for Wolf of Numenor7/27/2022 c75 Guest
friend, the story is very good, we are finally reaching the part that I most hope for when they return to the west, the truth is that I do not remember if you have already eliminated the white walkers or if they are still going to face them, I hope they will face them but anyway if I can suggest (I don't know if it's too late but, you couldn't add val or igritte) I know you might not be able to but val was removed from the show if you could I'd be happy since she's my favorite character and I love when they put them on together but regardless of whether you add it or not, I like your story and will read it to the end
friend, the story is very good, we are finally reaching the part that I most hope for when they return to the west, the truth is that I do not remember if you have already eliminated the white walkers or if they are still going to face them, I hope they will face them but anyway if I can suggest (I don't know if it's too late but, you couldn't add val or igritte) I know you might not be able to but val was removed from the show if you could I'd be happy since she's my favorite character and I love when they put them on together but regardless of whether you add it or not, I like your story and will read it to the end
7/25/2022 c75 Janny092
The situations and events that are unfolding in Westeros are far more interesting in my opinion compare to what is happening in Middle Earth.
While I love our group of little misfits and rascals, but by the Emperor they are so boring compare to when they first started their journey to Middle Earth.
Everything the Main cast are doing right now are so boring and uninteresting for me, the only thing that excite when it comes to them are the fights and battles they wage even that is but a temporary despite before it becomes boring again.
Seriously I hate how the Main Casts talks, it is too formal and rigid, by the Emperor the way they talk reminds me too much of poems and by the Emperor I loathe poem with a passion.
Hope to see more soon and stay safe Author.
Peace!
The situations and events that are unfolding in Westeros are far more interesting in my opinion compare to what is happening in Middle Earth.
While I love our group of little misfits and rascals, but by the Emperor they are so boring compare to when they first started their journey to Middle Earth.
Everything the Main cast are doing right now are so boring and uninteresting for me, the only thing that excite when it comes to them are the fights and battles they wage even that is but a temporary despite before it becomes boring again.
Seriously I hate how the Main Casts talks, it is too formal and rigid, by the Emperor the way they talk reminds me too much of poems and by the Emperor I loathe poem with a passion.
Hope to see more soon and stay safe Author.
Peace!
7/25/2022 c75 Janny092
The situations and events that are unfolding in Westeros are far more interesting in my opinion compare to what is happening in Middle Earth.
While I love our group of little misfits and rascals, but by the Emperor they are so boring compare to when they first started their journey to Middle Earth.
Everything the Main cast are doing right now are so boring and uninteresting for me, the only thing that excite when it comes to them are the fights and battles they wage even that is but a temporary despite before it becomes boring again.
Seriously I hate how the Main Casts talks, it is too formal and rigid, by the Emperor the way they talk reminds me too much of poems and that is not a good thing because I loathe poem with my fiber of my being.
Hope to see more soon and stay safe Author.
Peace!
The situations and events that are unfolding in Westeros are far more interesting in my opinion compare to what is happening in Middle Earth.
While I love our group of little misfits and rascals, but by the Emperor they are so boring compare to when they first started their journey to Middle Earth.
Everything the Main cast are doing right now are so boring and uninteresting for me, the only thing that excite when it comes to them are the fights and battles they wage even that is but a temporary despite before it becomes boring again.
Seriously I hate how the Main Casts talks, it is too formal and rigid, by the Emperor the way they talk reminds me too much of poems and that is not a good thing because I loathe poem with my fiber of my being.
Hope to see more soon and stay safe Author.
Peace!
6/30/2022 c74 Janny092
I much prefer the conversation that happen between the Westerosi compare to the Main Cast and their group in Middle Earth.
Because for me the way how the Westrerosi conversation was structured was more reminiscent and almost the same how modern conversation goes, it makes for me natural to read and imagine how the this conversation is happening, and while with Jon and the others reminds me too much of old ways of talking, those that reminds how the old and disbanded nobility talks and times where conversations sounds and feels like too formal and restrictive, something not fit for the modern image or reminiscent of it.
For that it makes me want to wish hoping that Jon and the others go back to a more less formal ways of conversation before they became whatever this is.
Hope this arc finishes soon and their time in Westeros comes. As always stay safe and keep up the good work.
Peace!
I much prefer the conversation that happen between the Westerosi compare to the Main Cast and their group in Middle Earth.
Because for me the way how the Westrerosi conversation was structured was more reminiscent and almost the same how modern conversation goes, it makes for me natural to read and imagine how the this conversation is happening, and while with Jon and the others reminds me too much of old ways of talking, those that reminds how the old and disbanded nobility talks and times where conversations sounds and feels like too formal and restrictive, something not fit for the modern image or reminiscent of it.
For that it makes me want to wish hoping that Jon and the others go back to a more less formal ways of conversation before they became whatever this is.
Hope this arc finishes soon and their time in Westeros comes. As always stay safe and keep up the good work.
Peace!
6/30/2022 c74 E3roa
Hearts Bane not Hearts Bare. Also Joffrey Lannister you might well mention the incest born children of Cersei
Hearts Bane not Hearts Bare. Also Joffrey Lannister you might well mention the incest born children of Cersei
6/30/2022 c74 
1Hyokage
The story is gearing up to pick up the pace again. Nice! Looking forward to the updates but before that a few things.
Now that Arya has officially joined the fight, is it not time for the direwolves to reappear? You had a little update about them way back where they were mating and nothing since. It’s easier to let it slide with Jon because despite his Stark blood he is a Targaryen and his dragon companion has gone to battle with him numerous times.
The Direwolves are the same for the Starks. I think it would be a mistake to leave them out anymore now that Arya is officially a fighter. Arya can make a name for herself as a human warrior of great renown that appears in battle with her armored pack of direwolves. I do think Ghost should also come back to Jon as well. Ghost was his first companion. Sansa could probably use Lady as well to help add to her intimidation factor at court.
1HyokageThe story is gearing up to pick up the pace again. Nice! Looking forward to the updates but before that a few things.
Now that Arya has officially joined the fight, is it not time for the direwolves to reappear? You had a little update about them way back where they were mating and nothing since. It’s easier to let it slide with Jon because despite his Stark blood he is a Targaryen and his dragon companion has gone to battle with him numerous times.
The Direwolves are the same for the Starks. I think it would be a mistake to leave them out anymore now that Arya is officially a fighter. Arya can make a name for herself as a human warrior of great renown that appears in battle with her armored pack of direwolves. I do think Ghost should also come back to Jon as well. Ghost was his first companion. Sansa could probably use Lady as well to help add to her intimidation factor at court.
5/27/2022 c72 willgoodrich05
The story was so much more interesting when it
Was in the beginning. I love the relationship between Jon and margearg and I just wish you would have done something like Jon went to go fight for Robb and nor travel to middle earth.
The story was so much more interesting when it
Was in the beginning. I love the relationship between Jon and margearg and I just wish you would have done something like Jon went to go fight for Robb and nor travel to middle earth.
5/17/2022 c72 Janny092
The Final Battle of the Second Age is Finally here.
The tale of Middle Earth is coming to its final pages before its conclusion and the time of Salvation for the Outlands is upon us.
Finally this story is getting there, a few more and we are there. Hope that comes sooner than later.
The Final Battle of the Second Age is Finally here.
The tale of Middle Earth is coming to its final pages before its conclusion and the time of Salvation for the Outlands is upon us.
Finally this story is getting there, a few more and we are there. Hope that comes sooner than later.
4/28/2022 c71 Guest
I can’t wait for the Great Battle. Since Daenerys already has Merxes. Maybe now that Aegon VI is now king they should prove his legitimacy by using Dany’s 3 Dragons. I also can’t wait for the reaction of Houses Tully, Royce, Tyrell and Stark when they learn the truth about the World and the Old Gods.
I can’t wait for the Great Battle. Since Daenerys already has Merxes. Maybe now that Aegon VI is now king they should prove his legitimacy by using Dany’s 3 Dragons. I also can’t wait for the reaction of Houses Tully, Royce, Tyrell and Stark when they learn the truth about the World and the Old Gods.
4/27/2022 c51 Guest
You remember Rickon the youngest and forgettable Stark but forgot Robb Stark.
You remember Rickon the youngest and forgettable Stark but forgot Robb Stark.
4/26/2022 c71 Guest
*of House Targaryen of Houses Targaryen and Stark?
The Last Alliance is going to be sad since King Elendil and King Gil Galad will die. Isildur will defeat Sauron but the One Ring will corrupt him. Will Jon and those from Westeros return to their homeland?
*of House Targaryen of Houses Targaryen and Stark?
The Last Alliance is going to be sad since King Elendil and King Gil Galad will die. Isildur will defeat Sauron but the One Ring will corrupt him. Will Jon and those from Westeros return to their homeland?