gets to fuck every woman on the Planet for no reason whatsoever.
Also: THIS IS NOT AN ABANDONEMENT THREAT.
I really want to make this clear.
I just wouldn't enjoy the harem and leave, but still wish you luck for the future.
:)
I like this Story, I truly do.
You are alright.
I won't lie and say you are outstanding but you are on a good way.
That being said, I will drop this story if it becomes a Harem.
I really don't like them.
Also 2 woman for Jon in Got/Asoiaf I can understand, but more than that and it just becomes unrealistic.
I am only writing this, because I think you are trying to send some discrete messages. If Not, I am sry.
It's just, this is not DxD, so please don't ruin it all with a protagonist who gets to fuck every woman on the Planet for no reason whatsoever.
Also: THIS IS NOT AN ABANDONEMENT THREAT.
I really want to make this clear.
I just wouldn't enjoy the harem and leave, but still wish you luck for the future.
:)
3/23/2021 c41 sami217
Imagine my pleasant surprise when waiting for the story to be updated at Ao3 for weeks and bam find that 5 chapters have come out already... Keep up the great work and when will see Jon and lalwen get it on hahahaha
Imagine my pleasant surprise when waiting for the story to be updated at Ao3 for weeks and bam find that 5 chapters have come out already... Keep up the great work and when will see Jon and lalwen get it on hahahaha
3/16/2021 c41 Guest
Nice chapter, interesting take on the valar on the value of men
Nice chapter, interesting take on the valar on the value of men
3/18/2021 c41 19Longclaw 1-6
Not much happened in this chapter, but I can see the buildup for Jon's next great adventure. Jon really should make honest women out of his lovers :)
Irime's decision to embrace her love for Jon is probably the biggest thing for long term.
19Longclaw 1-6Not much happened in this chapter, but I can see the buildup for Jon's next great adventure. Jon really should make honest women out of his lovers :)
Irime's decision to embrace her love for Jon is probably the biggest thing for long term.
3/16/2021 c41 Hitman
Ah shit... :/ zat reminds me, i have to kick za witch king out of minas morgul
Ah shit... :/ zat reminds me, i have to kick za witch king out of minas morgul
3/17/2021 c41 CeeLee
very nice, Jon's description on humans is so apt. Reminds me of that song by John Legend "All of you" the lyric "all your perfect imperfections"
very nice, Jon's description on humans is so apt. Reminds me of that song by John Legend "All of you" the lyric "all your perfect imperfections"
3/16/2021 c19 1Williams1996
Interesting was waiting for stuff from middle earth to be introduced great story so far
1Williams1996Interesting was waiting for stuff from middle earth to be introduced great story so far
3/11/2021 c40 Guest
Great story keep Up the good work
Great story keep Up the good work
3/13/2021 c40 19Longclaw 1-6
Well, if Jon ever is convinced to go back to Westeros to reclaim his throne, he'll have the support of the Dwarves, Elves, and now Men of Middle Earth.
Irime is hopelessly in love with Jon, this is certain. Unlike Arwen, she can't give up her immortality, so she's gonna have to decide if she's willing to embrace happiness for Jon's lifetime and live with the grief afterwards or to give him up and live forever with regret.
Sansa and Arya will likely be pursued by everyone in the kingdoms of men for marriage offers. Rhaella as well. While they know who they want, that won't mean people won't try
19Longclaw 1-6Well, if Jon ever is convinced to go back to Westeros to reclaim his throne, he'll have the support of the Dwarves, Elves, and now Men of Middle Earth.
Irime is hopelessly in love with Jon, this is certain. Unlike Arwen, she can't give up her immortality, so she's gonna have to decide if she's willing to embrace happiness for Jon's lifetime and live with the grief afterwards or to give him up and live forever with regret.
Sansa and Arya will likely be pursued by everyone in the kingdoms of men for marriage offers. Rhaella as well. While they know who they want, that won't mean people won't try