for The Power of Love8/30/2024 c11 Fuck Names
Harry is so spineless and such a 'beta' male, tends to assume a passive or subservient role and is very much Riddle's bitch with small tantrums here and there. Tried this story two years ago and left for the same reason but given the summary, I'll try my best to reach 20 at least this time.
Harry is so spineless and such a 'beta' male, tends to assume a passive or subservient role and is very much Riddle's bitch with small tantrums here and there. Tried this story two years ago and left for the same reason but given the summary, I'll try my best to reach 20 at least this time.
6/28/2024 c19 lukeanimelover
You should just pretend your a orphan, and that you were pretending to have parents so people dont take advantage of you. Thats probably what a lot of people are expecting. Impersonating your “father” or “mother” will just make life more difficult.
You should just pretend your a orphan, and that you were pretending to have parents so people dont take advantage of you. Thats probably what a lot of people are expecting. Impersonating your “father” or “mother” will just make life more difficult.
6/25/2024 c18 lukeanimelover
This is honestly… fucking terrible. The only thing keeping me onto this fic is my curiousity of Riddles time and riddle herself. The “relationship” between harry and Riddle is terrible, the only reason harry hasnt just said “fuck it” and left was because of his sexual attraction to Riddle and him wanting to stop her from becoming voldemort, he doesnt even seem to like her personally. And then he was stupid enough to go on a date with another girl, even after the very obvious flirting from riddle. Even the other parts of the story just feel so lazy and a bit impulsive. Like, the idea of Slytherins Study was so poorly included that you can yell you just impulsively started writing about it, only thinking about details later. Its just annoying… ive read so many fanfics that theres not much left to read unless i go into the discontinued ones. I might have to branch out to a nee website if i dont find anything else to occupy my time… point is, the concept is good, Harry x fem riddle is only mildly disturbing and fucking hot with how you portrayed riddle as a possesive tsundere, its just that there isnt enough emotion in it, Harry seems half set on hating and mistrusting her, and the other half lusting after and trying to take her off the path of voldemort. We havent even seen them in class for ages, dumbledores practically up and left after there first meeting, even though one of harrys original objectives was to gain a close bond with him…. Im tired and have ranted a bit too much… sorry in advance if i offend you too much snd thanks for reading my review.
This is honestly… fucking terrible. The only thing keeping me onto this fic is my curiousity of Riddles time and riddle herself. The “relationship” between harry and Riddle is terrible, the only reason harry hasnt just said “fuck it” and left was because of his sexual attraction to Riddle and him wanting to stop her from becoming voldemort, he doesnt even seem to like her personally. And then he was stupid enough to go on a date with another girl, even after the very obvious flirting from riddle. Even the other parts of the story just feel so lazy and a bit impulsive. Like, the idea of Slytherins Study was so poorly included that you can yell you just impulsively started writing about it, only thinking about details later. Its just annoying… ive read so many fanfics that theres not much left to read unless i go into the discontinued ones. I might have to branch out to a nee website if i dont find anything else to occupy my time… point is, the concept is good, Harry x fem riddle is only mildly disturbing and fucking hot with how you portrayed riddle as a possesive tsundere, its just that there isnt enough emotion in it, Harry seems half set on hating and mistrusting her, and the other half lusting after and trying to take her off the path of voldemort. We havent even seen them in class for ages, dumbledores practically up and left after there first meeting, even though one of harrys original objectives was to gain a close bond with him…. Im tired and have ranted a bit too much… sorry in advance if i offend you too much snd thanks for reading my review.
6/25/2024 c11 Antianti12
Why make your Harry so beta and subservient? And what's up with all these girls why have him flirt with everyone? I doubt riddle would tolerate that, but I'm gonna drop this fiction it's hard to read a weak mc who does nothing but act like a dog listening to his master.
Why make your Harry so beta and subservient? And what's up with all these girls why have him flirt with everyone? I doubt riddle would tolerate that, but I'm gonna drop this fiction it's hard to read a weak mc who does nothing but act like a dog listening to his master.
6/25/2024 c8 Antianti12
How strong are you making her to just snatch his wand so easily? That was kinda annoying your harry seems so meek and weak.
How strong are you making her to just snatch his wand so easily? That was kinda annoying your harry seems so meek and weak.
6/12/2024 c116 Dan Farris
Now, this is a problematic yet expected CLIFFHANGER!
Now, this is a problematic yet expected CLIFFHANGER!
6/11/2024 c116 Guest
You have completely lost my interest. The last twenty chapters or so have been entirely pointless. Can we move on from this stupid plot and finally have Harry realize all the bad things Elaine has done to him?
You have completely lost my interest. The last twenty chapters or so have been entirely pointless. Can we move on from this stupid plot and finally have Harry realize all the bad things Elaine has done to him?
6/11/2024 c116 TertiusArmada
I’m a bit tired of Elaine Croft, Tomb Raider. This is easily the fifth or so rendition of the same theme. I know Horcrux hunting is difficult, but please speed up the story. At least have Elaine and Harry talk about Voldemort. It’s been long enough. I’m still not convinced Harry isn’t either potioned or mind controlled. Wasn’t there a plot thread where he took weird potions and went unconscious for a while? Did he forget to distrust anything around him? Please address these issues.
I’m a bit tired of Elaine Croft, Tomb Raider. This is easily the fifth or so rendition of the same theme. I know Horcrux hunting is difficult, but please speed up the story. At least have Elaine and Harry talk about Voldemort. It’s been long enough. I’m still not convinced Harry isn’t either potioned or mind controlled. Wasn’t there a plot thread where he took weird potions and went unconscious for a while? Did he forget to distrust anything around him? Please address these issues.
5/25/2024 c17 
1Dekiru Grindelwald
Holy shit, Harry is so fucking useless and has no back bone. This fic is ruined because of him
1Dekiru GrindelwaldHoly shit, Harry is so fucking useless and has no back bone. This fic is ruined because of him
5/25/2024 c10 Dekiru Grindelwald
Lmao, speaking of muggles like they are below them. One atomic bomb and they're done for.
Lmao, speaking of muggles like they are below them. One atomic bomb and they're done for.
5/25/2024 c6 Dekiru Grindelwald
Maybe Riddle can feel his magic or something? That's why she's being so touchy with him, his magic probably feels good
Maybe Riddle can feel his magic or something? That's why she's being so touchy with him, his magic probably feels good