
12/5/2022 c49 beentheredoneitall
Elaine is literally Harry's hype man like when he's not feeling it she will make him feel it honestly
Elaine is literally Harry's hype man like when he's not feeling it she will make him feel it honestly
12/5/2022 c43 beentheredoneitall
I love how they both have different ideas and kind of argue about them to each other but they can always come to an understanding of some sort
I love how they both have different ideas and kind of argue about them to each other but they can always come to an understanding of some sort
12/5/2022 c43 beentheredoneitall
I don't know if it was an accident but notice how he didn't say the survival of Muggles and only said he cares about ensuring the survival and prospering of witches and wizards he didn't say Muggles once is she rubbing off on him? but I think if it was done purposely it's cool because she might take it as he doesn't care about Muggles.
I don't know if it was an accident but notice how he didn't say the survival of Muggles and only said he cares about ensuring the survival and prospering of witches and wizards he didn't say Muggles once is she rubbing off on him? but I think if it was done purposely it's cool because she might take it as he doesn't care about Muggles.
12/4/2022 c36 beentheredoneitall
is it just me or does she act like Tom Riddle's Cannon mom because if I'm not mistaken his mom was actually crazy and kidnapped their father to have him and it seems like she took on the traits
is it just me or does she act like Tom Riddle's Cannon mom because if I'm not mistaken his mom was actually crazy and kidnapped their father to have him and it seems like she took on the traits
12/4/2022 c30 beentheredoneitall
I would just say no and if she had such a big problem with it I would have left because as an adult she should recognize that that question made him uncomfortable in the first place and she did but she shouldn't push him anymore.
I would just say no and if she had such a big problem with it I would have left because as an adult she should recognize that that question made him uncomfortable in the first place and she did but she shouldn't push him anymore.
12/3/2022 c66 Himeragiyukina12
BUT DUMBLEDORE! BUT DUMBLEDORE! That's getting really fucking annoying. Harry does know that dumbledore is NOT his ally right? Like he's not that dumb, right? By virtue of his relationship alone, dumbledore would dislike him immensely. That being the case, why would he still be a dumbledore fanboy, especially when Dumbledore has mad ZERO moves to actually face Gindelwald, instead just wanking him because he POTENTIALLY could. Really frustrating. I know it's such a minor part of the story, it's just getting to me. Sorry for the rant.
BUT DUMBLEDORE! BUT DUMBLEDORE! That's getting really fucking annoying. Harry does know that dumbledore is NOT his ally right? Like he's not that dumb, right? By virtue of his relationship alone, dumbledore would dislike him immensely. That being the case, why would he still be a dumbledore fanboy, especially when Dumbledore has mad ZERO moves to actually face Gindelwald, instead just wanking him because he POTENTIALLY could. Really frustrating. I know it's such a minor part of the story, it's just getting to me. Sorry for the rant.
12/2/2022 c80 sadasdasda
Yeah something definitely happened when Harry went all tipsy during the fight with Grindlewald...Maybe theve both been brain fuckes by Elaine?
Yeah something definitely happened when Harry went all tipsy during the fight with Grindlewald...Maybe theve both been brain fuckes by Elaine?
12/1/2022 c80 LunaShadowWolf
intense and awesome chapter cant wait to see what happens next though i do have 2 questions will harry ever learn about the deal he made with death before his time comes 2nd question will harry ever talk with Elaine about his previous life or tbings like that?
intense and awesome chapter cant wait to see what happens next though i do have 2 questions will harry ever learn about the deal he made with death before his time comes 2nd question will harry ever talk with Elaine about his previous life or tbings like that?
11/29/2022 c67 Anon
I was waiting to write a review until I got closer to the end of the released chapters, but I just had to express my admiration for what you've done with this fiction. I think you really did something special with how you've written original characters. I often find myself put off, but it's just a testament for how well you've done that I sincerely like characters like Corene, Aster, and Reinhard.
Besides that, I can't believe Harry's facing his first real challenge at chapter 67, which makes me curious and anxious about what is coming in the future.
I suppose my initial complaint was how slow things seemed to be going in the beginning, but I recognize this isn't your typical power fantasy type of fan fiction. I especially enjoy your characterization of a crazy female Voldemort.
In any case, well done. I look forward to continue reading.
I was waiting to write a review until I got closer to the end of the released chapters, but I just had to express my admiration for what you've done with this fiction. I think you really did something special with how you've written original characters. I often find myself put off, but it's just a testament for how well you've done that I sincerely like characters like Corene, Aster, and Reinhard.
Besides that, I can't believe Harry's facing his first real challenge at chapter 67, which makes me curious and anxious about what is coming in the future.
I suppose my initial complaint was how slow things seemed to be going in the beginning, but I recognize this isn't your typical power fantasy type of fan fiction. I especially enjoy your characterization of a crazy female Voldemort.
In any case, well done. I look forward to continue reading.