11/10/2021 c63 MrMcNasty
Y'all KNOW that Jon's gonna be like: "Man, Shiera would love this Silmaril."
Y'all KNOW that Jon's gonna be like: "Man, Shiera would love this Silmaril."
11/6/2021 c63 Sandford9687
Please makes sure the gem or gems if he gets the other two in the future stay with jon yes show them to others he trusts to inspire and give them something to rally behind but please dont have him pass them off to someone else because he doesnt feel as if he deserves them.
Please makes sure the gem or gems if he gets the other two in the future stay with jon yes show them to others he trusts to inspire and give them something to rally behind but please dont have him pass them off to someone else because he doesnt feel as if he deserves them.
10/26/2021 c62 1Hyokage
Yesssss! Dragons! And she is determined to stay. Wonderful cause I’ve been getting tired of that bloody flying chicken that’s been ferrying them around for a while now.
This has made me curious though, what of Ghost and the other direwolves? Are they still around? It’s been 50 years. Have they established packs in the forests? Started families? Made legends of themselves among men and beasts?
Yesssss! Dragons! And she is determined to stay. Wonderful cause I’ve been getting tired of that bloody flying chicken that’s been ferrying them around for a while now.
This has made me curious though, what of Ghost and the other direwolves? Are they still around? It’s been 50 years. Have they established packs in the forests? Started families? Made legends of themselves among men and beasts?
9/26/2021 c30 ZZloth
I don't really like harem stories, they are unrealistic and wish fullfilling... I will just skip all the harem content altogether and won't flame it because it would be stating the obvious (that I don't like harems and think they are trash) because in all honesty everything else is good in my opinion.
My biased negative opinion on harems should not impact your decision to give this a try should you stumble upon this review.
Another thing is the grammar, the grammar is subpar and there is a lot of misswording and you have to interpret some things, maybe a 2/5 because it lessened my enjoyment of this.
This is good by my standards, I will keep reading this and recommend it.
Beware of pointless sex scenes and harem focus on some chapters.
I don't really like harem stories, they are unrealistic and wish fullfilling... I will just skip all the harem content altogether and won't flame it because it would be stating the obvious (that I don't like harems and think they are trash) because in all honesty everything else is good in my opinion.
My biased negative opinion on harems should not impact your decision to give this a try should you stumble upon this review.
Another thing is the grammar, the grammar is subpar and there is a lot of misswording and you have to interpret some things, maybe a 2/5 because it lessened my enjoyment of this.
This is good by my standards, I will keep reading this and recommend it.
Beware of pointless sex scenes and harem focus on some chapters.
9/8/2021 c23 This-Mickey-Seems-Iffy
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9/8/2021 c22 This-Mickey-Seems-Iffy
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9/8/2021 c1 This-Mickey-Seems-Iffy
Like it so far, however, may I ask where is the second story I would like to compare the two. Thanks.
Like it so far, however, may I ask where is the second story I would like to compare the two. Thanks.
9/7/2021 c59 Khavros
So is Jon like a 60 or 70 year old greybeard? curious about the time tbh but that could be me not paying enough attention to LOTR stuff lol. trying to figure out if Westeros will still be familiar faces or like Jon fighting their children lol.
So is Jon like a 60 or 70 year old greybeard? curious about the time tbh but that could be me not paying enough attention to LOTR stuff lol. trying to figure out if Westeros will still be familiar faces or like Jon fighting their children lol.
9/4/2021 c59 19Longclaw 1-6
Finally got this finished, and there are some thoughts.
Thinking that four decades is plenty enough to stay with the dwarves. Time for him to move back permanently with his women.
Vhagar I love. A perfect dragon for Jon, especially since she terrifies everyone. Need to see the other dragons as well.
I guffawed when Irime tossed away the pipe, and did so again when Jon said he had six pipes. He needs to find some hobbits or Gandalf to smoke with XD
Very happy Jon and Irime consummated their relationship. Now only four left to go till his harem is complete
Finally got this finished, and there are some thoughts.
Thinking that four decades is plenty enough to stay with the dwarves. Time for him to move back permanently with his women.
Vhagar I love. A perfect dragon for Jon, especially since she terrifies everyone. Need to see the other dragons as well.
I guffawed when Irime tossed away the pipe, and did so again when Jon said he had six pipes. He needs to find some hobbits or Gandalf to smoke with XD
Very happy Jon and Irime consummated their relationship. Now only four left to go till his harem is complete
9/1/2021 c59 xjm212x25
I get it that you have some grand plan for this story, but sometimes too much time spent on a subject can ruin a story. You have spent at least 20 chapters now in Middle Earth. This story doesn't feel like a Game of Thrones story now. It feels like a insert of characters from that universe into LOTR. Also five decades? That literally puts the entire cast into their 60s at the very least and not all of them are Numenorian or Elven. Loras and Robar are now old warriors that have no place on the battlefield. Westeros if they ever go back will be unrecognizable. Are the White Walkers also not a thing in this story because they would've steam rolled through Westeros by now?
I get it that you have some grand plan for this story, but sometimes too much time spent on a subject can ruin a story. You have spent at least 20 chapters now in Middle Earth. This story doesn't feel like a Game of Thrones story now. It feels like a insert of characters from that universe into LOTR. Also five decades? That literally puts the entire cast into their 60s at the very least and not all of them are Numenorian or Elven. Loras and Robar are now old warriors that have no place on the battlefield. Westeros if they ever go back will be unrecognizable. Are the White Walkers also not a thing in this story because they would've steam rolled through Westeros by now?
8/23/2021 c58 Jonerys2019
Didn't see the point of Jon's wild moment in the beginning. Seemed a disconnect
Jon's gotta consummate his relationships with Arya, Sansa, Rhaella, and his elves pretty soon. I love them all together :)
Didn't see the point of Jon's wild moment in the beginning. Seemed a disconnect
Jon's gotta consummate his relationships with Arya, Sansa, Rhaella, and his elves pretty soon. I love them all together :)