for Just Built Different10/21/2021 c5 RandomReader
There is absolutely no need to put out "warnings" about specific types of sexual content. An appropriate rating and general notice about sexual content in the summary is enough. Don't get pressured by homophobic/transphobic/everyone-who-is-not-like-them-phobic hatemongers.
Beyond the rules of it is not your responsibility to deal with things some readers might not like, it's theirs. It's dont like, don't read, case closed. If they try to push any repsonsibility for their own sensitivities upon you, RESIST.
Case in point:
Scenes that "make any straight mal gag" ...well dear fellow reviewer, it's your responsibility to deal with it. Nothing there made me gag, because I am not just a male, I am also a man, i.e. grown up. If you are not prepared for this, stick to stories of a lower rating.
There is absolutely no need to put out "warnings" about specific types of sexual content. An appropriate rating and general notice about sexual content in the summary is enough. Don't get pressured by homophobic/transphobic/everyone-who-is-not-like-them-phobic hatemongers.
Beyond the rules of it is not your responsibility to deal with things some readers might not like, it's theirs. It's dont like, don't read, case closed. If they try to push any repsonsibility for their own sensitivities upon you, RESIST.
Case in point:
Scenes that "make any straight mal gag" ...well dear fellow reviewer, it's your responsibility to deal with it. Nothing there made me gag, because I am not just a male, I am also a man, i.e. grown up. If you are not prepared for this, stick to stories of a lower rating.
10/14/2021 c2 WilliamAD
Guest: It doesn't have to be fear to call it homophobia, because you seem to have a big dislike for gay people. And what about you, what are you doing here reading fanfiction like the rest of us? Oh wait, that's because you're also living in a fantasy like everyone else. Why? Is your life that shitty enough to insult a fanfiction that did nothing you or is it just because you hate it? Well, tough shit dude, cause nobody cares your homophobic comment.
Also, work on your insult better, let us know if you come up with something more creative you sack up early package horseshit.
Guest: It doesn't have to be fear to call it homophobia, because you seem to have a big dislike for gay people. And what about you, what are you doing here reading fanfiction like the rest of us? Oh wait, that's because you're also living in a fantasy like everyone else. Why? Is your life that shitty enough to insult a fanfiction that did nothing you or is it just because you hate it? Well, tough shit dude, cause nobody cares your homophobic comment.
Also, work on your insult better, let us know if you come up with something more creative you sack up early package horseshit.
8/14/2021 c1 
3Kitsune Obsessed Freak
I'm just going to say. If your story has slash or even normal sex in it like I'm hearing from others here, you should mention that in your summary. It's not fun for someone like me to find out part way through a story that you're character is fucking other characters that any straight men will gag at. No offense, just throw up a warning in the summary dude
3Kitsune Obsessed FreakI'm just going to say. If your story has slash or even normal sex in it like I'm hearing from others here, you should mention that in your summary. It's not fun for someone like me to find out part way through a story that you're character is fucking other characters that any straight men will gag at. No offense, just throw up a warning in the summary dude
8/12/2021 c4 Guest
Good story
Good story
8/7/2021 c4 TrannySewersider
Faggot trannies write fanfiction to live out their fantasies because it is the only place they will be accepted kkkkkkkk. You will join the 50% courtesy of Derek Chauvin. Good premise but ruined by faggotry.
Phobia? Why would I be afraid..of a faggot? kkkkkkk. Natural disgust of faggots is good and no amount of gaslighting will change that. Please delete yourself immediately so we can save the trouble of keeping kids away from you subhuman scum.
Faggot trannies write fanfiction to live out their fantasies because it is the only place they will be accepted kkkkkkkk. You will join the 50% courtesy of Derek Chauvin. Good premise but ruined by faggotry.
Phobia? Why would I be afraid..of a faggot? kkkkkkk. Natural disgust of faggots is good and no amount of gaslighting will change that. Please delete yourself immediately so we can save the trouble of keeping kids away from you subhuman scum.
7/30/2021 c4 WilliamAD
Sneed ChuckSuck: Dude this is a fanfic. No need to get all sour-face and all. Just admit it, you just hate gay people but that doesn't make them give a fuck about your complaints. Now go be a good homophobe and watch Barbie with your prick on your hand.
Sneed ChuckSuck: Dude this is a fanfic. No need to get all sour-face and all. Just admit it, you just hate gay people but that doesn't make them give a fuck about your complaints. Now go be a good homophobe and watch Barbie with your prick on your hand.
7/30/2021 c4 WilliamAD
I'm in love with this fanfic! Seriously, I love this fanfic so much I could practically feel vibrating from excitement. Thanks for making fanfic like this so much, I needed some excitement in my quarantined life.
I'm in love with this fanfic! Seriously, I love this fanfic so much I could practically feel vibrating from excitement. Thanks for making fanfic like this so much, I needed some excitement in my quarantined life.
7/23/2021 c4 1ArchAngel319
Thanks again Pokeya for another amazing chapter. I Still love how this story is turning out. Usually multi crossovers are never fun to read due to compatibility issues with timelines and such which I want to saw kind of breaks the immersion of the story but with this story you've somehow meshed the ME and Halo universes together without too much problem and I love it. I also love the quick wit dialog and personality of Max so far and the fact that he's pulling a James T. Kirk on every species and gender so far in the story is fun to read about. Hopefully he'll get some of the Sangheli booty soon. lol. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
1ArchAngel319Thanks again Pokeya for another amazing chapter. I Still love how this story is turning out. Usually multi crossovers are never fun to read due to compatibility issues with timelines and such which I want to saw kind of breaks the immersion of the story but with this story you've somehow meshed the ME and Halo universes together without too much problem and I love it. I also love the quick wit dialog and personality of Max so far and the fact that he's pulling a James T. Kirk on every species and gender so far in the story is fun to read about. Hopefully he'll get some of the Sangheli booty soon. lol. Good luck with your next chapter, and as always have fun writing.
7/23/2021 c2 Guest
The whole premise about MAx being super intelligent is a bad move on your part, since your OC doesn't act like it. He rather acts like an average teenage dude (you?) with mid-level intellect for that age group. To imagine a truly super intelligent being you need to have far above average intelligence yourself. You might not be a drooling vegetable, but you're no genius either, so you will never be able to accurately model a genius' behaviour.
If you want a gary stu power trip, give him some other super powers and be done with it.
The genophage cure and other feats happen "off-screen", because we get no details, so they don't count.
The whole premise about MAx being super intelligent is a bad move on your part, since your OC doesn't act like it. He rather acts like an average teenage dude (you?) with mid-level intellect for that age group. To imagine a truly super intelligent being you need to have far above average intelligence yourself. You might not be a drooling vegetable, but you're no genius either, so you will never be able to accurately model a genius' behaviour.
If you want a gary stu power trip, give him some other super powers and be done with it.
The genophage cure and other feats happen "off-screen", because we get no details, so they don't count.
7/22/2021 c4 Guest
Sneedchucksuck or whatever I think you just took the cake for most hateful thing said on the internet so far.
Sneedchucksuck or whatever I think you just took the cake for most hateful thing said on the internet so far.
7/22/2021 c4 Sneed ChuckSuck
You will never be a real woman. You have no womb, you have no ovaries, you have no eggs. You are a homosexual man twisted by drugs and surgery into a crude mockery of nature’s perfection.
All the “validation” you get is two-faced and half-hearted. Behind your back people mock you. Your parents are disgusted and ashamed of you, your “friends” laugh at your ghoulish appearance behind closed doors.
Men are utterly repulsed by you. Thousands of years of evolution have allowed men to sniff out frauds with incredible efficiency. Even trannies who “pass” look uncanny and unnatural to a man. Your bone structure is a dead giveaway. And even if you manage to get a drunk guy home with you, he’ll turn tail and bolt the second he gets a whiff of your diseased, infected axe wound.
You will never be happy. You wrench out a fake smile every single morning and tell yourself it’s going to be ok, but deep inside you feel the depression creeping up like a weed, ready to crush you under the unbearable weight.
Eventually it’ll be too much to bear - you’ll buy a rope, tie a noose, put it around your neck, and plunge into the cold abyss. Your parents will find you, heartbroken but relieved that they no longer have to live with the unbearable shame and disappointment. They’ll bury you with a headstone marked with your birth name, and every passerby for the rest of eternity will know a man is buried there. Your body will decay and go back to the dust, and all that will remain of your legacy is a skeleton that is unmistakably male.
This is your fate. This is what you chose. There is no turning back.
You will never be a real woman. You have no womb, you have no ovaries, you have no eggs. You are a homosexual man twisted by drugs and surgery into a crude mockery of nature’s perfection.
All the “validation” you get is two-faced and half-hearted. Behind your back people mock you. Your parents are disgusted and ashamed of you, your “friends” laugh at your ghoulish appearance behind closed doors.
Men are utterly repulsed by you. Thousands of years of evolution have allowed men to sniff out frauds with incredible efficiency. Even trannies who “pass” look uncanny and unnatural to a man. Your bone structure is a dead giveaway. And even if you manage to get a drunk guy home with you, he’ll turn tail and bolt the second he gets a whiff of your diseased, infected axe wound.
You will never be happy. You wrench out a fake smile every single morning and tell yourself it’s going to be ok, but deep inside you feel the depression creeping up like a weed, ready to crush you under the unbearable weight.
Eventually it’ll be too much to bear - you’ll buy a rope, tie a noose, put it around your neck, and plunge into the cold abyss. Your parents will find you, heartbroken but relieved that they no longer have to live with the unbearable shame and disappointment. They’ll bury you with a headstone marked with your birth name, and every passerby for the rest of eternity will know a man is buried there. Your body will decay and go back to the dust, and all that will remain of your legacy is a skeleton that is unmistakably male.
This is your fate. This is what you chose. There is no turning back.
6/7/2021 c3 acslayer98
Yooo. This shit is fucking top tier. A fresh take and style on a story that has overdone tropes for years. I eager await the future chapters to come
Yooo. This shit is fucking top tier. A fresh take and style on a story that has overdone tropes for years. I eager await the future chapters to come
5/12/2021 c2 WilliamAD
And also I apologize for all those cursed words but I couldn't help but relaliate in return for the suicide threat. I don't wanna see someone killing theirselves in my life again.
And also I apologize for all those cursed words but I couldn't help but relaliate in return for the suicide threat. I don't wanna see someone killing theirselves in my life again.