for Wolf of Numenor8/6/2021 c16 Ltbutterfly287
Honestly though given what occurred between Jon and margaery if you do try and form a relationship again it will only come off as forced.
Honestly though given what occurred between Jon and margaery if you do try and form a relationship again it will only come off as forced.
8/6/2021 c15 Ltbutterfly287
Honestly that dialogue between Jon and margaery left a lot to be desired. Especially because she didn’t need to do that, if she explained that if Jon stayed her grandmother would kill him then I’m pretty sure that she could have convinced him to leave.
Honestly that dialogue between Jon and margaery left a lot to be desired. Especially because she didn’t need to do that, if she explained that if Jon stayed her grandmother would kill him then I’m pretty sure that she could have convinced him to leave.
8/6/2021 c14 Ltbutterfly287
You’ve punched the loras and renly point to much. Their love for each other developed over years and right now renly and loras at best would see each other as lovers but wouldn’t have developed any significant bond with each other just because they’ve been having sex for less then a year.
You’ve punched the loras and renly point to much. Their love for each other developed over years and right now renly and loras at best would see each other as lovers but wouldn’t have developed any significant bond with each other just because they’ve been having sex for less then a year.
8/6/2021 c9 Ltbutterfly287
You honestly have put to much into Jamie wanting to put the bastard in his place. Jamie would have been impressed with Jon but would t any real opinion of him at this point in time.
You honestly have put to much into Jamie wanting to put the bastard in his place. Jamie would have been impressed with Jon but would t any real opinion of him at this point in time.
8/3/2021 c56 Jonerys2019
Aegon may still be kind and humble now, but not for longer with a Ring of Power.
Aegon may still be kind and humble now, but not for longer with a Ring of Power.
7/31/2021 c56 
5GodoftheSeas21
Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully we get back to Jon a company in in or soon. It was definitely good for the story to have the recent westeros chapters. And I hope the Martells side with Jon and rhaeneys over Aegon. And I wonder if Aegon is a blackfyre pretender or is he the real aegon
5GodoftheSeas21Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully we get back to Jon a company in in or soon. It was definitely good for the story to have the recent westeros chapters. And I hope the Martells side with Jon and rhaeneys over Aegon. And I wonder if Aegon is a blackfyre pretender or is he the real aegon
7/25/2021 c54 Guestprime
I've been reading this fic for sometime. It's very well done. You've done a great job blending these two Fandoms. Truly epic in scale.
Regarding this chapter, I think you're trying too hard to rehabilitate Margery. She made her choices long ago. Even if some duress was involved, she cared more for the throne than Jon. More importantly she hasn't gone on Jon's adventures with him. He's grown and changed so much, as to be unrecognizable. He's like a cross between Beowolf and Odysseus. Not mention him being a Targaryen prince , having dragons and the favor of the Valar, Eldar and Eru himself. Margery is still a small petty person, who hasn't changed or grown at all. How can she compete with the likes of Danny, Rhaenys, Shiera, let alone Lalwen? And Galadriel the greatest of the Eldar? Even Sansa and Arya have far out grown her. Ultimately she's like the girl in Sk8er Boi - someone who deserves to be left behind.
I hope you don't think my review too critical. I really do enjoy this fic.
PS Aegon, beware of strangers bearing gifts.
I've been reading this fic for sometime. It's very well done. You've done a great job blending these two Fandoms. Truly epic in scale.
Regarding this chapter, I think you're trying too hard to rehabilitate Margery. She made her choices long ago. Even if some duress was involved, she cared more for the throne than Jon. More importantly she hasn't gone on Jon's adventures with him. He's grown and changed so much, as to be unrecognizable. He's like a cross between Beowolf and Odysseus. Not mention him being a Targaryen prince , having dragons and the favor of the Valar, Eldar and Eru himself. Margery is still a small petty person, who hasn't changed or grown at all. How can she compete with the likes of Danny, Rhaenys, Shiera, let alone Lalwen? And Galadriel the greatest of the Eldar? Even Sansa and Arya have far out grown her. Ultimately she's like the girl in Sk8er Boi - someone who deserves to be left behind.
I hope you don't think my review too critical. I really do enjoy this fic.
PS Aegon, beware of strangers bearing gifts.
7/23/2021 c55 Jonerys2019
Pure pure evil. Rhaenys and Dany and Rhaella and Jon will be devastated that Egg is corrupted by the greatest evil on earth.
Pure pure evil. Rhaenys and Dany and Rhaella and Jon will be devastated that Egg is corrupted by the greatest evil on earth.
7/19/2021 c55 19Longclaw 1-6
Sauron... it's a testament to his power that he can take the shape of the most grotesque human alive and still persuade people to do his bidding.
19Longclaw 1-6Sauron... it's a testament to his power that he can take the shape of the most grotesque human alive and still persuade people to do his bidding.
7/19/2021 c55 Khavros
gotta say the last 4 chapters with westeros have been pretty jarring from the middle earth stuff. in some ways it feels like a big info dump to setup the next Jon Snow arc. disappointed that it seems well have to wait for more of his stuff. hopefully it'll be a timeskip to their departure/arrival at Westeros or Essos.
gotta say the last 4 chapters with westeros have been pretty jarring from the middle earth stuff. in some ways it feels like a big info dump to setup the next Jon Snow arc. disappointed that it seems well have to wait for more of his stuff. hopefully it'll be a timeskip to their departure/arrival at Westeros or Essos.
7/18/2021 c55 gabekaykwok
I got to say this MY GOD I DID NOT SEE HALF OF WHAT YOU JUST HAD SAURON DO IN THE EAST. I knew he would give a ring of power and help Aegon's attack on westeros I did not see him kill the faceless men and HE PLANS to bring creaters of Mordor to Westeros man I HAVE WANTED An West vs East sence in this story since i first read this fic I can wait to see it i mean YOU ARE AWESOME.
I really hope you have amazing reaction descriptions of all the westerosy on magic and monster when you show them. hahaha
I got to say this MY GOD I DID NOT SEE HALF OF WHAT YOU JUST HAD SAURON DO IN THE EAST. I knew he would give a ring of power and help Aegon's attack on westeros I did not see him kill the faceless men and HE PLANS to bring creaters of Mordor to Westeros man I HAVE WANTED An West vs East sence in this story since i first read this fic I can wait to see it i mean YOU ARE AWESOME.
I really hope you have amazing reaction descriptions of all the westerosy on magic and monster when you show them. hahaha