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5/12/2021 c1 WilliamAD
xxtanzeelxxFuck off, asshole. Your entire bloodline is probably filled with shit. It's a miracle you're still alive after those genetic defects of yours. Hopefully, you'll hold on to life because I'm going to enjoy crushing your pathetic existence.

Go fuck yourself and mind your own bussiness because we don't have time for your complaints, you shit-stained piss of crap.
5/12/2021 c3 WilliamAD
My God. I love this fanfic. . . I love everything in this fanfic and honestly, this is probably my favourite one right now cause waking in a universe with Halo and Mass Effect together, It's practically a dream come true.

And also the tidbit of having sex with aliens is a bonus, bisexuality rules!
5/12/2021 c1 WilliamAD
Man, I think I just literally blown my mind off! This fanfic is amazing! This is by far the greatest chapter I've read in Fanfiction. And it's only the first chapter! XD
4/22/2021 c3 Guest
he better clap some sangheili cheeks
4/20/2021 c1 PhoenixGuy
I guess he's just built different
4/20/2021 c3 Guest
So basically you stated at the beginning of the chapter that he was originally supposed to be just a normal person or a bit more intelligent and personally I think that both of those would have fit far better in this story than your final decision and would really help us even more if he was normal as we could see the struggle and challenges of someone in that situation.
4/19/2021 c3 Boring
Gary Tsu
4/18/2021 c3 SirMaou
so your one of those that humans are just dumb but aliens are great?
4/18/2021 c3 1ArchAngel319
Thanks Pokeya for another great chapter. Good l8uck with the next one, and as always have fun writing.
4/18/2021 c3 3kamikage86
What is Max is height, please add that to his stats, please?
4/18/2021 c2 xxtanzeelxx
Shitfic.
Kill yourself faggot.
Delete this gay ass shit stupid mother fucker.
Your mom is a junkyard whore who isn't even worth my 5 cents.
3/8/2021 c2 DaggerTwo
Definitely an eye catching story my friend! keep up the excellent work.
2/27/2021 c2 Jonnywoods88
You’re an idiot.
1/17/2021 c2 scyfly
why does he wants to help the turian that assaulted him?

you know i dont mind the power trip but your whole plot is just ridiculous. it he traveled dimensions how then did they know about what happened to him...

his crossover is also fucked up. the differences in tech in history is so much that you cannot just skip straight to the reapers. further more, one super human cannot make a difference against the reapers in such a short time. you are not the only person to fail to understand this though. besides with halo tech adjusted for logical progress the reapers wouldnt be all that tough.

nice try but the whole coma and waking up in an almagation really turned me off
1/17/2021 c1 scyfly
what max is capable of is simply biological impossible, science wouldnt allow to it. no matter how strong and big you are you cant poke holes in metal with your bare fingers. bone skin and mussle would tear before that happens
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